I Really Need to Keep You in Check

I think it should be called, "I Really Need to Control You Better".

Don't write realistic storylines; not many people want to read them.

The preceding part shows exceptional potential, practically divine. I was wondering why you weren't in the top 100 of the monthly ticket rankings. Until I read further on... Dude, author, did you really think the protagonist was playing a game? Don't you know that the reader's first impression is the most important?

The premise was intriguing, and the initial plot was captivating, making me think I'd stumbled upon a dark horse masterpiece. However, after its release, it felt like the author had changed; the content became increasingly weak, some scenes were incredibly boring, and the humor was at the level of lowbrow sarcasm, with several chapters feeling like filler.

It's pretty good, not bad at all. I suggest fewer realistic characters; Ruan Yu was really unnecessary.

1. The concept is excellent, the three golden chapters are also very good, and the writing is fluent. 2. The characters lack character arcs. The male protagonist is like a tool for playing games, and his personality isn't developed at all when he enters the real world. The female protagonist is also completely like a tool; her inner monologues sound more like the author's own voice.

The later plot and dialogue are quite chaotic, and the narrative is a bit lengthy. What could have been a lighthearted, entertaining story about a gaming god could have easily become a bestseller if written in a more eccentric style. But instead, it opted for a small-scale, school-based monster-hunting format, which is a real shame.

1. The subject matter is indeed good, and the male lead's character design doesn't have any major flaws. However, the author did not do a good job of conceiving the realistic aspects, resulting in the realistic plot not even reaching the passing grade, making it very unwatchable. 2. It's noticeable. The author imitates many plot points from the Warlock's Handbook, which I think is a good thing.

It feels like the author wrote whatever came to mind, with no main plot whatsoever. While gamers can ignore the main storyline, novels need one to connect the dots. Furthermore, as a paid reviewer, the protagonist should at least explore the gameplay and go through the main story.

I spent an afternoon reading about 120 chapters. The early chapters were pretty good, but around the time the protagonist was made to stand as punishment at the church's female NPC's door, the plot became disjointed and the main storyline was missing.