The World of Yaowu Is Gamified, I Can Add Some Improvements

No, it has become a game world. The protagonist has upgraded with points and still pursues the broken energy conservation? When you play a game, even if the protagonist upgrades, you need to go back to the city and have a big meal. Otherwise, you will starve to death due to lack of energy.

No, the writing is too poor, the beginning is just a bunch of nonsense

I am so tired that all my manuscripts are useless. The last chapter is left and will be revised tomorrow morning. After that, plot chapters, etc. Will still be changed based on the data. Try to change it for the better. If you see the prompt for modification earlier, you can go back and check it out. Because it may be different from the latest one you caught up with. For all purposes, write well. Write as hard as you can. Everyone can make suggestions as much as you like. If it feels wrong, if the suggestion is reasonable, I will modify it as quickly as possible. Thank you for your understanding.

I don't know if you have seen 🍅 the one where I can see the health bar and choose to blow up the world. The genre is almost the same. His books were quite good in the early and middle stages, but they were ugly from the middle stage onwards.

The text is very poor, and the plot concept is also bad. In Chapter 15, the Lin family's gang was blocked and beaten by game monsters. The protagonist defeated the group of game monsters alone, and then the group's idea was to kill the protagonist and snatch the loot... No matter how mindless the plot is, it cannot be written like this.

It's the first time I've seen this kind of world view and formed a team similar to a labor union. I can't describe the feeling.

The only god mode has been gamified, and they told me that energy conservation is fine, and it won't poison me. After all, it is the only god mode that I like, but after seeing Chapter 7, I withdrew. . . At first, when I saw this kind of brainless, hindering woman who failed to achieve anything but failed more than failed, I was wondering how the author would arrange her, but I thought there might be a little bit of writing. I thought she was just a passerby at most! Unexpectedly. . . . . . Qidian has millions of books now. It's not going well. Why should I still read you? You should screen your readers according to your ideas. Some people like dog-licking, some people like domineering, some people like scheming, some people like refreshing articles, some people like Qiong Yao style, but I am not your reader, I have been screened by you. . . Get off the bookshelf, farewell, goodbye. . . .

To be honest, I might as well learn to play online games. They just come out of the factory. The woman's writing is so beautiful, but the result is instantly seconds, which is a bit bloody.