Who Told You to Make Soup with Ring Worms?

When I clicked on it, I thought it was a copy of the plot of "Inscribed with Evil", but the author adapted the content of "Inscribed with Evil" and rationalized many contents. Well written and praised

The effect of contamination is too ridiculous. The protagonists all have low health cards, and there is a 20% chance that all cards that are not immortal will be destroyed. It is not worth the gamble. The risk is too great. Although it may be for plot reasons, I still want to complain about it.

The book is so cool, and the unpopular subject matter can account for half of the blame 😄

No, after more than 30 chapters, the poison has taken hold. The originally normal protagonist is very blunt, "feeling irritated inexplicably" and "suddenly losing his mind". It is clear that no matter what I said before, there will be no inexplicable bad behavior in playing cards, but God's fate suddenly leads to a wave of bad behavior. With the cards in your hand, you will lose the whole game, and then suddenly God's will comes to an end. The deus ex machina plug-in uses the power of time to go back and win again, and then the BOSS enters the second stage and the protagonist still loses. Then why did the protagonist's personality collapse and mentality collapse in the game before, and then force the plug-in to show up and go back in time to win the game? Here is a sudden change in the image of the protagonist, from a person with a normal mentality who doesn't do any bad things at all, to a person with a glass heart who suddenly has a mental breakdown and keeps doing bad things, and finally has a broken heart and admits defeat. Why? I can't understand why someone who was so normal in the past suddenly forcibly suppresses his intelligence and forcibly writes a story for the protagonist.

Except for some problems at the beginning, the writing gets better and better later on, and the rhythm is stacked up. What I see is a return to the surface, and the pace may be slowing down. The deck battles are pretty well written, but there are many card types that cannot be written about card battles at all. Good quality food and grass, certified by bookworms.

It's a new author. The introduction to this book also references Evil Underworld, which is rare.

The whole overall structure seems to be very good so far, but there are some problems with the plot arrangement, advancement method and character creation The Lumberjack's use of the protagonist's mistakes to advance the plot almost made me die. Although it came back later, it may take some time. We have to consider whether readers have a chance to see the back Then we go back to the surface. In addition to bringing out the setting of the shepherds, the plot of this group of newcomers gave me a very bad feeling. There was competition for the leadership position, inexplicable ridicules, and the protagonist just ignored the anger. I can understand scolding and even being a member of the Virgin Mary Gang to the end. Why did the Riddler think he was incomprehensible and gave hints and warnings but only gave half of them. At present, I can only think that they were deliberately reserved for the sake of others to show off later Ways to advance the plot Generally passive, the protagonist mostly survives in desperate situations by being manipulated, misled, and drifted. Except for having the initiative in the card game, he is basically led by various tricks Finally, the protagonist makes me feel like he is suffering from a youthful version of PTS. D-like, slightly hysterical, sensitive, and somewhat emotional. In addition to not being stressed or yelling out of control when encountering certain events, I cannot perceive the reasons for these changes. I have no obvious emotional expression after learning about the time travel or suffering a loss, but I You can be called Hong Wen by Green Snake in one sentence (if the author deliberately created it this way, just pretend I didn't say it, but I don't like the protagonist with this kind of character) Only when I hit this article did I realize that most of them seemed to be complaining, but the problem is really obvious and many advantages have been covered up. After that, the rationalization of card construction, the joy of obtaining higher-strength cards, the interesting world view or the desire to explore the settings that make people want to continue to explore are not well connected. When building cards and playing cards, they are obviously very cautious and strive for perfection. If you don't read it, you're making soup about Sand Snake (I know it's highly likely to be useless, but this has nothing to do with the protagonist's cautious character and highlights the protagonist's emotional irrationality); overall, there are actually many advantages, but the lack of writing skills and the lack of smooth description make the advantages not obvious and the shortcomings are magnified. I will continue to study, and I hope to start low and go high like Chu Sheng

A very good fan novel, very imaginative. It seems to be a fan novel about evil inscriptions, but it is actually a show of your own wild imagination. The plot is meticulous and the logic is online. The reason why this book is not popular is just that the material is too unpopular. To be honest, this book should not have this achievement and should not stop there 😰

After reading it all in one sitting, I can only say that if you are familiar with meat pigeon games and have a good stomach, you should be able to drain the grass jelly, but if you are not familiar with it, you can only drain the grain. It was the title of the book that really persuaded me to quit. . . . I've seen this book at least four or five times, but I clicked on it because I really haven't read it recently. When can I change the title of the book? It feels like this schistosomiasis has no meaning at all. . . . .

Although I have never played this game, as long as the author expands the world view accordingly, he can write a high-quality novel with seven or eight hundred chapters. According to this momentum, There are only a few good novels like Avatar that are developed from games these days. I read one Don't Starve, one Stardew Valley, and one Darkest Dungeon. This is the fourth one. I bought the first three games, but I am not good at playing card games, so forget it.

Why is this game in my steam collection?

How to say it? Inscription of Evil is not very suitable as a novel theme, not only because its background is relatively complete. If you only consider Inscription of Evil and not the author's other games, it will be difficult to nest your characters in it. In fact, even if you consider it, it will be difficult to nest it. The space left for fan creators is too small. Secondly, , the plot of this series is not perfect until now, and many unsolved mysteries have not yet been revealed. Writing fan fiction in this extremely complex world view is more of a gain than a loss. My suggestion is that maybe you can try to develop in the direction of a comprehensive comic. Although I feel that this is not actually a good choice, at least you can have something to continue writing.

