Immortal!

One thing I don't understand is that you have become such a god, why can't you ask Heaven to create your own method? Isn't it good to practice alone to extend your life? You can also enlighten ghosts and mortals as guides, create realms, perfect the method of cultivating immortals, become Taoist ancestors, and mess up the chess game, but in the end, they have to deliberately cause conflicts and lead to plots.

You have already become an immortal, but you still want everything. Kill this, this, and that every day to seize treasures. How can you become an immortal?

The rest of the story is actually pretty good, but the protagonist in the first few chapters seems to have been tricked. I have a lot of money, but I focus on scientific research and continue it for decades. It feels like the old man has cast a spell on the protagonist's soul in order to make the follow-up plan smooth. After all, under normal circumstances, just throwing money at it will destroy the road. However, that section was the only one that made people unhappy. Later, the old man directly asked the protagonist to use divine powers in divination and turned on the refreshing mode.

In the past few chapters, whether you want to slay a fox demon or subdue it, Yang Shen, a master of spiritual practice, has to grind through several chapters and talk a lot, not to mention that there is a sword pill beside him that has been polished by an expert for many years and has become spiritually transformable. It is really like water flooding the golden mountain.

The previous writing was good, but the last few chapters have been too watery.

Asking the Way of Heaven is not up to par with the author's writing. No matter what happens, he asks the Way of Heaven. The divination powers obtained by the protagonist are just decorations.

Dry food, pretentious writing style

The front is okay, but the plot behind is really hard to describe

Maybe the name "Wen Xian" is more appropriate. It is a very strange story. The protagonist has a super intelligence trap that can divine everything and is basically omniscient 🙂 However, if this trap is used well, it is not much different from omnipotence. I don't know if the author can control the rhythm of the plot.

The writing is good, but Goldfinger is a bit too strong. In the mid-term, the combat power may collapse and I won't be able to continue writing. Let's think about how to balance it.

I watched the video. The style in the video is a bit like the travel anecdotes of calico cats. The track is small and there are few choices, which is good. It is recommended that the author come back and continue writing, but he must persist in writing. The last one who had a bad mentality collapsed, such as the one who wrote the book of hundreds of generations. It was clear that he could continue writing, but ended hastily due to many reasons.

Never closed it 🙂

The setting of this book is very good, but the author's writing skills are too poor. There is no fairy flavor at all.

It's better to write fan works about mortals' cultivation of immortality, mainly animations, classical cultivation of immortality and underworld cultivation of immortality

It's very fairy-like 👍, and has a certain similarity with Lanke's style, but it's a different approach, refreshing and unique, and it's expected to become a masterpiece!

Although the male protagonist is not as good as the Virgin Mary, there is no difference.

This author has a fairy-tale flavor and you are doubting yourself. You really have no talent.

I think the author worked very hard! The writing is not bad, the writing style is good, almost on par with my works! Highly recommended! 👍My work is highly recommended +999…

Author, don't worry about others. I enjoyed it. Can you please add more?

What about the little carp? Where is Chapter 67? Come out and say it

I ask about the way of heaven every day and I don't even know it

If you don't know how to write, just read about business war or something like that. When you pull the switch on the opposite side, you can metaphorically say a curse or someone pretending to be a ghost because they don't know Taoism, but actually bribe their waiter to do it.

I don't know why you use magic weapons and magical powers every day? Do good deeds and spread the Dharma. Preach the Dharma to help farmers.

If I can't understand you and don't insist on writing, you really have no talent.