Start with the Male God of Life

A life-style male god? This reminds me of a great novel from a long time ago. It is logical, not awkward, and the details are perfect. Especially the female protagonist is very brilliant. Unfortunately, the author may be middle-aged and likes to write a little bit of romance. Book friends reported that it was removed from the shelves. He didn't even finish it.

The pacing and everything are very suitable, but one thing is, does the author have any regrets? "Supermodel" and "187" are mentioned every one or two chapters. Even if you really can't help but mention them, you can't always use these two words. When talking about body, you must use "supermodel", and when talking about height, you must write "187".

The prince is strong? Linlin? Capital? Brother, you are a bird in a hurry🙂🙂

After reading the first dozen chapters, the system rewarded 4 million in two months. When I first entered college, I bought a car worth more than 1 million, hundreds of thousands of clothes and jewelry, and a monthly rent of 18,000, while my parents worked in the factory in my hometown for two months for less than 10,000 a month. Isn't the author simply sick?

After reading forty chapters, I died of a poisonous attack. I imitated Lao Zhou and Bread imitation, but I didn't understand. The writing was a mess.

Is the author female? This novel is relatively long-winded and plain, giving me the feeling of running through a running list. There is nothing poisonous and nothing that makes people want to watch it.

Yesterday, I had a one-on-one match with a classmate in my class. I won, but the other person's mouth and nose were bleeding. What should I do now? Will he come to the system? How many days can I survive?

Is the author female? A hint of Mary Sue

Author, your takeout has arrived. The security guard won't let you in. I left it at the door of the community for you. Remember to pick it up

I basically ordered all of them, but I was really not interested in a few of them so I didn't order them. I was also given two monthly passes. Can I give the author some advice? First, your idea is good, and girls are very three-dimensional. This is your advantage, but the disadvantage is the character of the protagonist. Whether it is the barking dog in the life-style male god book, who becomes high-spirited and wants to do something after having the system, or a scumbag like Zhou Zuiniao who is a complete scumbag from beginning to end, they all have a clear character. Where is your protagonist? A calm, Buddhist, man in his thirties, who is hesitant and doesn't know what he wants. To be honest, he is not likable. His charm is composed of the skills, appearance, and financial resources given to him by various systems. He does not have a core attractive point. Basketball, music, appearance, height, financial resources, and good universities account for many people. At least I have seen such people. Secondly, your recommendation for some plots Progress is too slow. I know you are proud of your writing style. You describe the characters' reasons for doing what they do and their inner behaviors very carefully, but this is not necessary. You are writing a web article. Even if it is Lao Liu, Ji Cha, or Crow, they don't have much psychological description of the supporting characters. More often, they just brush over or directly write about their behavior, and some directly say "I don't know what they are thinking, suddenly...". I know you want to write about the clowns of the protagonist's two roommates, and the foreshadowing of Chen Haoruoruoruo, but to be honest, there is no need to write these in too detail, as they will squeeze your content too much. You can take a look at the content after it is released, and how much it describes the two roommates. The latest content is more than 5,000 words, and how much does it portray Wang Ziqiang's roommate. There are so many comments about you, which may be due to your writing style, but at the beginning, there are not many people who are willing to calm down and read your description of the inner drama. A little humble opinion

Every chapter makes me sick, and it's very invincible. The protagonist is like a king, called Jiahao for short. He is so arrogant.

The plot feels familiar and I can't remember the name of the book, especially the roommate in Beijing and his so-called Beijing girlfriend.

This guy from Beijing looks familiar to his "girlfriend"

The male god should be someone like a teacher, this is the most attractive one

Abandoned, there are too many contradictions, and the more I look at it, the more awkward it becomes.

I rarely post, but what can I say about this book? Chicken breast, neither bad nor bad. Don't be awkward. There is really no need to write about roommates and their female classmates. There is no need to write about women in the gym. Why don't you write about the sweet love of a single heroine? It's not thorough to write about a bunch of girls who are scumbags and scumbags. After reading Chapter 125, I really can't stand it anymore. I hate it the most.

I don't know why this novel looks so familiar. I feel like I've read something similar before. At first I thought it was a novel I had read and discarded before, but when I saw it it was a new book.

Bottom man. Evil man. The life system originally refers to playing with women. . .

Ever since the author started using AI to write novels, the overall writing style has become very deliberately disgusting. This is not to say that you are not good at using AI, but after all, it is to assist the author in broadening his cognitive boundaries, not to rely on him. Several previous heroines have also disappeared inexplicably, such as fitness girls, etc. Every time I think of this book, I feel that it is a pity, and the subsequent results have also dropped badly. Maybe this is the author's choice, lying down and making money.

Have you gone to seek further education from Lao Zhou?

I like this book very much

This 28 year old bus? What do you think?

Booked to Chapter 182, an 18-year-old male god who is reborn with a system has just fucked up a 28-year-old fitness personal trainer. The rest of the writing is more dragging than pure love, like an old man's prostate is dying, bye.

It's well written, but too detailed. This kind of rhythm has the feeling of a low number of words, and the dragging rhythm can easily make people tired and can't stand it anymore.

It's pretty good. Compared to the previous one, this one feels better.

The author is great, 🈷️ticket🎫 is sent, please give me more updates

It's a mess, the preface doesn't match the follow-up, and everything you say is forgotten after a while. The plot is okay and not that bloody, but the writing is not that good and has a lot of flaws, and occasionally it is poisonous.

Duplicate chapter content? Latest

My writing skills are very good, but it's just too watery... I want to read it... But I think it's a waste of money!

This guy named Zhang Jingyu poisoned me so much. He was disgusting and blind. Where did I find such a good brother?