Living Armor: the Birth of a Species

Very well written, brother, come on

Imagination can! In fact, you can read it as a story about farming in another world. The world written by the author is vivid. The funniest thing is the foodie character with one person and one helmet! Haha, funny

A brand new perspective and system, this book is a pioneer

It's very possible. I'll give you a vote. Don't you, the editor, care about it? I won't recommend it before it's put on the shelves, and your genre is more suitable for science fiction than fantasy or fantasy.

A new system, a new road, 👍

It's a fantasy novel with good imagination. The plot is exciting. The author has great imagination and good writing. Come on.

Let me ask you guys, which character in this book is your favorite? Thank you!

Living armor, secret medicine, exotic beasts, city-states, tribes, ruins. It can be seen that the author has a grand setting and has indeed put a lot of effort into it. Judging from the current rhythm, it should be possible to write a long one. It won't be another murmuring poem or a heartfelt survey of the sky, right?

Fun, fun! When I saw Chapter 7, I thought this man and the armor were so damn funny. When I saw Chapter 17, I was a little touched. Seeing Chapter 19 makes my blood boil. When I saw Chapter 40, I felt that this waltz was so awesome! Yes, yes! I haven't seen such an interesting novel in a long time. You must keep writing, it doesn't matter if you go slower, just write well!

Does that saint have something to do with the protagonist?

At first I saw a lot of new terms, which was a bit of an obstacle, but after reading it, I felt like it was really a fairy grass! It's a pity that the author is a newcomer. If he were a great master, this book would be popular. In fact, the 100,000-word urban fairy tale was more to my liking. The character has a resolute personality and is decisive in killing. I wish you good results.

Read it in one sitting! Discover that the worldview setting is bizarre and full of realism. The Seven Armed Conference, the Supreme Judgment Council, the Declaration of the Dawn of Mankind, Watch City, and the Dawn Territory feel a grand world view. The author's writing skills are good, please update more!

It's been a long time since I've seen this kind of article that doesn't have routines and is serious about building a new world! Waltz, Source Code, Wasteland Walker, Overwatch League, Desperate Alliance, Red Fang Tribe, there are a lot of interesting new terms. The more you read, the more interesting it becomes. It's totally impossible to guess what novel things the author will show us. Well, by the way, the protagonist's character of being stubborn when he needs to be stubborn and passionate when he needs to be passionate is very to my liking.

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🙂This introduction reminds me of Kai'Sa from LOL.

I read a little bit, and it was a bit poisonous The plot of the first chapter is okay, but the problem lies in the names of the characters, he, he, he. Writing in the third person, just name the protagonist directly. Who is he? The character from your point of view is the protagonist Fang Mu, not him. The second point is that the inner drama can be eliminated. That sentence will not be the inner speech of paralysis. Direct is a way of writing that makes people unable to concentrate. It is better to change it directly and show some visible physiological reactions. For example, Fang Mu had beads of sweat on his forehead, and there was no feedback when he tried to move his limbs. If you don't say a word, the person reading the book will feel nervous in his heart. Key point: The protagonist is a signal receiver. He should not have his own feelings or express his own feelings, but should pass on all the information in the book to the readers to make them feel. With a protagonist who has self-awareness and feelings, readers can act out the drama in one second. This is a psychological mechanism, and readers can no longer assume the role of a thoughtful character. The protagonist is just a receiver, and then the protagonist's desire can be shown directly through actions to enhance the character building. The first chapter is qualified. The focus is on the reader's psychological feelings, not on the characters. You can inspire readers' psychological feelings, making it difficult not to sign a contract.

And why didn't I sign a contract and couldn't vote monthly?