The Demon Martial World Has Become a Game, and I Can Level Up

Aren't we all just leveling up and adding stat points in a game world, why are we still chasing after that stupid law of conservation of energy? When you play a game, doesn't your protagonist need to go back to town and eat a big meal to level up, otherwise they'll run out of energy and starve to death?

Oh no, the writing is terrible; the opening is just a bunch of nonsense.

I don't know if you've read the one by 🍅 where you can see health bars, "I Choose to Crush the World." It's a similar genre; his book was quite good in the early and middle stages, but it became incredibly bad from the middle onwards.

I'm exhausted, and the entire manuscript is ruined. Only one chapter left; I'll revise it first thing tomorrow morning. After that, I'll continue to revise the plot and chapters based on the data. I'll try my best to make it better. If you saw the revision prompts earlier, you can go back and check them, as they might be different from the latest version you've been following.

The text is terrible, and the plot is poorly conceived. In Chapter 15, the Lin family was surrounded and attacked by game monsters. The protagonist single-handedly defeated the group of game monsters, and then the group's idea was to kill the protagonist and steal the loot... No matter how mindless and exciting the plot is, it can't be written like this.

This is the first time I've seen a worldview like this, forming a team similar to a guild; it's hard to describe the feeling.

They've already gamified the One God mode, and they're still telling me about energy conservation. It's okay, it won't affect me, since it's the One God mode I like. But after reading Chapter 7, I quit... When I first saw this kind of brainless, incompetent, and trouble-making woman, I wondered how the author would portray her.

Honestly, it's not as good as online games. They advertise how beautiful the girl is right after release, and she gets instantly killed – it's a bit melodramatic.