Mortal: Fishing in the Heavens Starts from Qixuanmen

I haven't started reading it yet. I'll save it first and then read it after 300,000 words.

It's useless to write if you don't have spiritual roots. I don't understand that there are many authors who swarm to eat the traffic of mortals. They like to create a perverted plug-in, and then the protagonist is a waste material. As a result, the things written are basically garbage. It is really that the more awesome the plug-in is, the more useless the protagonist is. The essence of the original work is not touched at all.

A cool article is a cool article, so why suppress it like this? Alas, I might as well take it off the shelf and rewrite it.

Author, Han Li only has one Taoist couple and two beauties, so don't go over there and be a prostitute. Nangong Wan is nice and beautiful, but she is Han Li's Taoist companion, so you should send her to Han Li. You may not be able to attract harem readers by writing a collection, so why bother offending readers like us who hope to make friends with you.

Eighty percent of the mortal novels are harem novels, and I'm tired of reading them. I don't know if this one is a harem novel. It seems that every novel that involves the Mo Mansion is a harem, and some include all the wives and daughters of Old Man Mo.

Nowadays, 80% of people who watch mortal fandom are newcomers to the anime industry. Due to their ugly modeling in the early stages and their one-night stand with no plot or emotional basis, they are very reluctant to take the blame. To put it bluntly, we don't want to mess with the female characters before Xinghai, because the modeling is too ugly. The top three female characters must be Mei Ning, Song Yu, and Zi Ling. The current version of Mu Peiling is even more powerful. She is almost a one-man army. After the anime adaptation, Mu Peiling actually attracted many female anime fans.

It feels like the author doesn't have a main line, he just comes up with whatever he wants.

Good guy, no spiritual roots🙂

I originally thought that the four spiritual roots and the five spiritual roots were already at their limit, but I didn't expect that another one would come out who didn't have any spiritual roots to refine the body.

After reading Chapter 30, I originally thought that the author wanted to focus on physical training in the human world to become stronger. However, in Chapter 30, the spiritual roots were introduced again. It was a bit new before, but now it is gone. Also, the protagonist in the author becomes wise too quickly and shows no signs of caution. Look at Han Li, how long has the little green bottle been hidden, and how long has your protagonist been hiding the cornucopia 😅

No brainwriting, ten cards with three poison spots. A mortal said to Master Jinguang that he was an immortal cultivator and then shouted about his spiritual roots. Then he sent me a message to Xin Ruyin and said his name. Later, when I asked how he knew the name, he said that he had a friend who was an immortal cultivator and he happened to know that Xin Ruyin's name was also a formation master. He was so awesome. He came here for the golden finger setting. It was a waste of time.

Qidian. Com has too many authors now, and many veteran authors have turned away. New authors should calm down and just write first. Isn't it normal to have poor grades? How can there be so many talented newcomers who become gods in one book? Just work hard to finish the book smoothly and slowly find your own rhythm. Newcomers have nothing, no fame, and no experience. They are like barefoot. The most important thing is to keep working hard. Those old authors have already put on vests, and the great master Bai Jin has lived a decent life. You are a newcomer and have just started. You have your shortcomings and advantages. If a newcomer dares to write anything, his liver will be ruined. Come on author! Just calm down, believe in yourself, and just stick to it! It is recommended that you increase your concentration and take a look at it if your mentality becomes bad in the future.

What Xin Ruyin writes is not like a person, who is almost the same as an NPC, but like a love brain. The protagonist supports unconditionally whatever he wants.

There can be love, but it can't be all love. This is a fairy tale. Pay more attention to strengthening yourself and fighting. You can have more, you can have an audience, but you can't give it away. If you don't want to accept it, it's better to downplay the plot. Don't have too deep plot involvement. You can write about Han Li, but you can't help without brains. Han Li's character in the original text means that he will never trust others, so licking his face and helping without brains is not a pure nanny? What I want to see is how the protagonist changes and experiences in this world with Han Li. Otherwise, it is better to read the original text of Mortal.

The timing of accepting Han Li as his apprentice made me extremely embarrassed.

Mortals have to cultivate immortality Damn it

It can be seen that the author is too careless about data verification. A Xuanyin Pill needs one pill every year during the Qi training period, and 200 or 300 medicinal materials are used to refine a batch of five or six pills, which lasts for 5 or 6 years. The foundation period requires 700 years of medicinal materials. According to the cultivation speed of ordinary mortals, Biyun Fairy needs at least 2 or 3 furnaces of Qi Training period pills, and more than 10 furnaces to build the foundation. For elixirs in the base period, 700-year-old elixirs require 10 pills. This requires 100% successful refining. The elixir-forming monks have been running around for more than ten years for a 500-year-old elixir. They have to fight with monks of the same level for a thousand-year elixir, which consumes most of their wealth. Who do you think you can afford to spend it? Yuanying's daughter or a Taoist companion? This is still the same kind of elixir. Even if you have money, you may not be able to collect it, but you can still live for more than ten years during the elixir formation period? Do you think this data is correct?

Give me an accurate answer on whether to follow or not.

Is there Song Yu as the heroine? The anime modeling is quite nice, if you don't return it, it will be disabled by default.

I saw the chapter about Yan Ruyan. Looking at the author's attitude, when he sees a woman, no matter what the person's purpose is, he just can't get out of the way. As a reader, I have nothing to say. I just hate the harem genre. As long as the harem is opened early, the exchange of books can be faster. If you open the harem when you have the ability to complete it, then it will be completed in action...

Do you want another eunuch? Hey, I just entered one today and now you have to enter too.

Is there any physical training involved in cultivating immortality? What kind of training system is this? Pangu? The witch clan's system?

It's very good. When a mortal cultivates immortality, it depends on mortals. It depends on geniuses cultivating immortality and evildoers cultivating immortality. There are many other books on immortality cultivation. The reason why The Legend of Mortal Cultivating Immortality has been popular for nearly 20 years and still has people liking it, isn't it because of the vivid mortal characters?

Judging from the author's current progress, it has been stopped for 8 days. It is estimated that it is about to be cut. Before, it was very short and weak, one page a day. It seems that this book is going to die. To be honest, this novel is quite in line with my appetite. It is a pity to cut it.