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It's just that the backend is a little watery, and there is no distinction between priorities. Some of the pretense and sensational routines have been tried and tested. They are too repetitive and I am a bit tired of watching them. The plot is really slow as a tortoise. At this pace, it is probably two million words for the second-level academy and three million words for the third-level academy. The story of one academy is a bit too long. Old bookworms like me may prefer to see the court and officialdom earlier. , As well as the changes in the operation of the entire big world, the world view does not need to be big, but it is always a little boring to stick to a small college. However, the author is so terrifying. Just this one-third of an acre makes me, a very picky person, enjoy watching it. If the subsequent plot is slightly improved and adjustments are made, not to mention platinum, the great master is just around the corner!

To be honest, the writing is very good, but the main problem is that it is too watery. I can read it across 3 chapters, and it does not affect the plot at all, and it still stays on the original theme

I feel like the writing style of Eagle is indeed large in volume, but the plot is a bit weak. Sensationalism is a bit frequent, but the overall feeling is that it is above the level of food and grass, and it can still reach the level of a great god if it is stable.

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More than 600,000 words, new book list? ! I also misread it, 50,000 updates per day, awesome👍👍👍

It is most likely written by an old author who has replaced his vest. It is a very high-level new sect of fairy fantasy. At least there are more than 100 chapters. Generally, novice writers or newcomers cannot write it. There is an entry barrier for the major subjects of Eastern fantasy and enlightenment. Although this book's pretentiousness will make people It's uncomfortable, but being able to write the enlightenment flow instead of the leveling flow by taking medicine has already determined that the lower limit of this book will not be too low, and the upper limit is the top ten in the fairy fantasy list. This book can be regarded as a powerful new book after Shennong Daojun. Although Shennong is very slow in the middle stage, it depends on how this book handles the middle and late stages.

The amount is large and the water is large. Those who can tolerate the large amount of water can watch it, a bit like Shen Nong Daojun.

It can be seen from the writing that it is a female author...

It's well written, but it's a bit too watery.

After reading the work, I remembered what Chen Liuzi said in the TV series "Dayanfang" criticizing the kitchen chef: When he asked you to cook seafood, you bought a fish and poured a large pot of water. The smell of sea was floating all over the factory, and there was only a fish bone at the bottom of the pot.

I always feel that the protagonist's pretense is very stiff.

Where did a group of non-subscribers come from to advertise a crappy book like Shennong Daojun?

I followed a chapter from beginning to end without missing a chapter, but I had a lot of questions, many, many, many, many, many, many, many details that were not dealt with properly and had almost no connection with the context. In the early stage, the spell responsibility field was written and practiced, one to two to three. It's all fantasy in it, but when it comes to the big exam, it's almost no longer a test of magic. If you want to be an official, what's wrong with the previous spells? Then just learn to be an official. What's the use of the previous "Hundreds of families let go of school, farmers and civil servants". Now every time I read it, I read it as a new novel. The most important thing is that I can't accept it. The emperor asked the candidates how many acres of land sold at home when you came to take the exam. Oh my god, didn't you have to practice cultivation when you go to the second-level academy? Fifty taels, right? Don't you have to go to a third-level hospital to take the big exam? How can you go to a third-level hospital if your family doesn't have money? And if you are already in the Formation Realm, will you have no money? My family bought a field to take the exam. Is this a history essay? The big exam in the previous question is very difficult and difficult. The people in Qingyun class are all in the cast body realm. Since you have to prepare for the big exam, why don't you teach how to be an official? I really don't see the connection. Let's change the outline. It's completely written as a historical fictional novel. The previous text and the following text don't match up. There is no connection between the former and the latter. To be honest, the two can be regarded as two novels. I don't have any desire to read them. The ninth-grade official in the front is so awesome. Although there is a common problem in the back with Dora's crotch, but have all the fantasy been thrown away? I can open a separate fictional historical novel in the future, which has nothing to do with the comprehensive fantasy novel Now I have opened a new outline to establish ten pillars, no problem, it is all about thoughts, what does it have to do with comprehensiveness, I will tell you the truth, your writing is fine, the outline must have problems and the connection is not good.

This book is really curious! I've never seen anything like this. I've been reading novels for more than ten years. I've written 1.6 Million words. There are no scenes of killing, fighting or confronting people. Wow🐮

It's well written, but it's too watery, the plot moves too slowly, and there are too many descriptions that have nothing to do with the plot.

The writing is also good and the plot is full; the water is also real water

Did you read that right? Fifty thousand updates per day? ? ?

The author came out with so much at once, I, I want to swallow them all. The author has stopped updating. He is going to be drained.

Brother, stop showing off your fairy grass. Everyone gets chills when I see these four words.

It is known that Wang Ye has been in the second-level academy for three years, and his biggest advantage is the eighth-grade spiritual husband certificate, and the protagonist has only been promoted to the second-level academy for a few months? He is an eighth-grade spiritual husband, and he is also favored by the fruit status. Everyone with a discerning eye knows that the protagonist will destroy Wang Ye in the future, right? This is better than the inspection who thinks that giving a shabby official to the protagonist is a reward. The protagonist does not accept it because he is too ambitious. Passers-by think that the protagonist does not accept it because he is confident, rather than because he has real ability? It would be best if Wang Ye goes to the third-level academy and becomes a passerby. Having Wang Ye become an immortal official really makes the protagonist look like a clown. I have been equal to you for a few months, but a broken eighth-level immortal official thinks that I am only worthy of a minor official.

Why are there so few reviews for such a good-looking book? I've read too many books about killing people or going through suffering and enmity. This book is really good, but it's a pity that there are so few.

I've been looking at it for a long time. The more I look at it, the more I look like the eunuch Shennong.

The first time I saw a novel was awkward and clichéd. Wenqing's illness was too serious.

Isn't the author really a Kamui captain?

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The writing is okay, but the author is a bit literate. There are long paragraphs of psychological activities and rhetoric, and the rhythm of the plot is problematic.

It is rare to see a novel that can build character relationships and promote the development of the main line with goodwill and mutual understanding between people Although there are suspicions of deliberate sensationalism in some places, it is indeed a little touching Praise to the author

Fortunately, the author is not an immortal official of the Great Zhou Dynasty. How can he win the hearts of the people by going back on his word and changing his orders day by day?

There are no good books at Qidian. Is there any Shen Nong?