Marvel's DNF Decomposition Master

Okay, I read the comments, and they all scolded me for poor writing at the end. What they said is true. I'm about chapter 70 now. The previous World War II plot was pretty good (of course Agent Carter really couldn't accept it), but it was quite interesting. Then I put up with the 70-year-old magic. After all, the main plot is in the 21st century, but once I got to the city, the plot felt like eating shit. The writing also felt like it had declined. There was a brainless heroine, which was holding me back? He keeps saying that he will fight Thanos in the future as long as he has the strength, but it is just a waste of time. I think Street Hulk and the Abomination battle have too many flaws to criticize. Did you really write the heroine as a retarded person? Write something original and gain some skills! The previous ambiguity with Carter was better than this Xiaomi. Anyway, I've only read seventy of them now, and I'm too lazy to read them. I thought the later ones were not good enough, so I gave them up.

I came here from the book list and thought it was good after reading the previous chapter. But I was about to read the chapter and suddenly I was fed a mouthful of shi. What the hell is the cosmic cube forcibly used? Do you have to have a hand in every plot? If you want the protagonist to change the map, just change it. Can't you find a better reason? God is so "necessary", how come the Cosmic Rubik's Cube has become a necessity? Hulk, Captain America, Winter Soldier, Black Panther, Green Goblin, Lizard, etc. Which of the enhancements require a Rubik's Cube? Why do you have to put up the Rubik's Cube? You know there are problems with using a Rubik's Cube but you still use it? And then you still blame others when something goes wrong? Isn't it the protagonist who seeks his own death? Even if stealing the Rubik's Cube is Carter's request and the protagonist "believes" it, does it mean that you have to use it if you steal it? Is there anyone on the entire planet who knows what the Cosmic Cube is better than the protagonist? Is this someone else's fault? Do you just listen to what others say? Apart from using the Rubik's Cube indiscriminately, what should you do if you lure the big chin here in advance? Keep talking about worrying about the snap of the sunset, and then do all kinds of desperate things? To be honest, I'm really afraid of the sunset. The best way is not to find a place to seal the space gems... If you don't get the gems one by one and use them randomly, how can there be so many moths! And this second experiment, this is the first time I heard that dementia caused by an experimental accident can be cured by a "correct" experiment? You don't even know how people become dementia, so you think it can be cured by just changing the radiation? Is this the brain circuit of a normal person? There is also serum. Since the first serum has already produced effects on the body, can it be used again? Is this how you conduct experiments at home? Can the conclusion drawn from your experimental sample be used? Is this so that I can harvest this "lumbar disc" later and force me to write it up? Does the author still plan to collect them all? Is the author a philatelist? As for teleportation, does the protagonist have to grab the wire directly? Isn't it okay to shoot, throw a knife, and throw a table at it? Why does Hulk have to teleport the protagonist away when it's fine if he just grabs the Rubik's Cube? As I wrote so well before, you are going to take a big turn before it is released. How can you make people subscribe with confidence? The earth hasn't figured it out yet and is wandering around the universe? Also, looking at this posture, the protagonist and the warden must have known each other before, right? And then he bowed to the younger brother as soon as he let go of his overbearing aura? Can there be less noob tricks? Is stamp collecting so serious? This plot is really poisonous before it is put on the shelves. Is the author going to put it on the shelves and his brain is not clear?

The protagonist is mentally retarded and immature. He acts like a fool all day long.

If you keep it, it will be exempted for a limited time😃

Finished spreading flowers! Overall, this is a very good fanfic, 8 points recommended. The most unique thing is that the protagonist can use his mouth anytime and anywhere. It is so easy to laugh out loud when watching the interaction between the characters. In terms of plot, the protagonist is equivalent to replacing Captain America in the early stage, but he is also different from Captain America, so some choices and approaches are different. The transition between World War II and modern times is where many people complain. The plot here also seems very confusing. I don't know what will happen. Then the sudden interstellar chapter really almost gave up the book. I don't know whether this large plot is to match the Marvel timeline or was written to be so confusing. It feels like the former, the jump is too big. However, it can also reflect the specialness of the infinite gems, so that the gems will be treated more cautiously later. The follow-up plot obviously passed through the confusing period after 70 years, and progressed all the way to the ending in a lively manner. There were no special bugs or poisonous points in between. I was still a little reluctant to leave after watching it. Finally, let's talk about Time Travel Goldfinger. It is really just to reduce the difficulty of the game and make it look familiar. Its practicality is not as good as the portable space. Give some learning experience and improve strength in the early stage, improve strength in the mid-term, and in the later stage... Cheat and kill instantly. The skills obtained, especially the dnf skills, have really few roles. The most useful ones are so-and-so eyes. Secondly, teleportation and steel and iron bones are considered passive. In order to limit the growth of the character, it was decided to upgrade for half a year at a time, otherwise Thanos would be killed in seconds. As for the characters... They have their own characteristics, but the descriptions are still weak and the images are not that full, but after all, the advantage of being a fan is that they have the original work as a basis, which is enough, and there are also very good interactive bonus points. The main interesting characters are three female characters that I like, the big shit princess, Banner and the little green giant. They have roles, characteristics and their own changes. The female characters are also quite attractive. Overall, it feels very good. The character interaction is interesting, the character creation is good, the plot is controversial in the early stage, the middle and late stages are good and stable, and there are no big bugs. It is a recommended work.

