We're at Hogwarts, and There's Something Wrong with the System.

Fan authors must read the original work\O/\O/

When Snape opened his mouth, he was a mudblood.

No, buddy, Snape is a mudblood with an open mouth, and his character design has been eaten by you, and his life experience has been snaked out by your father, right?

The setting is confusing, and it feels like you've only watched the Harry Potter movies and you're still not good at it. In the Golden Finger, the Demonic Swallowing Technique is set to be incapable of swallowing even magic power and has little effect. Then guess why it is called the Demonic Swallowing Technique instead of the Spiritual Qi Swallowing Technique. It is simply ridiculous, not to mention that you set the protagonist to possess a body of chaos and said that the magic power is one of the 3,000 avenues. Aren't you contradicting yourself? Later, the protagonist, the wanderer, received an envelope and no one took it with him. I won't say anything about the protagonist going to the magical world alone. Then the protagonist wanted to learn spells before going to school, but he was not allowed to use them. It was so funny. Guess what Hermione said to Harry Potter when they first met, and what she used to repair Harry's glasses. Then there is a logical flaw in IQ when choosing a school. You should not choose Slytherin whether it is for the sake of skills or profit. In the martial arts without spiritual energy, sword cultivation is basically useless, not as good as fists and palms, let alone spiritual consciousness. Not to mention long-range skills, without spiritual energy and such a low cultivation level, it is definitely not as useful as magic, which requires quick release and low requirements. The interest is really aimed at the goal of "counterattack of half-bloods and mudbloods", then Hufflepuff should be chosen, that is the place where the most wizards of half-bloods and mudbloods are born. Slytherin is the school with the worst goals. Even if Slytherins are strong-minded and bully the weak and fear the strong, pure-bloods are their fundamental interests that determine their butt. If you want to revolutionize their lives, they will fight to the end. Furthermore, Slytherin was born to be difficult to get along with other houses, not to mention completely isolated, but subsequent friendship was a waste of effort And Professor Snape's original work was a bit cruel, but it only targeted other houses. Even if something happened, Snape would not embarrass his own house face to face. So it is obvious that the author has not read the original work carefully and does not know the situation of each college. Several of the characters are a bit OOC.

All kinds of common and uncommon lightning points... In a sense, they are quite powerful!

I feel that the author has never watched the movie, only watched the short video, or has completely forgotten the plot. At the beginning, there was no professor to take him to school. Voldemort was taken to school by Dumbledore when he was in the orphanage. Does the author think that Voldemort can enter the school with gold galleons? The first few chapters alone are unreadable, and there is a cat delivering letters in the back, so why not just let the letters fly to the post office? There are a lot of wizards drinking downstairs in the Broken Ax Bar, and they can't learn magic, not to mention that Harry lives in the Broken Ax Bar in the movie.

It's a very bad start. I didn't ask the professor to lead the team and went by myself. I don't know what to write.

I really like watching Harry. Whether it's daily life or fighting and killing. But this book looks like eating a large piece of fat meat boiled in plain water Greasy, weird, and tasteless. So boring

It can be seen from the author's other books that the books on human beings all ran away in advance.

Already added to the Hogwarts package, lol

Zhang Qiu? Speaking in front of the social media... I feel like if I can read the lines while reading the book, then...

Author boss, is it a single heroine or multiple heroines?

Is this one single, many, none? Heroine

Is there any internal investment? Has it passed? Can I sign a contract?