Mortal: Immortal Road to Immortality

Recommended starting point fan fiction: Mortal Zhang Tie's digital counterattack. Reborn Zhang Tie, I don't have a little green bottle. My only advantage is big data optimization. In Qixuan Sect, I optimized martial arts to reach the pinnacle of martial arts in a mortal body. On the road to immortality, I optimized immortalization techniques, and ordinary spells also have the power of heaven. When everyone in the world called me the Dao Ancestor, I looked back and realized that I had already optimized all the methods of the Immortal Dao.

This book has the style of a female channel, and it is the plot in our female channel where the boss fights with the little qi-refining nun.

He really ate a lot of it, obviously he formed an elixir, and then pretended to be a foundation builder, and finally wrote a plot to let his disciple tell others that he had formed an elixir, and when he was forced to become a Taoist couple, he was a coward.

After a high-energy start, going back to Qixuanmen later felt like pulling a big one. Although you have your own ideas, for me as a reader, the plot is really difficult to explain in one sentence!

I have read hundreds of mortal fan fiction, including goldfinger, dog-licking, original plot, etc., But I have never seen anyone who is in the same league as Han Li, and Han Li was asked to go up first and then go up. I can't understand it at all. Maybe it's because I don't cultivate immortality, and I can't understand the thinking of cultivating immortality. It's just a blast.

The more you write, the more outrageous it becomes. You also need to popularize the method of cultivating immortals. Tiannan Continent is already lacking in resources. Although ordinary people cannot cultivate immortals now, at least they will not be involved in the wars of immortal cultivators. After it is popularized, there will be no resources and everyone will compete for resources. How many people will die? Da Jin and Chaos Xinghai. Because there are enough resources, mortals in the spiritual world can even refine their bodies and reach the Nascent Soul level, so they are not isolated from cultivating immortals. You need to be smart when writing a book!

This is so funny. What kind of place is the Fallen Demon Valley? A monk in the late stage of Nascent Soul can hang in it. At the beginning, two foundation builders come out of it. Don't be ridiculous! The most important thing about Mortal Cultivation of Immortality is that the system inside is very reasonable, and there will be no leapfrog killings just because he is the protagonist. The appearance of Falling Demon Valley made me laugh to death.

I can only say that the front is fine, but the back is a mess.

Seeing this, Taishang Wangqing decided to run away decisively.

Let's restart it, this plot is really hard to explain in one word

The difference between mortals and Zhetian is huge. The author is used to writing about Zhetian and the same mortals, and the same people are not accustomed to the climate.

No, bro, is this a female channel?

No, when mortals fight, they sacrifice magical weapons to fight. What you wrote is to chop around with weapons in hand. If your writing is not good, just copy it

As expected, you have to read the comments section before reading the novel. I read twenty of them. First, the ancient teleportation formation has no limit corpses, but Han Li was cultivating immortality in the Qixuanmen. Then, if Jin Dan doesn't practice, where can he accept a female apprentice? 6

I have seen what it is like for people without spirituality to write books. Although I have written more and am more proficient in wording and sentence making, the content is still a mess and there is no growth at all There is no excitement, the rhythm is pulpy, and the understanding is bad From the article, you can roughly feel that the author really has no talent in online writing.

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Master Cang Kun also has a lot of treasures. He dominates the two paths of good and evil in the south of the sky. How can he be inside, fall into the devil valley, and build two foundations? So funny hahahahaha

Looking at the present, I find that the protagonist has been shaped into a lone star of the evil spirit. When the protagonist was a mortal, his family was all dead, the disciples he took in personally were dead, and all the disciples and grandchildren in the land of blood evil were also dead. The Taoist monk Lu Qingluo is still alive at present, but he has almost no scenes. I don't understand why the author wrote it like this. I don't know what other purpose it has besides making the readers uncomfortable😖

A narrative article is boring. It introduces various backgrounds. Popular science is useless. Who likes to read manuals? There is no priority.

There's a lot of nonsense ahead, just one chapter on the mortal world is enough, and three or four chapters are needed.

What I wrote is messy. I write here and there. It's so pretentious that I get a headache.

After reading the comments, they are all negative. Thank you Shennong.

And I can't explain the golden finger clearly. Did he rob someone else's, or someone else robbed him of his golden finger. The woman's background is not clear either. Is that woman in the back from the Heaven-Zhiding system?

I haven't watched it yet. Is it really like this?

"Mortal: Competing with Han Li, winning in learning and cultivating immortality"

I would like to recommend this place to you, I hope the host will not blame you. New book, wonderful setting, guaranteed to be completed. I beg all fellow Taoists to collect and read it. Investment in new books is welcome. Thank you very much🙏

Regardless of whether it is Zhetian or mortals, or many novels, when seeing the ending, there is an indescribable feeling of horror. For example, in the Holy Ruins episode, four almost identical people sat at a table clinking glasses and chatting. At that time, I got goosebumps and had a creepy feeling. You have to know that the true appearance of the supreme powerful is actually the same as their supreme true name, which is unique and divine. Now four people look almost the same. What do you think this is? What do the Three Emperors mean to that patient? For this reason, I specifically checked Chen Dong's detailed descriptions of the three protagonists' appearances in the early and middle stages of the trilogy. I am very sure that these three people looked different at the beginning. They most likely turned into that face step by step in the subsequent training. This makes me think deeply. Looking at the Mortal Immortal Realm later, I also have a creepy feeling, as if the novel is the same in the later stages.

If you are a good writer who writes fan fiction about the sky, why would you go and write a fan fiction about mortals? To understand mortals, one needs to read the Mortal Trilogy intensively, which has more words than the Shutter Sky Trilogy. You should also visit Tieba, Zhihu and other mortal posts to increase your understanding of mortal flow. It is best to read a few well-written Mortal-style fandoms to see what other great masters in this field understand about the Mortal-style worldview. After doing all these things well and making sure that you are not a mortal-streamed cloud reader, you dare to write mortal fan fiction. This workload is huge and the time cost is too high. You might as well continue to work on the Zhetian fanfiction track that you are familiar with. Or just open a book and construct your own fantasy worldview.

Jie Guibao recommends this mortal fan fiction. Mortal: Create a dream world starting from bubbles.

As long as you write about mortals, you'll be 100% off the mark