I Use Heaven's Secrets to Seek Immortality

I have been reading Qidian for so long, and I have never seen anything so outrageous. This is the first time I have seen the author angrily criticize and attack his big brother.

I said no wonder why it was so awkward and awkward. It turned out to be written by a woman. On the male channel, there was a bit of a petty attitude, which was constantly interrupted. It made people feel upset and depressed.

It is dispensable, use it and throw it away, but you start with a lot of pen and ink to write a tool.

? The introduction is a carbon copy of Bateman's new book. The author writes about his fans?

We still have to talk about the quality of the work. No matter whether we win the argument or not, there is no benefit. If a female author wants to avoid the pitfalls of some male videos, watch the live broadcast or slices of Qidian editors, and then read books of the same type. There are more than 200 pitfalls in men's novels. If you have read few novels of the same type, you will have a long way to go. You can choose them one by one or look at your talent.

I have seen this Thief of Heaven in three novels, and it feels like another Stitch Monster novel

Yes, it's just hypocritical. This is a very appropriate description. Girl, please go back to the female channel.

Xuebai does appear in this article. Readers can make comments in the article to make fun of me. I will accept this. After all, our money should provide emotional value! But please don't maliciously slander me outside the article, it's quite speechless!

Support the newcomers, come on, you will be better than others when you start writing.

Aren't melons more interesting than novels? Add a bookshelf and see how far the author can go😰😰😰

It is very important to read monthly tickets for the new book issue. I beg all readers to read and comment. I am very polite!

Support new books! Come on!

I like it, good writing, good books and good writing!

I haven't started reading beyond the first chapter yet. But to be honest, if you can carry out your blaming attitude in the book. I think you can make money doing this. As for online writing, most of them make money based on emotion, not writing style.

Come on, author, don't let garbage affect your mood, keep writing.

It should be written well. It doesn't matter if the introduction is fake or sewn, as long as the plot is good.

Read the author's novels and come on!

It is very well written, with good writing style and good content. It's almost the same as my work! Come on! The next platinum master may be you😁

It feels like imitating Bai Teman's "Mo Xiu" 😁😁😁

In fact, there is no need to mention male or female videos. The problem lies in the books, just the books. The writing is so-so, fairly fluent, and watchable, but the plot lacks a sense of immersion. To put it bluntly, it has no attraction. This is normal for a newcomer to write his first book. Don't worry about grades and just keep writing. As the number of words increases, you may get better.

I was quite happy to read the part where the protagonist enters the dungeon. The characters in this book are really well drawn. Every character is impressive and never dull. The description is also very delicate, giving people a strong sense of reality. The background is revealed slowly, and there is no mess of settings right from the start, which I particularly like. Each character has his or her own calculations and stance, unlike some novels where the characters are so thin that it is unconvincing. The protagonist's golden finger setting also matches the environment he is in, which is quite good. From the writing style to the character's temperament, there are shadows of "The Great Love Immortal" everywhere, which made me like it more and more the more I read it. But after reading this, although my love for it has not diminished, I gradually feel a little tired. From the beginning to the present, the characters are always wrapped in tension, lacking a relaxing rhythm. Precisely because this article has the shadow of Xianzun everywhere, I can't help but compare it with Xianzun. The most attractive thing about Xianzun is the ultimate idealism, the protagonist's always clear persistence and unremitting pursuit of goals, as well as his deep understanding of life, solid construction of the world view, wonderful portrayal of characters, and clear understanding of the nature of interests. This article is well written, but the protagonist still lacks a philosophy and persistence of his own. In the involuntary torrent, it is more difficult to stabilize one's body and mind. And the Immortal Lord, even if he is in trouble and the situation is uncontrollable, he always follows his own path. The same is true for the rhythm of writing. There are tensions and relaxations in Immortal Lord: there are exciting battles, step-by-step calculations, and there are also moments of relaxation when you focus on development and accumulate strength. In this article, there is too little space for relaxation and development, and the long-term tension will indeed make readers feel tired. But the advantage of this article is also very prominent - the description of emotions and moods, I think, is better than that of Xian Zun, it is delicate, touching and very contagious. To sum up, the way of writing in my heart is to move and be still, change and relax, and cannot be neglected. Let's take the Immortal Lord as an example again: the protagonist's ideals and perseverance are "fixed"; adapting to circumstances and strategizing in a situation in which one has no control is "change"; concentrating on development is "relaxation", and calculating games and fierce conflicts are "zhang". The adversity the protagonist encounters is "change", and his perception of life and principles of action are "determination". Follow relaxation, and you can expect a great road. All in all, I still have high expectations for this work. I just hope that it will get better and better and go further.

After reading the first chapter, I don't understand The woman talks about dual cultivation, but the protagonist disagrees. Why? I don't understand, it's like knowing that the plug-in is coming. Another affair with multiple female eunuchs?