I have adjusted my mentality recently and will continue to read comments. First of all, thank you readers for your subscription. Then let's summarize the problem. About the content of this book: First, this book only refers to part of the settings of Evil Underworld, so don't ask me whether some of the original content will appear, because I may not be able to control my plot now. Second, regarding the combat power and duplication of content in the novel, I plan to make adjustments later, and will conduct a version update in [Deep], such as more development content and less card games. Three, as long as I can reach 500 average (the reference line provided by the editor), I will keep updating, and don't have to worry about eunuchs. To summarize the bad points of this book: First, this book is non-traditional and exciting, and may even be a bit frustrating Second, the protagonist is mediocre, a bit like a camera in the plot Third, card battles account for a considerable part of the content If you want to subscribe, please carefully refer to the above content to see if it is acceptable. Or maybe you feel that your poison resistance has been exceeded while reading the book. I am deeply sorry for this.

I suddenly want to ask a few questions. How does the author plan to deal with old data? Will there be plots involving the other three Dark Carvers in the future?

When I started playing Inscribed of Evil, I was thinking about when I would be able to read a second-generation novel, so I could give it a try 😍

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It's a bit interesting, but if you use the setting of a card game that is not popular in PVE to do PVP, will the combat power level really not collapse? As far as I know, many builds of Evil Underworld can do this operation of killing in one turn.

The writing is pretty good and has unique value. People like me who usually read pirated copies are willing to pay money to read it😋 Come on, author. This book has long-term value. If you can finish it, you will have a steady stream of income.

Even if the protagonist is allowed to win the first stage without being a scumbag and then try his best to win in the second stage, why should he add the inexplicable situation where his mentality breaks down when the situation is great, he almost loses, and a cheat appears? Isn't it all about winning in one stage and losing in the second stage? Why add this meaningless character? Does it have any positive effect? I can't understand

I have finished reading the free chapter. The beginning of the time travel and the first few small events are very well written. In fact, I think it is normal for the protagonist to be pushed by the plot. It draws lessons from the game, and the map clearly tells you that it is a shallow and deep fantasy world. The content is not bad, so just treat it as a fanfic of a niche game. After boasting, let me talk about what problems I have so far. The first is the character of the protagonist. I feel very fragmented when I look at it. He is very calm from the beginning. Every event is done well. Later, in the black hole game, props are used and you go to the left. Even if you go to the right, I don't say anything. I don't believe in the rules and props. It's too abstract. Then when fighting the boss, it rains first, giving myself a low buff, and then playing cards to myself. After defeating the collapse, the guide saved a wave, then the boss gave benefits, returned to the surface, and got angry inexplicably. It felt like being angry with the author, so abstract In fact, I don't think I can write the character and emotions of the protagonist well, so I just don't write it. I just set a goal and go to the goal. For example, I want to go home, I can't fall down, and it will be easy to solve any problems later. It is essentially a variant of the meat pigeon game. The plot is good, and it doesn't matter if the protagonist is a brainless card player

There are too many deus ex machinas in the plot, making the protagonist's efforts seem ridiculous. There is always an outsider deciding the direction.

Like the title, I want to know how many people are still chasing

It seems like a similar comment, but this explanation does not excuse what I wrote, but simply expresses my thoughts. If there was a button in your life that would destroy the world if you pressed it, would you press it? My answer is, you never know if it's true until you actually press it. The same was true for the protagonist at that time. Although after coming to another world, his reason told him that he would lose the game of cards and die if he extinguished the candles. He had even seen Mayo's death. But before he actually faces this situation, it is difficult to fully immerse himself in it. He must experience a death crisis before he can fully realize that everything is not just playing tricks, and that the button that destroys the world is real. This point of view comes from my life, and it may also come from your life. Everyone tells you that if you don't do something, you will regret it in the future, but before the future comes, will you really "listen to the advice"? So the protagonist made a mistake. Of course, it may be that I went too far and was too rigid, so it looked a bit unnatural or even conflicting with the characters and a bit intellectually depressing. Then why don't I modify it to make the plot more natural? So some readers might not abandon the book after seeing this? Well, I am not screening readers. For example, if I make a little poison, those who can read it will be very tolerant of the book and become sticky readers. I would like to ask a question: If you know a book where the author wrote a cuckold plot or other poisonous points that were criticized by readers, but he changed the poisonous plot and now there is no such plot, will you read it? I won't. The plot I wrote, whether due to haste or other reasons, deviates from the direction I expected. It was also written by me. It exists and has been read by readers, so there is no need to change it.

There is no use submitting it to other popular novels, so why not help. Jpg

The content after the dream could be a new book.

Finally caught up with the latest chapter. After entering the fantasy world, let's go on a killing spree.

The subject matter is good, but the portrayal of the protagonist is really bad. When I returned to the superficial part, I was confused and had no idea what it was talking about.

Oh no? The wolf cub described earlier is quite cute. Why is it so peaceful to kill 30 people and eat meat? I was still hesitant when I sacrificed vultures before.

The author must have never read Day of Imprisonment. It's the same card style, with players, NPCs, and regulators. Cards are all props, but the way you only play with cards is too boring. I suggest you take a look at his game style.

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