The Sin Swordsman and the Elf King Who Quit the Team

Your introduction doesn't look like a 25-year-old book, it looks like a 15-year-old book.

Brother Xuande is good at using two swords, one is called the sword of benevolence and the other is called the sword of righteousness.

The writing feels very retro, but it keeps people reading.

Retro, but royal, is obviously the main theme of fantasy, but it is so rare nowadays

This book has the flavor of twenty years ago. It reminds me of a book called Yara's Adventure Notes that I read in Qidian.

It's very well written, please encourage us and recommend yourself (Goblin is obsessed with the heart)

The first half looks pretty good so far, it feels like an orthodox Western fantasy, but the style is very similar to Nikkei. The plot of the sword turning into a human reminds me of when I watched Elf's Sword Dance🙂 but it's a bit too cliche, especially when fighting monsters with my former teammates, I have to wait until everyone is seriously injured before taking action. It can be understood that the author wants to express that the protagonist has not emerged from the previous shadow, and there is no need to use two swords that will cost a lot. However, there is no mention of emotional description in the protracted chapters. There is only the part where the protagonist is venomous. The inner struggle is not written until the end. It feels like the protagonist is only good at talking. There is also a great sense of fragmentation in the description of passers-by's impressions of the protagonist. Originally, after the protagonist became famous for the first time, passers-by were afraid of the protagonist and did not dare to express too much disgust. But after Eddie appeared, passers-by began to despise the protagonist again, which felt inconsistent with the previous plot. And every time someone taunts the protagonist, the protagonist glares and the others flinch. It's okay once or twice, but if it happens so many times, it really feels like passersby are just a tool to highlight the protagonist's idle eyes, and they will forget it every time and repeat the cycle. Then Lina has always trusted the protagonist and stood by the protagonist even if her life was endangered several times. However, after being hit by the protagonist on the road and seeing the reaction of the street vendor, she inexplicably misunderstood the hero without giving him a chance to explain. I think the overall direction is in a good direction, and the overall plot is also very interesting, but some details will read strangely, and the repetitive plot will make you feel tired. Come on, author! 👏

This is not the case in Japanese royal works! 😡😡😡You have a royal start where you lose everything😭😭😭, how could you get screwed before you even start? After helping the little girl, you should clearly understand your beliefs😘😘😘, come back to hell and fight with your former teammates and the mastermind behind the scenes, and then understand love and friendship in the final battle, implement your own justice🥰🥰🥰, and finally get back everything that belongs to you. How could anyone pick up two swords at the beginning and give them to his wife! 😱😱😱This is not the case in Japanese royal works! 😨😨😨I don't accept it! 😫😫😫

The narrative is smooth and the characters are distinct. Demon or vest? Brother, please book a chapter promotion in advance 😁

Reading the introduction reminded me of the anime "The Sword Dance of the Elf!"

What can I say about this book? It's rare to see an unsystematic western fantasy. This book is very similar to a traditional Japanese western fantasy light novel. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

What is the emotional line of this story? Is there a single heroine or a harem, or is there no plan to write about romance?

Let's change the part about nuclear pollution. . Unless there are nuclear bombs in your worldview. In addition, there are a lot of swear words, which is a bit uncomfortable.

I spent more than 10 yuan and got 3 monthly cards, but I actually died

The rhythm of this book is still too strange Every chapter is a fun battle

It's on the airwaves, it's indeed the taste of time