Yang Guo: Have I Ever Been Crazy?

I don't understand it a bit. The protagonist's golden finger is emotional points. It makes people have emotional ups and downs. Then what kind of talent do you want to copy? Should it be to be a storyteller, or run a newspaper, copy novels, tell ghost stories or something?

I heard that there is an original heroine, right? A fan writing an original heroine?

There are Guo Fu, Xiao Longnu, Cheng Ying, Lu Wushuang, and Gongsun Lue in the original work, so there is no need to add the original heroine, right?

The idea is good, but the sentence breaks, punctuation and writing style are a bit uncomfortable.

I don't understand. Hong Qigong taught the Eighteen Palms of Subduing the Dragon, but he lacked some internal skills. The protagonist also wanted to find a Taoist temple to donate some money to learn internal skills. In the story of Yitian Slaying the Dragon, Shi Huolong practiced the Eighteen Palms of Subduing the Dragon, but he failed to practice it.

Is there something wrong with the punctuation you use?

System flow: The entire world is just a plaything of the system, and the purpose of the system is to provide fun to the system's creator.

I have opened a new book, which is good. In fact, Jin Yong fans have a much larger audience than Pili fans. It's just that there are too many people writing, so it's not easy to write new things. Come on, author.

The writing is neat and tidy, and the dialogue is neatly word for word.

Hurry up and push the martial arts contest to get a bride, it's smelly and long.

Comprehensive martial arts: relying on thunderbolt martial arts to cause dimensionality reduction blows, you can refer to the cool points in it. Of course, this book is not recommended for ordinary readers. Some plots are pure water.

I also feel that since the emergence of the Suzhou forces, I have no intention to watch

Is the heroine the original wife Xiao Longnu? If you don't reply, the default is not

Too casual, not like the real world

The 120,000 words should come to smart promotion

Hahaha, it looks good, Jiedu Xikuang. Support, come on

There is no loss in adding or subtracting entries. Can I keep using it after I refresh it?

Get in touch and I'll give you an interesting brief outline.