I Can Get Stuck in a World Bug Every Day

I can only say that it is a bit human-like. I became addicted after reading Chapter 25. I was very happy with the use of the eraser. One of the negative effects was the biggest concept item in the early stage. The writing was too petty. I thought the title of the book was invincible. But it turned out that the so-called bug eraser made me endure the bad habit of wiping it out the first time. It was experimental. I wiped it out the second time. I've skipped the mask, it's just a small prop. It's the third time I'm helping others erase negative effects. Is this a light novel that lowers your intelligence? You might as well write that the bug of the day is a King of Glory purification skill. I haven't seen the big effect at all. I suggest you change the title of the book and give a special message every day. Anyway, I don't see many bugs in your bug.

Do you know what a BUG is? Is what you write about a BUG? What you write is all rubbish. You still have the nerve to call it this name. Please change the name. Just call it. I pick up one piece of rubbish every day.

Author, why is no one speaking in your comment section? No one even commented on the chapter comments in the novel🙂 Your novel has a lot of minor flaws. It is neither poisonous nor exciting. I can only say this. In the first half of your novel, since I read the first chapter, I have basically not seen any interesting plots. Your novel is too bland, and some are not exciting enough. For example, the first plot of meeting the villain is the lucky villain. This is a very cool plot. You killed him on the spot to avenge your friend, but you didn't write that your friend stood up for your sister and was blinded, but you were unable to do anything 🙂 Although you did let him drown and feel it, it still didn't kill him. In short, it was not refreshing enough, and it felt awkward. It was not refreshing enough, awkward, and bland enough. Your novel is also amazing 😁

Author, have you ever thought about it? The country where the protagonist is located can react immediately and maintain social order. As a result, at this juncture, you wrote a person with dual abilities and serious violent tendencies, and he has already taken substantial actions. Instead, those people began to turn big things into small things. Don't you think this is very fragmented? Could it be that his luck can affect the decision-making people above him? Isn't he S-class?

It's so boring. I want the time traveler to be prophetic, but I don't write it. It's vague here, I take it for granted, and I can't have fun writing the concept.

The title of the invincible article, the conceptual beginning, is unfortunately too petty. The imagination is too small. If the imagination is bigger, the protagonist will be invincible before the college entrance examination. As a result, anyone who pops up now can fight the protagonist twice. It feels good but not so good.

Doesn't the author himself know what he wrote? You have become an immortal by cultivating yourself, but you can still be bullied by others on earth or in a small world. You only know hand-to-hand combat and don't know any magical powers.

It's really a bit lame, with serious glitches and an inexplicable plot. Obviously the beginning is okay, writing about daily life and talking about love, Qingqing Little Weird would fit your plot, right?

Brother, your setting is good But your plot is not good First of all, you have to set the tone of your novel You start with a light-hearted novel, and then a rapist comes Another female pervert comes Don't write black and cruel Then what kind of force robs and kills What kind of store loan sharks I don't know how to complain about you First of all, the country does not belong to one person It is impossible to trample on the law for a so-called potential stock Especially what you are clearly writing about is domestic Even if it is foreign, this kind of thing cannot be put on the surface And then the female pervert. People with real backgrounds will not go to the front line at all Especially such a pervert. Do you go to the front line to make a feud with the family? There are still forces to kill and rob. Brother, are you funny? Such a major security incident happened The whole world is directly involved in the military. You have the ability to do this kind of thing. I don't have the ability to report it and cry and exaggerate the truth. You can continue writing for another month I guarantee you will fight hard If you are a novice, you can only be considered average and need to polish the plot If you are an extraterrestrial demon, then you are not suitable for this platform Your writing method is very problematic

The novel is difficult to describe in one sentence, and the logic of the protagonist's behavior is inconsistent with ordinary people's behavior.

The first few pictures are very creative, but it's a pity that the writing is a mess. Please practice more.

It's written in a messy way, and it's very sudden, and I can't help but notice it at a glance.

Encourage each other.

Is the novel inspired by Teacher One's bug eagle?

It's obviously such a big hang-up, but it's just ugly. I'm expecting the new bug to be powerful, but I also know that the bug written by the author will definitely not be strong, and the protagonist still has to suffer. It's just so confusing.

I only saw the second chapter and didn't want to watch anymore I can only say that it is not interesting and not attractive, especially the protagonist's way of dealing with things is very childish. Chapter 2 You can see it from the eraser. Normal adults encounter this kind of cheat, and the use of the first cheat is the most critical. In the initial stage, shouldn't you try to see if the cheat is regular? For example, erasing conceptual things, such as your physical defects, or if you want to write something interesting, borrowing an online loan and then erasing the debt or something is better than erasing a dumbbell directly. No attraction. Especially for this type of cheats, readers generally want to see all kinds of imaginative and interesting ways to use cheats, rather than straightforward, dull operations that even children know how to do, or rather, children have ideas. This will make your novel seem too bland and unattractive, and of course it will lose votes. In the end, I hope it will get better and better.

Not happy, why does someone have to be able to overwhelm the protagonist? Is this ability used to defeat him?

Before Chapter 14, the setting was interesting, but the writing was a bit poor. After Chapter 14, it's hard to evaluate.

Did you buy the outline of this novel?

If nothing else, the author has a very good attitude, but the data is not relevant.

Indeed, I was poisoned to death after reading Chapter 25 and couldn't stand it anymore. Again, the setting of this book is very good, and the problems are written by the author. Anyway, there are all kinds of pitfalls. Just like the author said at the beginning, I have stepped on all the traps anyway. There are all kinds of poisonous spots. All I can say is that I hope the author's next book will be better.

Let me ask, has the protagonist of this novel never read Journey to the West?

The logic of the novel is a bit messy, the development is really strange, and the character descriptions are rubbish. But keep writing it

After reading part of it, I found that the protagonist has a good outlook on life, and the eraser can save people, but there is a reason, or the protagonist is portrayed as righteous and kind. Your biggest problem is the conflict of characters, but the subject matter is okay. It can be much better to avoid such conflicts when writing this subject matter. And the relationship between men and women is so wonderful. Many male authors can't write it well. So, they basically just have a childhood heroine and don't describe it very much. It needs to be done.