The Seven Deadly Sins of My Changing Jobs in the Republic of China

The Seven Deadly Sins and the Anomaly Investigation Bureau are actually a bit mismatched with the Republic of China. The subject matter is a bit mixed. There are also the red stars and pools at the beginning. Actually, it's not necessary. Not many people who read this subject are interested in revolution. The subject matter is mixed with wrong elements and it is easy to have a strange smell. If these can be revised, it will be well written.

After reading the first 5 chapters, let me tell you my feelings. The setting and writing feel okay. But I actually don't understand that an official organization of the Republic of China that handles daily affairs was located in the French Concession. Then I read other comments. Some bosses say that foreigners are very arrogant in the author's setting. I'm actually a little surprised. In the Extraordinary Republic of China, if you write about warlords' melee, ideological revolution and so on, I think it's all okay. Then if you add some foreigners, you can create a French concession in the Extraordinary Republic. Personally, it feels very strange. According to the author's setting plan, extraordinary power should not appear suddenly. Then shouldn't it be true that the longer a civilization is passed down, the more complex the extraordinary power will be. Then why can foreigners compare with the Republic of China in terms of extraordinary power? Are you saying that extraordinary power can bless guns and cannons? Haven't those warlords ever had guns? During the Republic of China era, if we look at actual history, the gap in military technology was not that big. Really, it was just a matter of investment ratio. So now I don't understand, why the Republic of China? Its official agency for dealing with abnormal affairs is actually in the French Concession. It's really, really weird.

The author needs to explain why foreigners are so arrogant. This is extraordinary. We cannot just start from the historical background. We must explain the weapons of foreigners. Otherwise, they are extraordinary. It is inappropriate for foreigners to be so awesome and coaxing.

It's really nonsense, but during the warlord period of the Republic of China, the government-run extraordinary agency came to fight again. How great. What kind of training was there?

I haven't read it yet, but I just feel like Seven Deadly Sins doesn't fit in with the fairy tale fantasy.

There was actually an abnormal asylum in the Republic of China, was it so advanced? I don't believe that a comprador government like the Republic of China would care about the life and death of its people.

The seven deadly sins are the seven professions? , Or more of a career?

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In the first forty chapters, the plot is not smooth and unnatural, and it feels like an old routine of forced explanation and forced arrangement of the plot.

I flipped through it vigorously and saw about 100 chapters, but I never saw the fourth profession. I was quite annoyed. When I looked at the table of contents, it took about 200 chapters to unlock the fourth profession. . I thought the seven deadly sin professions were not that hard to find, and I found three in about 40 chapters. It's best to have a plan when writing. With the title of your book, you are destined to read the novel mainly to read about occupations. I felt annoyed when there was no occupation for about 50 chapters. When I looked at the table of contents, I saw that there were still about 100 chapters before the next occupation. .

The writing is quite good. Does the author have any old books?

It's just that the content in the academy is relatively bland and watery, and the villains are also more superficial. If you have time, it's best to revise and refine it.

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Is it because not many people have read this book or because the author deleted the comments and only made so many comments after chapter 250?

Does the shelter have to have its office in a church clean room? Can't you build a building by yourself? I endured this poisonous point for two chapters, but I couldn't bear it anymore after going to work in this place.

There are so few comments, the taste is quite right.

The writing isn't too bad, it looks okay.

The flavor of the Republic of China is not enough. The wording is too modern and very divisive.

Bring me other professions quickly! ! !

It's food for those who like it, and poison for those who don't like it. But I thought it was okay after reading it. It kills decisively and the secret technique is quite interesting. The supporting characters except Li Fang are not outstanding. If the author can write a few outstanding supporting characters, this book will do a lot better.