The First Leader of the Ming Dynasty

The biggest shortcoming of this novel lies in the time arrangement. During the original Huashan Sword Qi Fight, the younger generation was only in their twenties at most, and Yue Buqun and Ning Zhong had not yet gotten married, and the trees fell and the hozens dispersed. And how could Zuo Lengchan know about the sword energy dispute so quickly at that time and come out to test it? It is impossible for Zuo Lengchan to take over the position of leader in just half a year, and he is almost forty years old. They should be about the same age. Zuo Lengchan is only three to five years older at most. It turns out that As Zhonghua Mountain is closed and rebuilt, at least five or six years later, after each generation has achieved second-rate martial arts skills, they will return to the martial arts world and begin to recruit disciples. Linghu Chong was also brought back at this time. After more than ten years, when Linghu Chong was seventeen or eighteen years old, the plot officially began. At the beginning of the novel, the two are not married yet, which means that when they were only sixteen or seventeen years old, Yue Buqun was at most twenty, but Zuo Lengchan was already in his thirties or forties, and Mo Da was almost fifty. What a joke. Such a big age gap is too dramatic.

Does the author know how sects were defined in ancient times? Do you know how to become a teacher? Let's look at ancient history. Apart from Taoism, what other religions are there? As long as there is no royal recognition and official endorsement, they are basically villains and rebels!

Does the author know why the Huashan Sect is not called the Huashan Sect?

Linghu Chong? Forget it, just be an ordinary disciple. Your nature is hard to change and cannot be used for great purposes. From ancient times to the present, virtue comes first, and good talent brings greater harm. The two martial arts schools of Buddhism and Taoism look at talent first and mind later.

What the hell is it written about? The background is wrong, the time is wrong, and Linghu Chong is two years younger than Ning Zhongze.

1: Spread the word and declare that the Huashan Sect is the Quanzhen Hao Datong 2: Incorporate the various Taoist sects on Mount Huashan 3: Compile and integrate the classics and teachings of each Taoist sect 4: Using the compiled classics as the core, transform the Wulin sect into a Taoist site and rename the Quanzhen Sect Huashan Sect 5: Annex and recover all the Taoist sects The Daquanzhen branch united the Quanzhen Taoism 6: Withdrew from the Five Sacred Alliance, a Jianghu organization, and changed the Quanzhen Huashan Sect into the Quanzhen Religion, listing it with a new look 7: Going to Beijing to promote the Quanzhen teachings and being canonized by the emperor and allowing the court to overhaul the Quanzhen Taoist temple 8: The Quanzhen Sect was greatly promoted and Yue Buqun became the leader of the Quanzhen Religion.

Someone knocked on the door and then let him leave easily? What a gentleman

I think that all travelers who have traveled to Xiaoao should know clearly that there are two major BOSSs in this world, one is called Dongfang Bubai and the other is Let Me Go. As time travelers grow up, they should think about ways to deal with these two BOSSs. I allow you to come up with methods that are ineffective or unsatisfactory due to your lack of knowledge in martial arts, but you will never allow the time traveler to see Ren Wo Xing for the second time, with shit pouring on his head, and he is about to burp, so he is hurriedly trying to think of a solution! This is the biggest poisonous point in my opinion!

Traveling to Yue Buqun, there is almost no way to go except cheating to improve his qualifications. Feng Qingyang, this old bastard, can do nothing but hide. How can he help Yue Buqun? If he wanted to help, he would have done so already. The moves in the secret cave, not to mention the Five Mountains Sword Sect, four sects have declined. As for the martial arts used in Songshan, they were all compiled by Zuo Lengchan. There are no breaking moves at all. Look for Shaolin Wudang. Once you fall from Mount Huashan, what will you do to others? If you seek refuge with the imperial court, the imperial court will treat you like a dog, and the people in the world will treat you like a dog. He took refuge in Songshan and was directly pushed to the front line against the demons. It is almost a collapse route, and there is no way out of the predicament. In the original work, there is also a deceitful apprentice who always gives opportunities to criticize political opponents. The only two solutions I can think of are, First, get the evil-proof sword manual and agree with your wife before cutting it. After all, I am 60, so just cut it. How many times can it be used? Second, go to Meizhuang, kill all the dead friends of Meizhuang, or cooperate with him, starve Zuo Lengchan to death, and get the star-absorbing magic. Anyway, with Zixia Magic as a foundation, I don't have to worry about side effects at all.

The front is okay, but the back is not. Since the time travel has been less than ten years, it has already reached 300 inner doors and 1500 outer doors. It is still improving in the follow-up. As a result, it is boring to follow the original work blindly, with conflict points and contradictions.

As he writes, he writes about the imperial court. What's going on? You can't live without the imperial court, right? Do I come to see martial arts or history?

Why is it written in such a flattering way? Now he is number one in the world, and he is said to have been forced by Zuo Lengchan to change his sect. If you force him to merge with the Five Mountains Sword Sect and become the head of the Five Mountains Sword Sect, that's enough! What are you writing about? It's a waste of money.

I don't want to read this book since Chapter 179. When you join the court, don't you know that the martial arts catastrophe is an illegal activity? This is a common sense mistake. If you kill me and I will kill you, shouldn't we all be considered criminals in the eyes of others? A chivalrous person using force to break the law is not just talk.

I can't guess how the outline is written. Let's wait and see. Come on~

I came to see martial arts, not history. History can be clarified in some aspects.

A gentleman is a group but not a party; a villain is a party but not a group. The name Yue Buqun may not seem like much at first glance, but it goes with the Gentleman Sword. What Jin Yong said is straightforward enough. Everyone is calling him a hypocrite. Do you want to continue using it? Do you take this title as a good word?

I'm confused as to what these chapters are about.

The last Black Dragon book somehow made me read the whole book. Overall, I feel that the writing and control are good. I hope this fan work can make people's eyes shine.

What date will it be released? The coins have been deposited, and I won't order any more than 20,000 words 😜

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The writing is delicate, the characters are plump, the early and middle stages are enjoyable, and in the later stages there is a faint, gradually fading sense of passing... Regardless of any strange extended historical issues, it is worth reading.