Red Mansion: There Is Something Wrong with This Jia Huan

Judging from your profile, Qin Keqing plays Jia Huan. Your two characters are too fierce. They must be at least almost ten years apart.

When I read Chapter 14, I felt a little... Very unhappy. I accumulated military merits outside and was promoted to become a general. The protagonist has the highest official position in the family. When I return home, I am no different from the servants. I am still bullied and made things difficult. The emperor's rewards and warnings are of no use. The protagonist is too tolerant. I don't understand why the author arranges it like this. What would the author do if he were the protagonist?

Damn it, I want to see Xiao Jixiang, where is Xiao Jixiang?

The reborn me is fighting the enemy bravely on the front line, and the Duke of Rong is enjoying the good life in the rear.

It would be great if you could change it and eliminate the system. Don't really like the system.

It's okay. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง write well and keep reading. Overall, it's a good article.

Is it difficult to create an original character? ? ?

I skipped the episode after reading it. There are more than 50 chapters, more than 40 chapters of intrigues, and I haven't said a word to Jin Chai. I'm wearing the cover of Hong Lou. It's most likely a female novel. It happens to be free for 15 days on my new mobile phone. If it's free, I'll skip it again. I'm not looking forward to it anymore.

I watched 130, and it was a bit cruel to Baochai. I can't stand it anymore. I personally like her very much, but I can't accept it. Others are okay. If you can accept it, you can watch it.

After reading about forty chapters, the writing skills are online and the plot is smooth, which can be used as food. There are two assumptions, but they are harmless. The disadvantage is that it lacks big highlights? (Maybe) Based on my personal experience in reading Red Mansions, as long as the plot and characters of similar books are not ruined, there is no problem in reading more than a hundred chapters.

I was hampered everywhere, and the grievances I suffered were highlighted, which made me feel unhappy.

I have caught up with the latest chapter, and I want to say that the writing is okay and the text is very smooth, but it is too tedious.

Then the protagonist goes over to lick the original owner and blames the original owner. Even if Yuan Jia Huan is not good, isn't it still alienated? Is the protagonist familiar with Tanchun? Even if Jia Huan is willing to work hard, will Mrs. Wang not become a monster? Your own protagonists all sneak away to become soldiers. I don't understand why the protagonist licks so much. It's a bit too much.

She is also a woman who is influenced by fate. I don't think she has any bad intentions.

There is a bit of water, or ink stains, and the part where Qin Liangyu and Jia Zheng discuss the future with him is not very well written, and the writing style feels a bit childish. Also, this military commander is possessed, and the possessed strength should correspond to a fantasy novel or a martial arts novel.

I don't know why a lot of fan fiction likes to cheat, and the content has nothing to do with the Red Mansion...

The background of Red Mansion is the Qing Dynasty, and it should have the Beijing flavor of Peking City. However, what is strange is that most of the Red Mansion fans either use the Red Mansion story to express their own feelings, and some of them are slightly better and more logical, but they do not have that flavor at all. Is it because there are no writers from Beijing or writers from upper-class families that they can't write like that?