At the Beginning of the Rickshaw Puller, I Started to Lie Flat and Become Stronger.

Since the shadow can take care of its own food and clothing when eating, why should it be better to pull the cart and count all the time as the remaining time of the system?

The bigger the golden finger, the better. It can do anything, whatever the protagonist is asked to do. . It can both simulate and simulate everything. Directly becoming an immortal, Martial Ancestor is the one. Simulation feedback is already awesome. Everything is simulated. . It's so confusing that when I write, I just hit things one at a time and it's very messy. If it could just simulate martial arts, it would be good, it would be easy to write, and it would be easy to write without digressing from the topic. The rest is just miscellaneous.

It is recommended to write a smaller path. The situation is huge and the writing is not clear at all. Many places are not smooth. Sometimes the protagonist's character and thoughts conflict, left and right, which looks weird. The consequences of the awkwardness make it harder for you to write.

Do you treat readers as fools? A modern person who has no knowledge of literature or martial arts and no skills at all can only endure eating pig food every day. Logic doesn't make sense

This book is very novel. I have read too many routine articles and suddenly found this book. I feel it is so exciting that I can't stop for a moment. The author will update soon.

Although you can pretend to agree, the protagonist's personality may be the type to talk about things. He did not make a choice that complied with the rules, but made a choice that was consistent with the character's behavior. It can only be said that this was not the best choice for the situation at the time. It would be boring if the character always develops the story according to logic. Let him make mistakes and make him pay the price, which is also a kind of attraction.