Why Cultivate Immortality If You Won't Cultivate?

It's not very good. I obviously feel that the design of the worldview and practice system is very casual. The basic focus is that the protagonist develops plug-ins and then experiments with the supporting characters. After the supporting characters experiment and there are no problems, they immediately take them back and evaluate them as 10% disdain. Then in the process, the supporting characters repeat the same old "how powerful the road is at their feet" and then become stronger on their own. Currently, I don't feel that the protagonist has any personality charm. He only thinks about cheats all day long and does not practice cultivation. Moreover, the process of distributing cheats is also very casual. If the supporting characters are not smart enough, they will definitely start to doubt the people around them and then the protagonist. For example, at the level of the protagonist, he pretends to be a formation master to fool his senior sister before he is discovered, which can be said to be very witty. In general, it is a fun novel. If you don't take it seriously, it will be quite enjoyable. If you read the novel for a long time, you may not be able to stand it.

There is a bowl of soup in the Tuoshen Blade, which is generally okay. I eat a piece of meat from time to time. The Greedy Snake is boiled water with sugar. It feels a little sweet but only a little sweet. This one is boiled water in boiled water. There are seasonings next to it that you can only look at and cannot add. I feel that it is a pity for the God of Tai Sui. It continues the taste of the Blade. Unfortunately, it collapsed in the middle and stopped abruptly.

I just read my brother's book and thought of the previous one. The previous one really had potential. Alas, it's a pity. Snake is almost fully booked. When I followed the lead, I felt it was very attractive and the concept was quite clever. I feel that if I write more solidly, I can get a high-quality product.

To be honest, this beginning feels similar to the most exciting parts of the previous books. I feel like I can really turn a corner this time.

The latest ones are all duplicates. I watch Bull Demon

I've read the author's three books: The Old Ones, Panda Martial Arts and Snake. I read the beginning of the Blade book and didn't read the others if I wasn't interested. I found a problem with the author. I feel that the author cares too much about the martial arts philosophy he upholds, which caused the combat power system of the work to be extremely unclear in the later stages. This has seriously affected my reading experience. The author does not have a standard combat power system. There are always supporting characters who suddenly realize and then quickly reach the peak of combat power in the latest chapter. Once or twice is fine, but when you have more, it becomes a big, big poisonous point. 1-For example, among the old rulers, any believer of the protagonist who comes to the protagonist's era ten thousand years later can beat up Dagon's level. Your increased combat power has caused... There are also several humans who always have their combat power skyrocketed after enlightenment... It seems that the protagonist has lived in vain all these years. 2-For example, a panda's martial arts world looks pretty good in the front, but after entering the new era, it is simply a piece of shit. In the previous chapter, the protagonist had a hard time fighting a mass-produced robot, but in the next chapter, a huge storm directly hit the enemy's base camp, and the combat power was too mysterious and blurry! 3- Not to mention Snake, the main character also starts to collapse as soon as he wakes up. Especially the evil god of the prototype Four Vendors said how awesome he is in Star Sea, but later on, he is just a mini-boss in Star Sea. Your combat power collapses again, this time even more completely. I have only read less than ten chapters of this book, which is not to my taste. I hope the author will learn from the lesson in the next book and stop practicing martial arts to become stupid🧠. Plan your world view and hierarchy system. Of course, the story is the most important thing. Hey ~ I hope the author can give a reply after reading it and improve it. The author will also succeed in enlightenment and let the next book take off!

Unlimited streaming without opening new copies is more interesting. I also want to see Chu Nan and Yu Boyang continue to form and arrange together.

After reading most of it, my evaluation is that it uses the method of landscape painting to draw color pictures. So I was deeply influenced by the book Ancient Snake. . There are many strange things in this book, which can be easily explained by converting the identity of the protagonist into an existence like an ancient snake.

Wouldn't it be nice to go back and write a Shan Yuan drama honestly to compete with the style of Saba?

Although I haven't ordered much or spent much money, I still have to complain. I don't quite understand why I am an old author who has written 4 books. Why do I still have so many basic and fatal poisonous points? I write whatever comes to my mind The psychological changes and conflicts of the characters are illogical and meaningless. It is too blunt to say that they are captured alive. It is too blunt to say that it humiliates him. It is too blunt to tell the sighs and realizations of different groups before the end of the Dharma. It is too blunt to be grand and devoid of emotions. And in-depth themes The battle scenes are written like a novice. After it was put on the shelves, the battle in the Wild Boar Forest was barely considered a high-level battle. Compared with the cockfight, the latter had more graphics and action The design of the intellectual battle was even worse Anyway, after reading it now, I feel that I didn't write it seriously. It was just a fee for the contract. The quality was high after it was put on the shelves but before it was put on the shelves. I knew that my plot and writing were poor, so I should have read more settings. However, I often strayed away from the settings and put aside my biggest highlight.