Starting from an Immortal Official and Becoming a Deity

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He took the first place in the pig's trotter exam all the way, and even graduated and became an official in his freshman year, which made the third-year Taoist students feel inferior for a lifetime. After being an official for three years, he took the ladder and saved 5,000 people from emptying a cave to build a foundation. He is so awesome and high-profile. The author, why do you call this Gou? The content has nothing to do with the title of the book. What do you think? I just want to use the word "gou" to gain traffic, rubbish! There is no need to look at the rest. That awesome thing can go directly to the sky. It is empty and big. Everything else is useless and has no meaning at all.

A poor family means that the ancestors have been wealthy. The protagonist's family has been farming for generations. This is not a poor family at all, but a muddy family.

How can this second uncle be so short-sighted as a businessman? Being able to sign up successfully means that he is already at the first level of Qi training. He knowingly breaks off relations with an immortal cultivator and refuses to accommodate him even though he is going for an exam. This is not something that a qualified and accomplished relative can do.

Cheating is no better than others. The protagonist also broke through one month earlier than others. In the March period, the protagonist's fate, proficiency panel, and chance blessings will give you a trace of 52 auras in two days. The proficiency reaches a breakthrough in one day and two months in Qi training. According to three days and one silk, 180 days, you, a supporting character, only have 60 silks of spiritual energy. Where did you get 40 silks of spiritual energy?

The further you go, the less you can stand it. It's a good thing that there wasn't much involvement in the plot of Immortal Dynasty in the early stages. After reading later, I discovered that the setting of the Immortal Dynasty in this book is completely opposite to the cultivation of immortality. The so-called Immortal Dynasty is exactly the same as the ancient feudal dynasty, which is denying the concept of immortality. You have denied the idea of ​​cultivation, so why write a novel about immortality? As for the setting of being controlled in cultivating immortals, what kind of super power does it take to do it? It's funny that such a powerful person can't even destroy monsters and monsters, and even established a feudal dynasty. There are no other immortal cultivators of the same level to slap him down

Overall, it's good, but some plots need to be carefully conceived, and some are quite inexplicable 1. As mentioned earlier, the second uncle is related to the grandfather and the protagonist. I thought he was the second uncle. The author can't tell the difference between the uncle and the uncle. It was not until the next few dozen pictures that the second uncle's name came out 2. The protagonist went to the exam immediately and arrived at the examination room. He didn't know how many admission places there were. Several examiners were talking about it 3. The announcement of the scores was quite funny. The second one was announced first, then the third one, and finally the first one. Forcibly pretending to be cool, just three, two, and one is enough, how can there be two, three, and one 4. Zhang Daochang knows that the protagonist has amazing talent, and does not provide resources to the protagonist. From the beginning to the end, I felt that no help was provided, and the treatment of the disciples who entered the house was a bit poor 5. The protagonist went to Fucheng immediately, and Taoist Zhang introduced his connections in the county to the protagonist at a banquet, which made me even more confused. I changed a big map, what is the use of the connections in the county? I can't figure it out Such as this makes me confused. There are a lot of things that are a bit baffling. Maybe some of them are due to my misunderstanding. If there is any inappropriateness, please feel free to comment.

You're selling dog meat on a sheep's head. You've been pushing people all the way to say that Goucheng is a god. Is he a real dog or a fake?

This kind of novel that was crazy about Jenga in the early days is a bit like that book about how to become an immortal without money, but that book collapsed later, and this one is probably going to be too soon. The writing in the early stage of Qi training was too exaggerated, and there is not much room for imagination later. It should be the scene where the Crazy Tyrant Ice Shock Sky Spear stabbed the Shadow Emperor Crayfish, Jenga over Jenga, it's not interesting at all

I don't understand where Gou is

How to put it this way, many of the settings and parameters in this book are very poisonous. When the first-level high-grade magic weapon for cultivating immortals was first released, it was said to be rare and could only be sold by the big families. If you put thousands of taels of silver behind it, it disgusted me to death. Also, when the author writes about the political system, he writes in a mess. If you don't understand it, just write less. I'm confused when it comes to explaining the setting, but there are still some merits in the fighting of cultivating immortals, spells and techniques, and the character of the protagonist is still okay. But your title is "Go to Heaven", and I don't see it. The content is just a traditional routine, some big competition, the protagonist is a dark horse, counterattacking all the way, is this Gou? And the protagonist is modest, you can just open and shut up and get lucky, but no, what are you doing if you can't get on the stage?