Traveling to the 21st century completely reduces your intelligence! ! The writing of Spidey and Tony is so disgusting! If the protagonist wants money, he can go to Hell's Kitchen and engage with those gangsters, and the money will be there. Do you need to go to Tony to borrow money? Moreover, Tony was written to be inexplicably hostile to the protagonist! It's like the protagonist is groveling

This book can be a masterpiece. When I saw the name of the protagonist, I knew that it might not be a good book. I died of poison after hearing less than 30 copies.

The inverse code update is too slow, just like an old man walking with other codes.

Fast pace is not my thing

I've seen a lot of people trolling the author, and it's very funny. Are you going to cause trouble for yourself by taking your armor and going to other forces to exchange for money? Will other forces play well with you? Are other forces capable of building this core? What's the point of making armor? It requires core energy. How long will it take to exchange money? Now there is no formula that can be used to create potions. How much did Little Spider's potion cost? Is 55 points a small amount? In the manufacturing industry, if you only have technology, one to three points is already considered a lot. In addition to technology, you also have post-development, mechanical equipment for experiments, and a steady stream of raw materials. Each time a high-precision laboratory is started, it will take a few million or less. Calculated in tens of millions of dollars, a few hundred million for one experiment is about the same. He can exchange money for several experiments. What's more, the research and development of the most important equipment is the key to the strict defense of each top group. Are you looking for the funny missile weapons company or the Rabbit Empire or Eagle Sauce? There are also many people who say that it is a forced incarnation? ? ? At most, I feed the young master 100 cakes/lizhuang white meat. Otherwise, how do you think capitalists got started? By charity? You saved my life. Should I give you all my property or give half of it to you? Most people can't do it, not to mention that Pig's Feet keeps harassing Iron Man like a lunatic. At most, it's just a relationship between inmates. The feeling of being brought in is too strong, like a robber. Like the author👍

Persistence is just two words, but it takes a long time or even a lifetime to do it. Just write what you want to write. Everyone has their own style. It's really difficult to write about World War II suddenly switching to modern times. The reason why the protagonist is suddenly funny after wearing the costume is because he didn't pay attention to it before. Funny, who immediately decomposes the weapons at hand at the beginning, can only mature slowly over a period of time. It's the same as when the US team was freed from the ice, and SHIELD showed him the video of the game from a long time ago, trying to make him not have the feeling of age difference. From Shuangwen at the level of human abilities, time and space transition to modern times at the inhuman level of genetic technology. His abilities can't keep up, and things around him have already changed. Let alone 70 years, if you don't return to the countryside for more than ten years, people will be moved around, houses will be sold, empty buildings will be surrounded by strangers, and you will be completely out of touch with the times. Understand the world after Captain America wakes up and feel helpless. When the plot expands to meet old friends, or the tyrannical evil force cannot be defeated and is forced to improve, it will be fine to get through this sluggish stage of the protagonist. Hold on, come on, I'm so sleepy, I'll get up early tomorrow. . .

Someone asked you to marry their daughter, and being played with by others, pig's feet really have no temper at all. Hela in the movie is ugly, not as beautiful as Carter. If you don't like it, just reject it directly. Don't you get annoyed by always being ambiguous? It's a waste of your own time and the time of others. Keep writing like this and abandon the book.

Wonderful! The author seems to have put a lot of effort into it! This can be regarded as one of the best Marvel fan stories I have ever seen, but the Marvel worldview does not have a clear power system. For example, in things like Fighters, Fighters, Fighters, etc., The strength of the game often depends entirely on feeling. The system behind the strength of the protagonist and other people can easily collapse. I don't know if the author can control it. Many Marvel fans have fallen into this trap. Um! A small suggestion for the author. The protagonist's current image is quite handsome, but I still don't like the fact that the protagonist always cuts others with a few knives. Personally, I hate knives and prefer swords. The protagonist happens to not have his own main weapon or exclusive weapon yet. The author can set it as a sword.

The heroine of this book has been decided, ------Hela

It can be said that Li Xiaomi made the author's book a failure, and at least half of the readers lost it, because readers who read the first 100 chapters have already identified with Carter. Is the speechless author's behavior of changing the heroine original? If they like originality, why do most readers read fanfics?

