Shenhao: Concentration Can Bring Benefits

Author, are you annoyed? Are you not a senior in high school? Why can a woman talk so long and verbosely for so many chapters? Your novel has a good plot and a good idea. I'm here to see the novel's attention, not the high school love fantasy plot. If the author continues to write, I, as a reader, will be scolded.

When I opened the comments, they were all five stars. When I read the novel, I felt like a divine farmer again!

I really couldn't stand the chapter about Dingda G and Cullinan. The first part was okay, but the second part was really hard to describe and was pretty bad. I really don't understand why after confirming the relationship with Lin, you did this again with Wang. Even if you confirmed the relationship impulsively, shouldn't you show your cards immediately? Is cheating on both sides consistent with the protagonist's setting? Isn't this a problem with being a human being? Pure and innocent three views. There is also the part about the black protagonist of various marketing accounts. Is it difficult to send a lawyer's letter? Is it difficult to report a J? It's different from pretending to be a slap in the face for the sake of flattery. It's just like it's a lot of trouble. There are also various inner dramas, repeated descriptions and emphasis on various words, the water is like an enema 😊😊😊

Female author? No wonder this style of writing is used to write a diary

It's very comfortable to read, but live broadcasting is really forgetful. You can't make money. The audience for online articles is only male, unless you sell goods, and selling goods is not very impressive.

What's written next? It's all a running account, and the dialogue is too stiff, almost like a composition. I don't know where to start from, but this book smells like reportage.

😰Is it my imagination? It smells like a female video

Seeing that the quality has declined later on, who has nothing to do to come and see your research materials? You are still preparing for the Olympics. Your ultimate goal is to be an academician. It is boring. I originally paid for a subscription. Fortunately, I only read one chapter and subscribed for one chapter. You can slowly become a graduate student. I am looking for the next book.

The more I write, the more rubbish it becomes, and the word count is also awesome even if I am deliberately sloppy.

In fact, it's quite interesting to write about daily life at the beginning, and it's fun to interact with your girlfriends. But it's boring to write about solid-state batteries and play abstractly later. You already have other things to do, such as writing novels, practicing archery, playing piano, and live broadcasting. The more you write, the more interesting you become! Better pay more attention

Is there any similar novel like this? I like it very much.

The content I have written in the past few days has been very repetitive and described from different angles. In fact, the number of words is a bit low.

Is the protagonist studying technology again? It's boring. It's better for the main character to be an Internet celebrity and a writer than to be a scientific research expert. It's not like the main character can handle it by himself. The problem is that it doesn't feel satisfying.

Is there no homework in high school? There is nothing to do except attend class. It's really comfortable, don't you need an endorsement?

Personally, I suggest that you don't write too deeply about the development of scientific research. Everyone comes here to read about daily life and some career development. Technology is so powerful that it becomes a science fiction article, which is a bit tearing.

The same paragraph is repeated three or four times in a chapter. If you don't bother me, I will. I used to subscribe every day, but now I don't. It's a waste of money, especially when I'm buying a house in my hometown. If you're tired of it and you really can't write it, just skip it and go directly to college, right? If you have to waste it here, the water will still be hard even if the water doesn't stop!

It's pretty good. I'm tired of the bloody routines. I'll stick to my daily writing.

I feel like the story is a bit thin, and the emotional drama is not as good as it was written. . . The heroine's inner monologue is also gone. I don't know what it was about.

The character behaves like a senior elementary school student and looks very cute. After reading a few more chapters, I feel something is wrong. A senior high school student is too childish and stupid. It's boring and I can't stand it anymore.

To be honest, the first 20 chapters seemed pretty good to me at the beginning. Even though some places were awkward and difficult to read, it was still a shortcoming. However, until more than 30 chapters, the protagonist was still playing single-player. From time to time, he would talk about the protagonist's situation and the heroine's situation. The annoying thing was that there was no plot.

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Mom, it's too much to buy a house and a car. Wouldn't it be better to go back to school and fall in love? I feel like the third heroine can't be added, her status has reached this level. My daily life is getting more and more boring. I really have to say goodbye if I continue to write my college articles like this.

More!

There are more and more one-man shows. Fast forward to college.

Don't be fooled, I'm just jumping to subscribe now.

After reading Chapter 54, I want to ask for advice on whether it will be a confession round or a scumbag round. It is obvious that the current protagonist does not have the strength and emotion to open a harem, and if it is handled by a scumbag, it does not match the protagonist's previous behavior.

I've only read a few pictures. This book is good, but it's just a bit under-exposed.

I feel like it might be better to change the title

If you don't like reading, just keep it and order the chapters first. Come on, author, I think you can advertise and get some traffic, recommend books or chapters, etc. The main problem with this book is the lack of exposure. I am very picky about reading books, so this book is fine.

Can there be more new plots? Don't keep mentioning repetitive things. From the looks of it, every scene mentions my girlfriend's art exam, buying a car, buying a house, and going to Shanghai in half a year.