Starting the Horror World, I Chose to Hand over the Country

After reading Chapter 3, it was too toxic. A zombie has good hearing and smell, but poor vision. How can you pass behind it while peeing its pants? When you are on the phone and repeating the words on the phone among the team members, do you think that the team members are all idiots?

When I saw the strongest female war goddess in the introduction, I knew what the quality of this book was.

It feels like you are cooperating with a small force rather than a country. Let's put it this way. Today's guns are universal and the cost is not high. Understand the nature of the country and need to carry out certain tasks. Miniaturization of atomic bombs and amphibious landing vehicles can be done. The speed of the vehicle depends on the demand. For example, racing cars and the like most consider the human existence ability. For example, some guns are specially made, and special bullets can produce the armor-piercing power of sniper style and the firepower of Jaclyn.

The protagonist can be defeated, can lose, can be knocked down, can be as timid as a mouse, but cannot be a coward. The protagonist is written in such a useless way. After traveling to the parallel world, the protagonist does not save himself or strengthens himself when encountering trouble, and is extremely afraid of trouble. When encountering a problem, the first thing he thinks about is not how to solve it, but calling the police for help, and asking the police to help. Is this writing logical? What's even more outrageous is that the police actually know that the protagonist has traveled to a parallel world? I don't know if any readers will like this kind of poisonous start. Anyway, I don't like this kind of useless protagonist.

There are too many contradictions. Let's put it this way. The protagonist is sent to perform a mission and he doesn't even have a weapon. He may not be able to bring one with him the first time, but the people are here and they don't even give one. Isn't it funny?

Save yourself the trouble, the main character is in poor health and his heart will beat or miss a beat every chapter. It is recommended to go to the hospital for a check-up. At the same time, there is also a problem with the taste buds. There is often a bitter taste or a dry mouth, and the internal fire is a bit strong.

After reading the introduction, countries can connect across the world, and there is no shortage of technology.

For Yuri🤓

People who read patriotic literature can't even automatically turn over their brains?

Already reported. Please report this kind of intelligence-degrading garbage.

In Chapter 11, there is a Madonna plot where the little head controls the big head. You can imagine the content of this book.

I don't want to watch it at all. You can write about the protagonist escaping from death and calling the police or contacting the country. He or she traveled through time and called the police and the call was answered. But anyone who knows anything about communication would not write like this.

It's full of loopholes, just like a primary school student. If you can't make this money, don't force it. It's disgusting🤮

I couldn't stand it until halfway through the first chapter. The protagonist is Zhang Wei. I was so scared at the beginning. If you can survive three chapters, you are considered awesome.

The author quickly hand over your biological mother😍😍😍

After writing this, the app is not the only one. The Japanese devils all used it. I see you are the bus.

There is nothing to say about the previous plot. The strongest female instructor fell directly to the soldiers without bothering to complain... But at the end of the speechless Resident Evil group battle, as long as the protagonist does not explode, the global team will fail. Are you sure that there is no problem? Author, are you addicted to character abuse? Crazy sensationalism, crazy abuse, no matter how tense the situation is, I have to write to the command center for reference. I don't know how to calculate the conversation time. When Bai Haiyang was still there, super calculation could only communicate with thoughts. Without Bai Haiyang, it is really more and more unreasonable to communicate so fast.

The protagonist is an ordinary person at best, but a waste at worst, a waste who is manipulated by the country and is at the mercy of others. I have seen other themes in which the protagonist cooperates with the country, complements each other, is respected and integrated, and is given rights. In this novel, the protagonist is a tool man. Rubbish

The strongest Valkyrie looks a little unbearable

Before I changed the introduction, I could tell the quality of the book at a glance. Now that the introduction has been changed, I can only tell the quality of the book by reading the content. By the way, the quality of this book is poor.

Abba Abba 🙄🙄🙄 Brain twitching thing, but also a prophet!

Although the country is ridiculed as a grass-roots team, the country in this book is really not even as good as a grass-roots team. I feel so retarded.

After reading Chapter 19, I only have two points to make: 1. The liaison officer is a beautiful woman, and she is also the first teammate and responsible for the force. 2. The national think tank ignored the existence of the backpack bar. The protagonist only realized that there was a backpack bar after teleporting for the second time. A matter of opinion, I'll slip away first.

Not good-looking😰

After seeing Chapter 365, I have determined that this is a continuation written by AI. The main plot has been completely abandoned, and the core outline of the unlimited mobile app has been completely ignored. Now AI is leaning hard on the 3T content. There were typos in the previous chapters, which means that the author wrote it himself, because he does not proofread after every time, so he can guarantee that it is written by himself. Now there are no typos in the whole text, which means that it is not a sudden habit of proofreading, but AI is writing.

If you write about a horror world, it's a horror world. You have to touch on history. The third copy is extremely boring.

I was forced to surrender my mind many times and was moved by myself. As soon as I contacted the state, the state directly used a commanding tone, and everything I did needed to be approved by the state. In the second time traveling, even the space backpack will be forgotten. If it is an individual who forgets, can it be justified? A country's think tank will also forget? Will the author read it himself? Try to write as naturally as possible and don't be too deliberate.

In fact, the creativity is really good... It's a pity. Could you consider using this book to practice your writing skills and use this idea to write in the next book? I see a lot of authors doing this. . . It's true that the more I write, the better.

We have just reached chapter 90, and I don't know the plot yet. I just asked if this book has official endorsement, so I dare to write an anti-Japanese plot? This kind of writing about unlimited is usually the platform's resistance. I don't know if it is written in the contract that the platform will be responsible for all infringements of movies, videos and texts.