Huaizuo Xingchen: My Birthmark Connects to the Stars

First of all, it is very similar to AI writing because there are too many modifiers. Second, pay attention to the paragraphing. Even a period has to be broken. Because without line breaks, the text is crowded together and the first impression is not good. Of course, the plot is very good and attracts attention from the beginning. Come on.

👍👍👍Write on quickly

The wind in the morning is very light, good morning! Today, I should also go for my love with a good mood~

Reading, support support support

24 Collections, IMHO, the probability is smaller than mine 😁

"The world is too noisy, so be quiet."

Support each other! Come on!

I have read two chapters. From a reader's perspective, the chapter names are too gorgeous, and it can also be said that they are a bit inconsistent with the main text. The content is still... Ok, I will add a bookshelf first, and I will slowly read it later. Finally, I would like to suggest that you change the title, which is also the chapter name. It is too long, too dazzling, and a bit overwhelming.

Good grass! Why isn't it popular?

The author, I feel like there could be more interesting psychological descriptions. This would make the plot less tense and the characters more three-dimensional. Hahahaha, it's just a small idea, not a suggestion 😁😁