Endless Winter: My Camp Upgrades Without Limit

I was so confused after watching an advertisement that I decided to write one myself.

It's a good start, but some details are not well written. People are very precious resources. I hope the loss will be less. Come on, author.

I originally wanted to criticize a few words, but I felt relieved after thinking that the author also got his comeuppance. This book had a tendency to be a big hit in the early stage, and it almost made the author live a good life. However, the author started to pretend that the readers were fools, and he gave up the opportunity to get rich. Now that he is cool, he has received his retribution.

Some details are not in place, but it does not affect the reading. The first opening can be regarded as a masterpiece. Until about sixty chapters, the plot of the siege and killing of the puppets is poorly written. The protagonist is stupid and aggrieved. It can be tolerated for a while. After all, it is understandable that a novel is a bit poisonous. Unexpectedly, the author didn't think there was a problem, but was complacent. He thought readers would hate it, which means that the description of the villain was perfect, so he wrote two classic villains? I just have a big question mark? The description of these two villains is spot on, three-dimensional and brilliant. I only saw two clowns with facial makeup, who were trying very deliberately to offend the protagonist. It gave me a headache. The villain was not good, the protagonist was stupid, and the corresponding characters were inexplicable. The light, who was inexplicably on the right path, began to side with the protagonist and help fight against the villain. I am speechless The most important thing is that the author also dedicated a separate chapter to praise this crappy plot, and I was convinced

I offend people by saying too much. I can only comment with a trumpet. I can only say that it is becoming more and more poisonous. It can be seen that you really want to make Li Xuanling the heroine. First you are ready to kill your brother and then you are ready to kill you. Then you keep saying that we are both human beings, and then you don't want to go on a killing spree. Brother, don't do it on the battlefield, okay? War showdown, let you write it as a love story. Anyway, looking at that beautiful face, and the magical Bala, I want to kill, and then I see the prawns coming over, so I stop killing. I don't believe that the Holy Mother is like this. To put it bluntly, I don't want to be the heroine, and then I don't want to do it. It's too stiff, it's too dead, and there's that magical corvee system. You even mentioned that it needs to be reformed, but you didn't see what you changed. The way you write it is no longer a matter of writing style. You wrote a piece of shit. If you really want to make him the heroine, you should help her instead of standing on the opposite side and then being afraid. You are so timid and you don't fight. In the previous plot, you just tried to kill your brother, and now you want to kill you. What did you do in the end? Li Xuanling is suitable to live in this world. As far as the character of the protagonist you wrote is concerned, he can't survive even in any fucking system. He is just a clown.

Why are there so many people who recommend other books and people who read them like humans and machines? What is the level of this book? Is there any Shennong? 😭

I watched Longshan without thinking and couldn't stand it anymore. As soon as Li Ning and Yang Hu left, the author said in the opening chapter that there was no villain. The villains were Han Beast and Gui, but in the end they were all fighting with people. Second, if you want to write about fighting for hegemony, write about arms and professions. When writing about personal prowess, I only need one more day to keep out the cold than you. I can raise the roof of your military camp during the day. Don't talk about tens of thousands of soldiers. Hundreds of thousands will freeze to death. What's the use of the army? The three natives can only detect things that are not specifically controlled by the trick. The trick not only grows by killing people, but also has the ability to exterminate the human race. Jingxian and the leader of Longshan are using the trick to kill people, thinking that they can have the last laugh. Is it a matter of IQ? The decisive battle at Silong Mountain was also the reason for abandoning the book. The protagonist pretended to be a saint and said that it would hurt anyone to die in the war. He also despised the other leaders for not paying attention to the lives of their men. As a result, 9,000 people were left to die in the hive (in my opinion, without the halo of the protagonist, Yuwen had all been wiped out when he arrived at the end). The smartest thing was that Li Xuanling rushed back directly. Wasn't the previous effort useless? Wouldn't you send half of Yuhan to drag them back, capture those 9,000 people at the gate of Xia City, then put the Holy Cauldron out, and say that if Xia Hong is defeated, he will kill one if he doesn't open the door for one minute. Most of the people inside are recently recruited and there are not so many die-hards. Will you open it? 5. I just want to ask the protagonist why he came back from the border area even if he can farm so much? The elixir, torch, and fire oil represent the strength of the cold beast, and they are exclusive. They are basically everything in this world, and they cannot be exchanged for anything.

Millions of people rely on hunting. What kind of wild monster is this cold beast? Is it refreshed every day?

Cool article title. The more you write, the more upset the reader becomes. And then you think your logic is very good and it's very satisfying. And debate with readers. You can do it too, as long as you follow the meat-sharing rules. After you came out, I felt like your brain had changed. Just try your best to fight against the readers. Tell me your theory vigorously. But you don't understand it yourself. You're over the top. Should we take most of the experience ourselves, or should we give most of the experience to the masses? Many people have already debated this on Tieba forums. But this is objective and you have to look at the environment. Just the environment you wrote about. You get 20 logging mirrors. Can you kill the cold beast? You still have to use your torch to compete with probability. It will be different when you improve yourself, right? What environment? You talk to me about equality. Then you come up with a theory. He said that he just didn't want to waste any more time in harvesting wood. But when you use a torch to fight probabilities, isn't it a waste of time? Isn't it a waste of time for you to lay traps? That time is time, this time is no longer time. It will be finished after it is put on the shelves. If you don't change it, as you said, the number of follow-up readings is still increasing. It's just that we want to see if you will die later, or how you will die.

Tell me your insights. In a setting with an extraordinary power system as the background, the personal power of high-level life forms plays a decisive role in ensuring the safety of the group; for example, in the early stage of the protagonist's group, the group is short of food and safety is not guaranteed. Once the protagonist breaks through the desperate situation, these will have to be solved, and the extra training resources will promote the development of the group; when low-level groups encounter threats from upper-level life forms, they have no power to resist; such conclusions or settings have been throughout the main line of development, so I will not give examples one by one. After understanding these settings or conclusions, the question arises - are the upper-level beings in the team exploiting the lower-level and getting something for nothing? If so, do lower-level groups have the strength or possibility to resist? I think the answer to the first question is no. Imagine if General Black Wind comes out to massacre nine towns indiscriminately, the Xianyang level can take away their families and leave, and can ensure continued production; the Xianyang level that escapes to practice and improve will not stop killing cold beasts just to fill their stomachs, they will also worry about where to throw the extra meat and skins, but life is not as refined as before, and it basically won't have much impact; are those below the cold resistance level as fast as General Black Wind blows a breath? All that awaits them is extinction. Therefore, I have come to the conclusion that high-level life forms and low-level groups are in a mutually reinforcing relationship; low-level life forms obtain redundant resources from cold beasts that are no longer needed by high-level life forms; high-level life forms use these resources that are no longer in play to solve their own trivial matters in life and improve the quality of life. This is not exploitation or getting something for nothing. The second question is obviously irresistible. Therefore, the following illogical plots are just to discredit the feudal town. They want the population of the feudal town to increase their cultivation speed and want to build an archway. The six native place system is a strict selection system based on the cruel living environment of the Ice Abyss. It only selects talented people with potential from the bottom. In the early stage, there is not a good enough training environment, which can better temper the will of the people of the Ice Abyss. Once they reach the cold resistance level 5, won't resources be enlarged for training?