The Cats I Raise Have Superpowers!

This synopsis is written like I'm some kind of god. Has anyone read it? How does it compare to this one?

Is this thing, which looks so much like a bear, wolf, or dog, some kind of god?

Author, please proofread your work after you finish writing. There are several typos and grammatical errors.

The room was pitch black, moonlight streaming through the window, casting a faint shadowy silhouette. A tabby cat shuffled in, its face slowly revealing itself—a black cat. "Did you bring the dog-egg stuff? Meow, call me Nicholas Sangbiao, got it?" "Yes, boss. That woman didn't notice." The black cat carefully opened the box, tossed the green powder in its paws, then sniffed it.

To give a brief review, I've only read a few dozen chapters. Overall, it's passable, and many plot points are quite interesting. However, there are occasional glaring plot points that are really off-putting. It depends on personal taste, but for me, it's just...

Just to clarify, many cats actually already consider themselves the owners of their cat owners and don't need any kind of spiritual revival.