In one foundation-building period, we conquered a place that several big states couldn't handle. There were several Zifus in one Oyuan Prefecture. This was too illogical. How many foundation-builders in the far north were enough for the Zifus to kill? Also, with one foundation building, you can look at the capital of Zhou Dynasty, and the Zi Mansion is not allowed to take off, and you will fight whoever you see. . . Also, the iron law of the Great Zhou Dynasty is that no one can be promoted unless he is in good condition. Then he gives various excuses to the protagonist. This iron rule is too weak, and Da Zhou slaps himself in the face. Just one born god can ignore the entire Great Zhou Dynasty. This dynasty of cultivating immortals is not that good either. No one can hold it back. . . .

After reading it, the name is not worthy of the name. The name is Gou, but the reality is not Gou.

Damn it, not to mention the Qi training period, it is illegal to become a god, even Qi training to foundation building is illegal, so early, so prominent, there are too many realms higher than you, just one look, the protagonist will die. Reality is not a game, low-level maps only have low-level monsters

There are too many places to read books, and they are inconsistent. The sixth apprentice is written in the front, and the ninth one appears in the back. The white records written earlier can lead directly to foundation building, but later there are heaven tests and so on. It looks like a mess.

The title of this one is quite funny: Only the top two will be selected in this road test, why are you trying to get the top three? And Wang Teng is the son of the county magistrate. Knowing that only the top two will be chosen (not to mention that the county magistrate doesn't know that only the top two will be chosen), why would he look at the rankings when he is ranked third?

People are not as short-sighted as you wrote. Even in my grandfather's time, he had to go to school. As long as he could continue to read, relatives could help each other. Those who couldn't help would not be so short-sighted. The author gave me a picture of severing ties and writing villains. We all know it. Even if there are only 1% of people, there are still many if the population base is large. In addition, I will kick stones and touch noses to see if they are time travellers. If they are not, they will not have a sense of substitution. If they are, the writing is poisonous, so they should not be. Otherwise, I would be helpless if this kind of writing could even be on the new book list.

It was written as if the master was plotting to harm the protagonist, but he just let the protagonist stay for a while. Why did the protagonist's heart sink a little? You always sink, and he clenched his hands slightly. Various small movements made the protagonist nervous and afraid of death, but nothing happened.

What else can I say to block you? Are you adding 40 strands of spiritual energy breakthrough and Qi training to this supporting character just to watch the protagonist take the exam and pretend to be awesome to create a sense of excitement? With such a big trick, you can't compare to others 🤭

To be honest, the plot is okay, but it is too cliche. The plot of coming out of the assessment and then being punished is really not interesting.

Since if you want to build a foundation, you can only grant it to Qinglu, otherwise it will be a wild cultivator, then where do the foundations of the various chambers of commerce here come from?

The further you read, the less you can stand it. How did the protagonist live for so long? He's so good at building foundations, but he can't go to heaven when he gets to Zi Mansion. He just doesn't act according to the law from the beginning. Doesn't the court lose face? I feel like it was written too idealistically. In other books like this, the protagonist is not so bold. You are not the best in the world, why do you feel like the first?

💩The same thing, pushing the realm, having a younger sister, the male pig licking all kinds of things, not being strict about it, being high-profile everywhere, Chapter 200 Tiankao is the most disgusting, if you break through a foundation building, you have to be punished, if you break through the foundation building without being punished, you will die, crazy, this is caused by the male pig's high profile, no one is more disgusting than Jian Tiansi, the other people have a grudge against the male pig, this woman is pure rotten

I can't stand it anymore, it's a waste of my points

The writing of this volume of Thirty Thousand Miles is too rough. In the end, the protagonist inexplicably gets involved with the villain organization in the previous plot to rescue the suppressed true spirits. There is no foreshadowing at all. Only the protagonist thinks that his demotion is due to the factional dispute in the court. The big boss plans that he is here to release the suppressed true soul. There is no foreshadowing for the faction fight in the court or the big boss's plot. It's inexplicable!

It's strange. The last two pictures seem a bit messy. Were they written by someone?

This has become immortal history, why don't we change the conditions at home? , It's still that small bedroom. Could it be that the author is also a stingy person in reality?

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The author should change the title of the book. First, the current title does not fit the content. I don't think the protagonist is "stoic". Second, the current title hides the excitement of the content.