Blackfire Legacy

The writing is okay, but to put it bluntly, the timeline is very messy. It's fine to jump back occasionally, but jumping back and forth frequently really hurts your score. There are also many long paragraphs without any spaces. It's very tiring to read and I don't want to read it carefully.

Brother, you've hidden it quite deeply 😰. I usually search for Game of Thrones or Ice and Fire, but I didn't find this one 😁😁

Dear readers who have always supported "Legacy of Black Fire": First of all, please allow me to say my heartfelt thanks. It is your every click and every patient reading that allows me to always feel that there is a light ahead of me on this sometimes lonely road of creation. The character of Daeron Blackfyre has reached this point not so much because I am writing his destiny, but because we are watching and pushing him together, struggling step by step in the storm of the Narrow Sea and the chess game of Westeros. Today, with everyone's support, I finally fulfilled a small promise to myself and everyone: for thirty consecutive days, I will update no less than 3,000 words every day. During this process, I experienced Kavin's anxiety and the joy of having an idea, but most importantly, I knew that there was always someone on the other side of the screen waiting for the next story. This feeling of "being waited for" is a precious motivation that cannot be measured by any data. At the same time, I would also like to express my special thanks to those friends who are willing to "invest" in this immature novel under the platform mechanism. According to the rules, your investment should get a return. This is more than just a virtual reward, it's proof that you were willing to put your trust in this story early on, and I'm grateful. As for the next arrangements, I need to implement the plan I mentioned to you about two weeks ago: temporarily slow down the pace of public updates, calm down, and polish all subsequent content. The framework of this work is grander than originally imagined, and the characters and clues are increasingly intertwined and complex. In order to live up to the foreshadowing that has been laid and to live up to your long-term expectations, I need a complete and uninterrupted time to focus on weaving the entire story and ensure that what is finally presented to you is a final chapter with a complete structure, self-consistent logic, and full of emotion. Therefore, public updates will be suspended for a period of time until the full text is completed. I won't "disappear" completely, though. During this period, I may update some [Character Cards] from time to time, and I hope you all like the inspiration and style I borrowed from a certain "ancient Internet literature master". Writing is a long and lonely expedition, but with your company, this road has warmth and resonance. Please give me some time to tell the story about black fire, dragons and the narrow sea in my heart properly and completely. See you again when the manuscript is finished. My sincerest thanks.

I will definitely let you get investment rewards: D