Carter likes him so much that he doesn't feel a sense of belonging. How can he feel a sense of belonging when he returns to Earth and lives in a stranger's home? ? Do you want to live or die? ! ! ! Damn it~~ You are trying to imitate the plot of Captain America 1, right? That's why Carter died of old age! ! You have a decomposer! ! Wouldn't it be possible to research a biological genetic agent to restore Carter's youth? ! ! It is better to open up the harem than to write Carter to death. There is so much foreshadowing in the previous chapter. In the previous chapter, Carter loves to love the male protagonist and behaves like a coquettish child to him. In the next chapter, Carter is dying of old age. It's amazing! !

Personally, I think it's pretty cool. Don't worry about the comments. Just write according to your own ideas.

During World War II, how could you, a yellow man, wear a German officer's uniform and be so arrogant as to lurk? Or enemy-occupied territory

At least half of you trolled the author. I was very angry. Don't the other half of you have mobile phones?

The plot is simply baffling. If the space gem is used as the time gem, not to mention forcibly suppressing the protagonist, what is the point of the protagonist traveling directly to World War II? And after traveling to 70 years, you are immediately led by others. A person who knows nothing sends you a note and you just do what others ask for. Do you have any brains? S. H. I. E. L. D. Doesn't seem very awesome at this time, does it? With the protagonist's ability, it's not enough to just flip the table and rush into the S. H. I. E. L. D. Headquarters to kill the top executives of Hydra. Moreover, since the protagonist has not admitted that he is an American, and the top management of the United States does not recognize the protagonist, why should the protagonist help the United States? Isn't the worse the United States is, the better? Set up a company of your own and hide behind the scenes to directly receive lizard genes for free across the United States. Since you are not making money from this thing anyway, wouldn't it be better to directly harm the entire United States? The betrayer will have to pay the price.

What do you think of this book? Do you think the author has some misunderstandings about otakus and scumbags? As an otaku, Carter is the captain's girlfriend, and she is not ugly. In the 21st century, even if he is not a plum cavalry, he is still a Hill-like figure, but the protagonist is not tempted? Is this an abstinence system? Otaku? 🤫 After I changed the map and found out that I was in the 21st century, I actually put off going to Carter for so long, and even wrote so many so-called psychological narratives. I thought that the ancient dragon hero had traveled through time. In fact, because I usually have few friends, I take the friends I chat with very seriously. Especially the first batch of friends he met after traveling through time, so those reasons for being rough are definitely not the reasons why he doesn't go face-to-face. Only scumbags will often compromise because of concerns about their own interests There is also the sudden appearance of the original Silly Baitian character Li Xiaomi. Couldn't the author be a girl? This kind of Mary Sue character is like a firefly in the dark in a superhero story, so distinct and outstanding. Once Mary Sue's halo comes out, no matter you are a domineering lady, a versatile girl, or a dark goddess, all the indigenous heroines have been defeated one after another. It makes my heart beat cold. 😰😰

Except for the emotional scenes with Carter, don't flirt with her if you don't want to marry him, don't write so many emotional scenes, you are suddenly in the 21st century, and Carter has been waiting for you to dance for another 70 years.        56，21，，，， I really can't watch the rest of it. It's a pity. It's a pity that World War II is a good plot.

Wasn't it good at the beginning, but after the modern era, it was really bullshit and a mess. The protagonist is really stupid. His actions and words are completely illogical, and he is still a puppet. Forget it, I'm too lazy to say it.

To put it bluntly, I always thought Carter was the heroine, but she died of illness in the end. Then I thought Natasha was Carter's clone, but now I don't want to. In the end, the male protagonist (the author) had an affair with someone who had nothing to do with him, but had no feelings for his comrades who fought alongside him for n times. Is this what I look like? ? ?

I couldn't help but started watching it, and then I was shocked. The Asian protagonist changed his clothes and sneaked into an extremely racist German military camp?

The World War II episode was barely watchable. Carter was good as the heroine. Later, Li Xiaomi was inexplicably transported back 70 years and appeared, looking like a lunatic.

By the way, Tony was arrested because he was famous and his captors knew that he could make awesome weapons. Ethan was arrested because he was a doctor and could also be a translator. The protagonist is useless no matter how you look at it, right? Is this guy Tony and Ethan having sex?

I was a little confused when I saw the beginning. Earlier, Carter asked the protagonist to perform a beheading mission. I thought the protagonist had a European face, so it didn't matter. Then suddenly he said he was Asian... I was speechless. The enemies were all Europeans and Americans. This agent didn't pick anyone else, but he picked you, a unique Asian. There is also a group of German officers coming towards you when you enter, and they ignore you. An Asian appears in this Nazi military camp.

As a web article, it is not very readable. There are too many psychological narrations and the story rhythm is not smooth. For the sake of water the word count is confusing.

Sigh... I could still watch it before World War II. The space gem travel time is poisonous. That millet is poisonous. I have no idea where the main plot is and what the protagonist is going to do. As a time traveler, I have traveled through time for 70 years. Has my personality changed so much? Sometimes it feels like I just talk for the sake of talking and there is no logic at all.