Career Refresh? Are You Sure It's Not a Girly Refresh?

Like the title, I have caught up with the latest chapter now, and I feel that the emotions written by the author are really delicate, the kind that will make people twist and turn after reading it 😏 Especially Jiang Yu's emotional expression From the beginning, I was curious about the outside world that I had never been in contact with; then I was touched by the dream of my best friend and had the idea of ​​​​wanting to get out of the mountains; until the end, I felt reluctant to say goodbye to the male protagonist and could no longer hide my desire to get out of the mountains and go to the other side of the mountains. A girl who was born deep in the mountains, but longs to get out of the mountains; a simple and lovely girl; a girl who longs for a better future and dares to work hard. This image has become three-dimensional and full. Let's talk about the division of the text into volumes We have already reached the second copy, but we haven't divided it into volumes yet, which makes it look a bit troublesome. It's okay now, just two copies. If there are more later, it will be torture. If you want to read a previous story, you have to look for it by the chapter name. For readers, the volume division will make it clearer to know the current reading progress, which story they have reached, and how long it will take for the story to end. The above are all my personal suggestions and reflections. I can't say whether they are right or wrong 😁 I hope the author's book will achieve great success and be read by more people Come on~!

Quickly call the police and rescue the people in Jiangyu Village. Just write an elf and kidnap a magician, make the background completely fake, and only the heroine be real. It turns out that the background is not fake. In reality, it seems that only the heroine has the ability to score 600 points in the college entrance examination. If the background is true, there are still people imprisoned in the village. Thinking about this possibility, it makes me sick to see the protagonist who is still in love with a criminal.

Man, to be honest, the emotional descriptions in this book are very delicate, but it is not suitable for posting on a male channel. It's not that your writing is not good, it's mainly because the audience is wrong.

For example, if you map all the people, you can just complete the task anyway.

Is this book good to read? For me, it was pretty good. There were some poisonous points but it was acceptable. The heroine was also portrayed very delicately. I read the latest chapter in one go and it was as expected until the end. I couldn't read more than 100 times - it was only 32. I was surprised at first, because although it is not a masterpiece, it is still at the level of food. Why is it so cold? It reminds me of another book I read before, which was also sloppy and unfinished... No, that book was written by you! Then your problem has been solved. The old problem is still there when you open a new book. What's even more frightening is that you thought you had changed it. Not only does it change the worldview, but the heroine you wrote is too similar to a female protagonist - the advantages and disadvantages are obvious, but the advantages are all beautiful women, self-improvement and love-minded. The shortcomings are more obvious: her shortcomings are not her fault, but are caused by the environment in which she grew up, not her fault. It's a good read, the descriptions are delicate, and it can make people empathize and sympathize, but they are all based on a template and I will soon become tired of the aesthetics. Except for their different identities and occupations, everything else is the same. I can understand that the author likes this kind of women, but since the novel is a harem novel, it must have its own merits, rather than changing the skin. Another shortcoming is that the protagonist is too logical. He does not use his brain to play each dungeon, and does not make full use of the props, items and skills that come with the character. He just pushes it and the boat reaches the bridge. It is difficult for readers to become sticky because it is easy to guess what will happen next. In summary, the author wants to write it well and then revise it carefully. Readers who are still waiting can read it. It will be above the level of food and grass, and we will wait until the others are put on the shelves.

Jiangjiang is here, the author cheers for me, and feeds Wangzai steamed buns, Coca-Cola, 7X, Mirinda, lollipops, and a can of pineapple beer hehehe——

In fact, I rarely read daily articles, but the writing is very good, and it has the sour smell of love. Keep up the good work!

There are Jiang Yu and Shirley in the real world, and they are still there in the third mission world. They also say that the mission world is the same world. I don't understand the author's thoughts. Can't you understand?

I want to keep it up, but I'm afraid that the author will give up writing if he sees that he hasn't followed up on reading. Just follow up and read a little bit of progress every day, but it's not enough to keep you appetizing. Well

The more I look at that first brother, the more disgusting I feel. Can you kill this adoptive father as soon as possible?

I feel that the writing in this book is quite good, but it doesn't match the results. I may not recommend it.

For other books, you usually need to subscribe after 70 or 80 chapters. Why haven't you received a subscription reminder for this book with more than 130 chapters? I'm confused. I don't know if it's already on the shelves or if I've turned on automatic subscription. I can't think straight.

