Master, Don't Do This!

"Beast, that's your sister! " "Guizi, that's your aunt! "Damn, that's your mother-in-law! "Damn it, that's my master! Three thousand in the harem, all close relatives? " "The Queen Mother: Who is not a baby? " "Queen Mother, you don't want your Majesty to know, right? " "Empress, listen to me, the Queen Mother and I are really what you think..."

Come on, uncle Shi who wrote about the harem 😍, please write it to the end, they will do anything 😭

Has the author discovered the reason for the poor data? Like Guan Guan, Ji Cha, or other harem novels by great gods, most books have a common feature. Regardless of how many female protagonists appear at the beginning, one is finalized first and then the next one is introduced. The common feature is that the female protagonist accompanies the whole process or the female protagonist's accompaniment is constantly related to the plot, and the plot layout is expanded in the middle. At the beginning, the steps were not big, and the plot revolved around a female protagonist. After you have a few female protagonists, the plots will start to spread out, and then there will be no intersection. Unless the plot is particularly attractive, and you have to arrange the plot to have emotions later, the length will not attract people to move here and there. Everyone came here to read the harem stories, such as Ming Long, where I met Wanyi at the beginning Qing Mo, Zhao Ling, and Bing Tuo Zi first settled on Wanyi through their cooperation, and then introduced Bing Tuo Zi. At first, the plot was written around the two of them, which whetted their appetite. After they got up, they continued to rely on the plot to introduce the heroine, and the heroine participated in the whole plot. Accompanying and expanding the plot, the audience loves to watch it. Jicha's Mountain and River Festival begins with the introduction of Mu Yao, the princess. After conquering the princess, she assassinates and leads to the next Hehuan witch, and then goes to the capital. The heroine is accompanying the running to participate in the plot. The female protagonists you wrote have a low level of participation in the plot. They are doing this now, and now they are not familiar with the progress. The plot is too scattered, and it seems to be rounded and dull.

The reason for poor grades is writing bugs. Everything that writes about Gu is not good and I don't want to read it.

What does the author say? Although I have pointed out the problems of this book at length and mentioned a few bad points, since I have signed the contract, it is better to finish it. At least you are still reading this book. There are several books on my bookshelf that have been written by other authors. Chapter 130 or 40 has just been put on the shelves. I have finished the book and my ability to write stories has emerged. If I always cut up books and have no experience in finishing the book, how can I finish a long novel? At least give an ending to the person who is reading this book for you.

Already added to the bookshelf, come on 😍😍😍