Panlong: My Automatic On-Hook Training System

A reskinned novel with a Coiling Dragon. Except for the Magnolia Continent, everything else has nothing to do with the Coiling Dragon 😐. There is no attribute affinity, no mystical understanding, nothing, only a poor title description, a blank slate to add the protagonist's attribute system, no element affinity, only the system's inferior qualifications 😥

In a world view like Panlong's where soul searching and servitude is like drinking water, how do you plan to develop in a place like the Magnolia Plane where the vigilance of the main god is full? At the same time, the timeline is still so close to the original work. How can we keep up with the development of Lin Lei, the original genius protagonist, without resorting to big tricks? If you want to engage in business and farming development, it is better to create an original initial plane and extend the time line at the same time.

Cultivation setting is above water, system setting is above water, title setting is above water, qualification improvement is above water, it's all in water

The plot that explains this and that is completely untouched As a time traveler, I don't know how to use the system. It seems that I am a suture monster of the family system + power system. I don't know how to find women myself. I can give birth to a few saints. I am still reserved and strong. After reading it, it is at the level of an average fan.

At least you should know about Duke Bozinan, he keeps talking about earl title and marquis title hahaha

Panlong is not suitable because the pace is too slow

It's too long-winded. The whole article is just explaining the actual content without much explanation.

Shanren gave me a personal suggestion before. When writing a fanfic, try not to make up second settings. Even if you add a second setting, you should try to make reasonable guesses based on the original text. Don't just set whatever you want. Anyway, my personal habit is that even a fan who pastes the original text in a large space is better than a fan who often makes up unreasonable assumptions. It is best to read the original article twice more, slowly, and leave a bookmark when encountering relevant settings so that you can find it at any time later. Don't write based on your impressions from reading it before, and then quickly read the original text before writing it, and don't go to Baidu or Tieba to look for the setting and plot.

There is a bottleneck in AFK cultivation, 99% of the time is stuck, fun Where does the pdd system come from?

It's too confusing, and I haven't written it clearly yet. After reading eight chapters, I still don't understand how to practice on-hook, and what is the algorithm for automatically increasing experience points after being on-hook. The author has no experience writing systematic articles at all

Write less about the setting. The more you write, the more loopholes you will find. Readers who have read the original work will find it more annoying. The water is not that watery.

It feels too wordy

Do you know what hanging up is? You can't read, right?

Come on, but I personally feel that this kind of family development flow is not suitable for Panlong.

The water is endless, you are simply the supreme god of the water system 😅

Too much nonsense, no fun

How many updates a day? The fanfic you wrote is not a new book.

The sauce is here, the author is here to cheer you up, feed him fried dumplings, fried soybean noodles, warm noodles with scallion oil, fried dumplings, and egg custard, yah yah!

A lower god, just go to the region? Is it uncomfortable to practice in space?

You are a person who hangs up the system and is not living in Magnolia Continent. Why are you running around? ?

Eunuch 🙄🙄🙄