
Lights on the Way Home
灯火归途
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 14 Words
- Genre
- Urban
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Superpowers
- Source
- Qidian
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Keep at it, you will be a millionaire, come on!
The term "black people of Kunlun origin" would be a bit awkward when placed in a novel with a modern setting. I had doubts when I read it. I just checked AI and it is indeed not suitable.
Platinum juice, come on 😍
The author sticks to what he thinks in his heart, and a million words will make him a god
It's a bit strange. The protagonist's psychological activities and behavior in the mourning hall are strange. Why do I feel angry suddenly, and why does the sense of absurdity not appear before anger. Since you don't know what kind of weird people they are, why don't you ask? Since the messenger asked the protagonist to attend the funeral, he at least had contact with him, so why don't you resist asking? Did these people all arrive after the protagonist entered the mourning hall? It feels like the protagonist suddenly entered this body at the beginning of the novel and knows nothing about the environment. There is too little description of the five senses of the protagonist. Doesn't he have any other feelings except the eyes? The noisy environment should be expressed through sound (it should be described at the beginning of the novel), and there should be no talking scenes. So I felt like I was watching a mime, or a picture scroll (except for the interaction with the old black man). What about the sound of fighting? What about the noise of the quarrel? What about the band's instrumental sound?