Rotten Dream America: I Assemble Corpses and Face Madness

After adding non-scientific elements, it no longer makes Lao A face the creepy discomfort of fear in daily calmness. The writing is very exquisite but there are many descriptions of emotions. I feel that sometimes Lao A's vernacular language that only describes the surface and allows people to taste it is more terrifying. Alas, it is a pity.

Lao A wrote three chapters and was directly blocked and deleted by the editor. One-stop service, you should try to be more restrained in writing content, at least the description should not be too straightforward.

The protagonist should not be so serious, otherwise he would have gone crazy and would not be able to survive now. Perhaps he should be as out of touch as the prisoner A in the live broadcast.

Golden belts for murder and arson, no corpses for repairing bridges and roads, the world should not be like this·JPG

This is called China Speed. The topic has only been popular for more than a week, and novels have been published. I just don't know if the outline has been written yet. If the author was not an international student with stakes like Lao A, I think it would be difficult to write hundreds of thousands of words. Collect it first and see what the author does

Lao A's mental state is really worrying 😭

I came here because of the reputation. I hope the author can write better and be more obscure so as not to be shot. I wrote a novel before and was shot by the editor.

This is not a direct switch to Cthulhu to prevent it from being taken down directly.

Suchang pays attention to one thing, whether you think it is awesome or not.

The comment section of Station B came here because of its reputation.

I actually restricted your traffic. I searched for your full name to get in.

Do you believe in hell? I admire the first person to observe the bottom of America. Maybe he would be shot eight times, have a mental breakdown, and commit suicide. Man will eventually liberate hell! Finally, let me say it again, hell is coming. Seagull Crab Disco Rice Intensifier drug Corpse Collector Hunger Candy composed of sunlight Medical Institution Military-industrial complex Split Identity Killing Line Gundam Land of Despair and Suffering The creation of hell has been completed! Lao a, Lao Zhen, what you are facing is hell! Made In Hell!

It feels like the beginning goes too fast, there is no need to condense the information so much, and there is no need to explode emotions so quickly. From the perspective of the novel's perception and reality, the most painful time for people to lose friends and family is not when they have just lost it, but when the response they should have received in daily life can no longer be received.

What can I say? It's really hard to write about this thing if you haven't experienced it personally.

Dear giant babies, go out and hold the teleport scroll key to return to the city.

Come here because of its reputation

Come here to see how long this book will last.

Don't forget there's also a plot about Xiaotou 🤭

After watching the live broadcast of Lao A and Lao Zhen, I feel so happy 😰🥵

The biggest difference between fiction and reality is that fiction requires a logical structure, but reality does not. In reality, you may not be able to finish your meal, you may not be able to sleep well, and you may be called to work in the middle of a date, but this situation is impossible to happen in novels. How could the hero and heroine suddenly switch to work in the middle of a date? No need for narrative rhythm?

The writing is too figurative, the words and sentences are too embellished, and it is difficult to read. It could be more realistic. The content of the three golden chapters is a bit dry.

This book was very uncomfortable to read. To be a vigilante saint in America, I even risked my own life. The most important thing is that the people in their own family don't take it seriously, but you risk your own life for him.

I haven't read it yet. Is there any Xiaotou story?

There is a big difference between Internet articles and reality. Don't use reality to write Internet articles. Now it looks like a revenge novel without a sense of substitution. Although they are indeed miserable, they don't care about our business now. The plot can be brought in, but we can't always talk about them. What we want to look at is the protagonist's way of life and attitude towards life.

Why do you keep up with current events so much? As soon as the topic of Prison A became popular, novels about the American killing line popped up like mushrooms after a rain.

As shown in the picture, brush a at station b

I just found it on station B and ran over to search, and it's really there!

This author makes a fuss and is so knowledgeable

It's really uncomfortable to read. Who likes this kind of writing with a different style? There are too many unnecessary descriptions in the words and sentences. It looks like a gay novel. The male protagonist is looking for the truth for his foreign husband, which can't be said in any way.

Humans fear change, not fear itself