Why Are My Dungeons Filled with Villains?

But your plot dissuaded me. I don't know if I read it too fast. After about ten chapters, I still don't know what the protagonist has done. I just know that the protagonist creates evil ghosts to scare people and eat people... From the introduction, it should be a replica of the dungeon of the underworld, but the author can't write that feeling. Also, as the first created evil ghost, it is too weak and easy to target. For adventurers, it is low risk and high reward. Without the protagonist's halo, I feel that the protagonist will go bankrupt in two or three days.

Look at the title of your book and see what chapter 30 is about.

The title of the book attracts me, but I don't feel it at the moment. Since you want to eat villain traffic, you get some high-traffic villains. The audience for the current appearance is too small. Compare it to high-traffic villains like Aizen and Madara. Your current character has no trouble. Even on the side of the road, if you want to gradually increase the intensity, you also have options with higher traffic than now. Muzan or Killian of Bleach Hueco Mundo can at least get the traffic bonus of the work. It's a thankless job for you to write this, and it gives readers the impression that it's all rotten fish and shrimps.

My stupid writing has been called a eunuch by you.

Look at my seven-star life-extending lamp. Great resurrection. Come back soon, I can't bear it

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