A rich girl from the Victorian era being hunted by a murderer with a high IQ? How can you save her when you are 17 and defenseless? After three months of companionship, I immediately developed a liking for the rich girl. Relying on the system's ability to rewind time, I was determined to save her. However, the garbage operation at the beginning was discovered by a highly intelligent murderer, and he squatted at the resurrection point and died immediately. So run away like a clown from this place that makes you incompetent🤡. The miko lady who has been exorcizing demons for generations and her cheap sister, as well as the small village that needs to be protected, have a slightly different start this time. They turned into the spirit body of a dead little fox. A giant snake several thousand meters high, a cat demon lord in the city, and raging ghosts and monsters. This is a world more magical than Journey to the West, and a human village living without dignity. The simple villagers picked up torches at night, and the shrine was filled with filth and evil spirits. It seemed that this village was not as simple as it seemed. The strange movement under the well next to the cherry tree, and the tragedy of annihilating the village that is about to happen in three months. How can you, a weakling, save this cheap sister and protect her only village? When you open the door, something will come in When you open your eyes, you find that you are lying in a pool of blood. A pale-faced girl sat slumped in the kitchen opposite, holding a knife in her hand. You raised your head slightly, and next to you was the disemboweled woman, looking at you with her eyes open. There is blood on the dining table, on the floor, on the sofa, including on your body. Opposite the girl was a black monster with blood dripping from its sharp claws. Your body moved before your thoughts, you grabbed the stool and threw it at the monster as hard as you could. The monster staggered after being hit, and then roared at you. Fresh shredded meat drooped in the smelly mouth. While the monster was struggling, you stood up vigorously. The girl in the kitchen seemed to be stunned and looked at you in shock. You grabbed her hand and ran towards the outside of the house. "Daddy" she called you softly. Please protect the girl from the monsters. The girl is a good girl at home. He is also a good child with excellent academic performance in school. If you study peacefully, you will also work peacefully in the future. But one day when I came home, I opened the door and found that my parents were dead at home. Then the unknown stranger possessed Dad. Interlude Victoria's Rich Girl (continued) You killed the murderer, but it's actually nothing special. You lie on the ground and smile wildly. The rich girl next to you ran over, fell to the ground, hugged most of your body and cried loudly. This is the best ending, you told her with a smile. You woke up, and a childish voice sounded in your ears. You open your eyes. The aching body was weak and weak. You realize that you are about four or five years old. It is dark next to you, and a few rays of light from outside shine through the cracks in the rocks and shine on your face. You turned your head, the sun shone on the big black eyes opposite you, and you found a little girl of four or five years old opposite. This is a small cave. The entrance to the cave was blocked by stones and the smell was a bit unpleasant. Just as you were about to speak in confusion, you were startled by a few wolf howls in your ears. The little girl covered your mouth in fear and leaned her body against the pile of rocks. There was a wolf outside, clawing at the pile of rocks again, and I became even more excited when I heard the sounds inside. Why we are here, you kind of don't understand. "Blood... Blood sacrifice." The smoke was everywhere and the people were in dire straits. Please let the girl from the Republic of China live and accept her as a disciple (raise her as an adult)

Do you need a license to sell bacon online?

After 8 chapters, it was gone all of a sudden. It wasn't enough!

The front row is not enough! Let's raise it for a while.

If there are changes in the future, will the heroine still be the heroine? Can emotions really be transferred seamlessly?

The plot is not bad and I am really impressed (but the Shirley chapter is too slow) 🤓 Then some typos in the later chapters look awkward 😭 I hope to add a character card to complete it 😁

The first section is a little bit toxic, but then it starts to get better, so keep it up

God is not as good as my brother, and brother is not as good as making money

The first section is pretty good, that's right. There are too many female protagonists, and the character is a bit broken. I think the male protagonist himself should be regarded as a pure male character, which is a bit uncomfortable.

It looked good at first, but suddenly a barber from Bangladesh forced him to kiss him and ran away immediately.

It would be best if the pig's feet and kidneys are dried.

Why don't I even have a title recently? Don't die, the author 😭

To be honest, this book is very emotional. If the author wants to achieve results, he still has to focus on emotional descriptions. The author still has to go in the direction of stock trading articles. To be honest, if the author really wants to make money, he still has to use a female channel, because sitting here is not particularly clear about the positions of justice and evil. This male channel is fatal.