Traveling Simultaneously: Across the Heavens

When writing fan fiction, try not to take the perspective away from the protagonist, and don't add too many meaningless dialogues to the supporting characters. Once the perspective is removed from the protagonist, the fan fiction feels like it's being mysterious, pretending to be confused, and it's of no use.

Now there is every reason to suspect that you are the trumpet account opened by Jiang Nan! You, the protagonist, were just as happy as Long Aotian before, but now you are so cowardly that you are sharing a table with Lu Mingfei?

Wouldn't it be enough to just kill the rootless thing? It's useless to keep it.

Go to female channels, male channels are not suitable for you

Write about one person in the next world? I think it's better to forget it. The few books I read in Tongchuanliu were pretty good, but they fell apart when one person was there. It was like Waterloo when one person was there. I suggest you avoid them.

I feel like Dragon Clan is well written. Who cares about Lu Mingfei if there is no profit? I don't even bother to pay attention to him, he's not the protagonist!

For example, take Dragon Clan, don't write too much about Lu Mingfei's submissiveness and all kinds of shady psychology. The protagonist of your book is not Lu Mingfei. You can either let him continue to be a waste, or quickly let him grow up and accept reality. In addition to thinking about the protagonist's woman, you write Lu Mingfei who always laughs at himself for being a waste. As a result, the protagonist still inexplicably thinks that this child must be good. Don't you think it's strange? I can see that you want to write a long story, and there are ups and downs in writing, but the length of each world in the same time period limits you to a certain extent to write a long story, so I have a suggestion, either speed up the pace or add more updates, but I think the current situation is even more unrealistic, and you have started to get stuck, so you can try to speed up the pace. This speeding up the pace does not necessarily mean that the plot speeds up. The best thing is to make the protagonist more involved in your story, appear more, show more saints, I suggest you adopt it yourself, or you can find a solution yourself.

It can only be said that it starts but ends in the snow, and the relationship is too mother-in-law. I suggest you learn the Whale Killing Boxing

Tongchuanliu is a cool novel, it is to watch the protagonist kill everyone, either he is unwilling to save, or he goes his own way to fight through the world. Your writing is grinding and grinding, and there is no point of enjoyment at all. You used to go into the snow to kill everything and it looked so comfortable. Now you are starting to do Wen Qing. I don't understand your idea. If I think Wen Qing, then the beginning is Wen Qing, and the writing at the beginning is more exciting. Now Wen Qing, trick it into killing, right?

The story of one person should have ended long ago. The biggest problem is that what everyone wants to see is the story of the protagonist, not Lu Linglong. The writing is as if the protagonist has been changed.

Chen Motong is the queen carefully selected by Gattuso, and Pompeii is the daughter-in-law of the Wind King Odin There is also a certain probability that she is the witch used to neutralize the blood of the Black King How could she encounter a conspiracy and almost overturn her mission?

What will you write next? After you entered the Beiliang Prince's Mansion, the Beiliang Prince apologized to you and asked you to take care of Xu Fengnian. Did you really take care of him? This protagonist doesn't owe Xu Fengnian anything. If you really want to write it like this, then you'd better stop writing this book as soon as possible. It's ridiculous!

I feel like the problem with this book is that the audience of Tongchuanliu basically paid for the cool points of the protagonist who almost continuously gathered in the early stage to crush everyone. Sometimes a few chapters can speed through a world, but the author obviously likes to give too much ink to the supporting characters. I originally saved dozens of chapters and skipped to the current Dragon Clan without reading it. I found that there are a lot of inks about the supporting characters. The author may also want to use these inks to pave the way for the cool points of the protagonist appearing as a saint in front of others, but the problem is that there is a bit too much foreshadowing and a little bit of cool points related to the protagonist.

I'm too lazy to even name the chapters. I'll probably cut them as soon as the manuscript is saved and posted.

Water is fine, stop writing youthful diseases and fix the scar literature

I tried this book again, but it got blocked after I cut it.

If you kill Wenqing again and kill another heroine, then bye-bye

No, it's all about traveling through time, and even behind the scenes. A behind-the-scenes stream of two worlds in a row.

It's normal for no one to watch Snow. When you voted for what to write in the next world, a lot of people voted for Snow. Isn't it because it was so fun to write about Snow? Let's take a look at these forty chapters. In summary, there are only two plots, with Nangong wandering, Fu Hua's marriage, and the killing of the Xu family in the middle. What has it been separated from before? In the extreme, it is equivalent to everyone coming to see the ghosts, the savage Wuji is also acceptable, and even the giant sun paradise is not unacceptable, but in the end, Lu Mingfei came out. To be honest, if I had known that there was such a foot wrap in the snow, no one would have thrown it into the snow. Regarding the Dragon Clan in the next world, I suggest the author read what he wrote before and continue the Dragon Clan style he wrote before. If it is separated like this, I will really feel bad. (Gu is used as an example because Gu's characters have very distinct personal characteristics, and you can basically tell what you know at a glance)

Dragons are the best, and it is more natural to get involved in relationships. It's okay in the snow, because it has family members getting along with each other, and the subsequent massacre of the city and the murder of relatives in revenge can be considered a explosive point. Fox Demon Secondly, I feel that the relationship with the Dongfang family is inexplicable. It is better to write about the defense line. It is superfluous to have the setting of the sword and the escape from the city. It is better to just write about the defense and the failure to defeat an arm, and then the tragic death of my partner. I live incognito and am depressed, which is better than this.

I knew it would cut. It was the same with the previous book. The biggest problem with this author is that the writing is okay but the plot is a mess.

Author, if you want to cut it off, just say so. You don't say that it is a bad character. Those who follow it have to read it every day. After reading it, you haven't updated it. I'll just block your book next time

6. It seems that he is still a eunuch. I will never order his book next time. It is a waste of money.

If you put up a vote and there are many people voting for Xuezhong, do you really want to write about Xuezhong? In today's fast-paced world, who would want to read a full-length original novel? I told you to write the dragon clan first, but you didn't listen. It's a gimmick, and it's out of context to keep people's appetites, but in the end it's nothing.

Am I the only one who thinks Xuezhong's writing is very good?🙂

The author seems to have opened a new book with the same name as this one