Giant Ship Galaxy: Starting from the Digital Battleship

Come on

After reading this, I couldn't find any meal replacements. I read it many times and finally waited for the new book to arrive.

This is a continuation of your previous book. Why don't you announce that a new book has been published? Otherwise, who among the old readers would know about your new book 😥

This book is not as good-looking as the previous one. The various miscellaneous tasks in this Goldfinger are too cumbersome. I have not seen such an old mission-type Goldfinger setting in many years. The setting of this Goldfinger is not as interesting and interesting as the previous one. Moreover, this book is too homogenized with the previous one and there is nothing new. If Goldfinger is interesting, it would be good to read it as a fan, but the setting of Goldfinger is not very good and it looks a bit boring.

What else are you looking at and asking about Shennong! These are all eunuchs already. Eunuchs who became enlightened overnight have become accustomed to it. Only the divine articles written by the starry trumpet are still being updated.

What kind of bad habit is this? If this happens, your popularity will be ruined. Who will read your book? It depends on whether you subscribe or not. What the hell?

I hope that the author's last book was about a family story, and now he has written a book about a family story. I hope this can be a different track. Write more about the protagonist himself, and at most include the protagonist's family. As for the family, it's okay to give back some resources and help. But a family can't all be geniuses. They can always keep up with the protagonist. Even if there are no resource restrictions, there are still limitations on qualifications and understanding. It is normal for many people to fall behind.

If you are a new author, let's not say anything. You are an old author and you have made many mistakes that you shouldn't make. Can you stop making them? . Don't expect everyone to read your book. The difficulty of promotion rules has increased. You should say it before you wake up, not after you wake up. Wake up purple. Instead of orange. Wouldn't it be okay to directly set a rule that would cause the difficulty of awakening to increase due to being cursed by other high-ranking beings? That legendary lucky card looks like a clown. I don't see where the luck lies at all. Especially after handing in the resources, I wrote about a luckier clan member. Looks more clownish. And the speed of guiding practice, I don't know what to hide. You are a family and you have people behind you. It's not grassroots. I hid for a long time just to break through to 8. External performance is still 6. You tell me what meaning you hide. The task is still complicated. At present, there is no main plot at all. And that strange thing. The performance is too weak. The third-level strange object enslaves a second-level creature. It takes two or three deaths to successfully enslave. Only two can be enslaved. And it's still well-trained. The only advantage is that the protagonist's own cultivation level is not high and he can enslave high-level creatures with high-level items. But which cultivation system can't do this? There is no advantage at all. There are also various minor problems. But it's not unbearable. But there are too many. It's okay to watch it at intervals. Isn't it stupid to watch it continuously? . If you set up a mining company and give away 65% ​​directly, it is understandable that your childhood sweetheart gives away 20%, which is very good to the protagonist, and your brother is very kind to the protagonist and gives you 20%, which is understandable. But that Chen Jingyu. I really don't understand. Do you want to invest in him, or do you want to be a good friend? You didn't say anything about giving him 20%. He is a grassroots person with no background and no power. Are you really not afraid of a favor turning into a grudge? Mainly because he didn't have enough money and the protagonist said he could make up for it later. Tell me, what's the difference between this and giving it away for free? That 5% is for workers' compensation, which is completely understandable.

Don't write about the family so outrageously in this book. It's a little bit of help in the early stages. It's really abstract about returning to the main veins, hidden veins, etc. 🤭 The previous book cost more than 10 yuan and I couldn't stand it anymore.

I hope this book will be more about exploration of alien planets. I stopped writing the first one after a few times and started writing about miscellaneous wars. I really like the battleship style novel "My Fire Battleship". The setting in it is very good. If the author hadn't written more than a hundred chapters and started to lose the setting, his current achievements are high and low. He is a great writer, and you can learn from the setting of his book.

When can I write about Stargrazing Journey?

Write well ✍🏻, it's not shabby to make money

Journey to the Stars Age of Giant Ships Electromagnetic Tyrant Warhammer Wizard Are there any others?

I hope it will still be the same style as the previous book, but I hope the details will be improved, and struggle and communication are also very important.

If you don't update it, can your grades be better? This is your new book. I read your first book. Your old fans don't even know that you have opened a new book. And you are still the same as your last book. Two books a day. With so few words, do you still want to get good grades?

Having lost contact with the Xinhuo Ancestral Territory, has Xinhuo human civilization encountered an unpredictable disaster?

You might as well make up for that star-grazing journey. Although there were many problems in the early stage of the book, you listened to the opinions and made changes, but in the end you failed to finish it. I stopped updating, just ran away, and changed to a smaller account to update this. Just finish updating your last book, Starfire Battleship. Another update, why not make up for it with this one.

After reading the first three chapters, this beginning is really full of flaws, and all kinds of things are filled with the article. Summary: Better than shit

The updates are not good enough. If you write 10,000 words a day, there will definitely be traffic. If the updates are not good, it is just a cloud. I want to make money and take a rest. How can such a good thing come from? People who write novels are good at updating and later become great gods. Let's talk about other things.

The eunuch who opens a trumpet🤓

What the hell, this book can be written, but you gave up before you were pushed out?

Gurgling gurgling gurgling gurgling gurgling gurgling gurgling gurgling gurgling gurgling gurgling gurgling gurgling gurgling gurgling

Let's go back and finish writing the Star-grabbing Journey!

I have also finished reading the author's last book, which is also a very novel subject matter. This book seems to want to write something new, but it cannot completely break away from the previous work. In terms of family, the male protagonist's family in this book was already strong in the early stage, but it was too grassroots and didn't even have a complete set of initial equipment, giving people the impression that they had to rely on their own hands for beauty. Let's not talk about the golden finger. It's really uncomfortable to draw cards that are not good, and now everyone knows some golden legends in card drawing games. This is a blind draw, and he draws whatever comes to his mind. The point of homogeneity is actually not that serious for me. The biggest difference between this book and the previous one is the introduction of immortal cultivators and wizards, but there really wasn't much performance in the early stages, except for Grandpa coming out and fighting a battle. But to be honest, the setting of followers is a failure, because it restricts the immortal cultivators and wizards to being inherently inferior to the captain, and limits the future development of the third line. It can only write about battleships, and cannot write about other things, leading to the homogeneity of the content (the story of a battleship that becomes an army by one person). Obviously two elements have been introduced, why can't a hundred schools of thought flourish? Especially if you want to suppress the male protagonist's captain's strength, then you might as well let the male protagonist have dual cultivation as a ship immortal. Wouldn't it be possible to get rid of the homogeneity and write something new? How to balance the various extraordinary systems is very important, otherwise there would be no need to add them. The plot is average. From the beginning to now, there are no explosive points, it feels very flat, and of course it cannot attract new readers. (The Xuantian Trial is recommended to be sent directly. The battles and turn-based systems are the same, very bland) And this book itself is a sequel to the previous work, so there is no need to cut too much into it. It can more or less reveal the subsequent historical development of the previous work and enrich the world view of the book, rather than being one-size-fits-all and directly disconnected from the ancestral domain. Of course, it may also be that the author intends to save the content for decryption and exploration in the mid-term. The above is my opinion. It is a pity for this book. I hope the author can adjust it as soon as possible.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

The protagonist has no brains and there is no reason to hide the level of the protagonist's parents.

Fortunately, I raised it for a few days, otherwise I would have been tricked again.

Summoning Shennong, can I still read this book?

I just remembered you and took a look