Doomsday: a Future Evil God Every Week

High martial arts, doomsday, mythology, evil gods, and the Monkey King, these are completely contradictory. If you can write one million words, you will be considered good. There will only be two results in the future. One is that there will be few readers until the end, and the other is that the update will be discontinued because it is wrong from the foundation.

Make hay, there are several shocking points in the novel, the seal has no reward, the pollution of substitution has not been cleared, and the prisoners can take the initiative to counterattack without consequences.

If the rhythm can be maintained like this and it doesn't crash, I'll order at least 5k It's quite exciting.

After following it for two or three days, I personally feel that the content is very good, especially the scene where the protagonist and the character battle wits, and the climax where the second prisoner appears. But there weren't many people there the past few days, so I was a little worried about whether this book would be popular. I read some good reviews in the comment area today, and I feel like I got it right. You guys have good taste. Come on, author!

The writing is quite good. It's just that the pace is a bit slow, and I haven't gotten started yet.

Generally speaking, the protagonist's strength increases too slowly, resulting in very little enjoyment.

I have one thing to say, it is better to put a Gatanjie or Hyperjedon in the body. This kind of creation is stronger than these demonic cultivators.

Mouth melon! Not enough to read! ! !

Come on, author, it's a good start and it feels good to maintain the standard.

After reading dozens of them, I felt a bit bored. There were too many miscellaneous side plots and trivial matters, and he kept flirting with the heroine. Either he had sex or he had to stop doing so many things. It was annoying to watch. What I wanted to see was getting stronger, not a weakling thinking about it. After getting stronger, the enemies can only be slapped. If you don't get stronger, wouldn't planning these things be a waste of time and increase the risk? Especially when the protagonist behaves towards the heroine as if he can foresee the future. Isn't this a tightrope walk? What should I do if there is an accident? Maybe the author wants to describe the protagonist secretly controlling the world to become stronger and feel more comfortable? But all I see is that the main character is doing a lot of things and is constantly looking for trouble. Isn't it more important to become stronger quickly than anything else? Once you become stronger, a bunch of bullshit will still be a problem. On the contrary, now Chaofan has developed so many branch enemies when he just started, but he is still a little loser. Maybe the author finds the writing method interesting and challenging, but even if he is not a Chaofan, he can fight against the fourth and fifth levels with his golden fingers. Have you ever thought about how to write it later?