Warhammer: My Years as the Second Primarch
战锤，我成为第二原体的那些年
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 374k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- ACG Fanfiction
- Updated
- 8mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
Synopsis
40Chapters
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It's completely copied from the settings in Corgi's books. The writing is not good. When I saw Chapter 2, several logic bugs appeared. Would the family be happy without Erda's operating body? What are you writing? It's hard to say what the emperor and Ergan's education can teach them based on their emotional intelligence. It's really better to release it to the whole galaxy, and at least have Guilliman as a guarantee. If we leave the education to these two brats, this guarantee may be gone.
Warhammer Takade Mighty, the same setting, the second Primarch plus a dog, Six, the name of the Primarch is different, the beginning plot can't be said to be similar 😅, I looked it up, it's very specific, brother
There is no need to write that the emperor was born like this, although everyone knows it.
Completely copying someone else's stuff. Isn't the starting point to be very strict in this aspect?
Come on
It's amazing, you can even see Warhammer's Cloud Hammer!
My brain is going to explode, can anyone give me some ideas? If you want to scold me, you can scold me here. This book is not well written. I feel that it is very difficult to write it now. I can't find any good records about the undead and the Eldar. I have read a lot of LEX translations and can't find any plot that can be cut into. If you have any better plots, I will look through it and find two stronger enemies. Otherwise, I will have to let the Zerg come over. I feel that the enemies in Warhammer are very limited.
@readerCorgi, your book has become an outline
It's so well written. It describes all the emperor's inappropriate behavior from the perspective of ordinary people.
The plot was written so quickly that it was over in less than a hundred chapters.
It's not what you meant. Chapter 19, you started charging and you still got 53 coins. Are you kidding me?