
Refining Falsehood to Become True, I Am the Taoist Lord Tongtian
炼假成真,我为通天道君
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- Ongoing
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- 135k Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Eastern Xuanhuan
- Updated
- 8mo ago
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- Qidian
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Was the protagonist a maggot before his pulse was opened?
If you can't write the numerical value, can you not write it?
It feels like I'm reading an old book from the past. Who would still like to see the protagonist struggling within other people's rules, either running away, being stubborn, overturning the table, or going out of his way in an unexpected way?
Strength progress is a bit slow
The title of this book is meant to attract readers who want to read Invincible (or I Am Only in French), but the progress of your protagonist's strength is still too slow (the advantage is that it can be written for a long time, and the worldview will not be written to the end because the protagonist is too strong) But the early or even mid-term results of the book will definitely not be good. You have to have a plan. If you want to write a long novel (more than two million words), this pace is okay, but if you want to improve the results first, the progress of the protagonist's strength will have to be accelerated. I recommend you to speed up the protagonist's strength, because many authors want to write a long novel. In the early stage, the protagonist's strength is slow to develop, and the world view is also slow to develop. Or, alternatively, you can first maximize the protagonist's talent, follow the super genius style, and find out the cool points first to retain readers. (Currently, I feel that you have this intention in writing, but the protagonist's talent is not explosive enough, and it is not "cool" enough)
The writing can be rubbish, and a bunch of major events that could cost four or five hundred thousand dollars are written in the first few dozen chapters as trivial matters. They are protected by top bosses, and then are held back by juniors who can kill them easily. There is also a deep hatred for the Shen family. Killing the family, killing the mother, not giving him the method of cultivation is a hatred that blocks the way. Selling the protagonist to a fat pig weighing several hundred kilograms with many faces, not giving resources to the protagonist's body. He is obviously a top-notch family but has no enjoyment. He deliberately takes the name of the Taoist election and wants to depose the protagonist. He tried to suppress the protagonist with great righteousness and wanted to destroy the protagonist's reputation. He used imperial power to suppress the protagonist and wanted to make the protagonist a rebel who disobeyed the emperor. He borrowed the abilities of Confucian and Taoist saints to completely brainwash the protagonist into a slave without self-thought. He repeatedly bullied the only cousin who was good to the protagonist. What did the protagonist get in return for each of these incidents? With a few curse words, the protagonist saves the face of the entire country, defeats the peerless master of the enemy country, and has a peerless swordsman who can cause earth-shaking to stand up for the protagonist. There is also a genius prince from a third country who lends a helping hand to the protagonist. Unlike the powerful Shen family before, a low-ranking cannon fodder temporarily lost his position. This was a small punishment that the emperor did not like because the cannon fodder of the Shen family made his own decision and almost angered countless geniuses present. The protagonist did not make any effort to increase the punishment. The protagonist and his cousin were almost brainwashed into slaves, and then all the masters who could ignore the imperial power got close to the protagonist. The swordsman who killed dozens of dragons and dared to destroy the top Buddhist lineage in the country where the protagonist lives also said that he would turn everything on the protagonist. What did they do in the end? Faced with the brainwashing done by the younger members of the Shen family branch, they didn't dare to intervene, or even said explicitly that they didn't dare to remind the protagonist. They could only indirectly give the protagonist a spiritual fruit so that the protagonist could ignore the brainwashing. What does this amount to? In the ordinary world of immortal cultivation, the protagonist who practices Qi is protected by several Nascent Souls and Golden elixirs. Then the protagonist angers the Shen family, who has half-step Nascent Soul in the Golden elixir. In the end, the foundation-building elder of the Shen family decides to brainwash the protagonist into a slave and orders the junior Qi practitioner to brainwash the protagonist. Then, many people who are good at calculation are ready to invest all their money in the protagonist. Dan and Yuanying were afraid of falling into the turmoil between the Foundation Establishment Elder and the protagonist, so they did not dare to remind the protagonist that there would be several Qi Practitioners to brainwash him. They could only reward the protagonist with the Qi Training Period Spirit Fruit that could make people calm down so that the protagonist could ignore the brainwashing. In the end, the protagonist had to use their golden fingers to deal with the pressure of the junior Qi Practitioners ordered by the Foundation Establishment Elder. And what is the protagonist's revenge for this? Let these young qi practitioners who have repeatedly attacked and brainwashed the protagonist slap themselves for a dozen times and then marry the fat pig on the protagonist's behalf to build a foundation or even a golden elixir. The protagonist does not dare to take unnecessary revenge at all, because he is afraid that only the elders of the foundation can ignore the protection of the most protective Nascent Soul Sword Immortal and other qi training princes with a god-forming background to suppress the protagonist. It can be said that as long as it is the protagonist's opponent, even the junior Qi practitioner can ignore the Emperor of Transformation, ignore the Nascent Soul Sword Immortal, ignore the leader of the Golden Pill, and humiliate and brainwash the protagonist without any taboos. As long as he is on the protagonist's side, whether it is the Golden Pill, Yuanying, or even a mysterious existence that has understood the skills of gods and demons in the immortal world and can predict the future, they are afraid of intervening in the struggle of weak beings who build foundation pills to bully the protagonist, so they dare not protect the protagonist openly. Also, Shen Jiacai has done countless things against the protagonist in just over fifty chapters. The protagonist has a blood vendetta against him, and he also needs the protection of the sword fairy and the wooing of foreign princes. After learning the peerless skills, it can be said that he will not need to consider inheritance for a long time in the future. Then what does the protagonist do? He did not leave and continued to live near the Shen family who was building the foundation and practicing qi. He was also preparing to participate in useless competitions to beg the emperor who might be the Nascent Soul or the emperor to order the Shen family, whose strongest person was only half-step Nascent Soul, not to retaliate against him. Obviously, as a qi practitioner, he relied on golden fingers to learn the Nascent Soul Secret Technique. The son can go to a foreign country to practice to the Nascent Soul and later personally take revenge on the Shen family. There are also the invincible swordsmen of the same level in the Nascent Soul stage who openly say that they are not allowed to bully the small ones and cannot attack the protagonist, but they have to live at the feet of the Shen family. In the end, the Shen family targeted the protagonist, killed the protagonist's relatives many times, and almost killed the protagonist. The only person who was good to the protagonist almost brainwashed the protagonist or the protagonist's cousin. In the end, the protagonist also learned about the past blood feud. What did the protagonist do? Like the urban literary man who likes to say I don't love you anymore, this blood feud is just a public statement that he wants to leave the Shen family, and that he will continue to be surnamed Shen instead of his mother Li, who sacrificed everything to protect the protagonist's survival. Just like I don't love you anymore, the blood feud was covered up after leaving the Shen family. The protagonist's future plan is to participate in a competition organized by the enemy emperor who probably killed his mother. He begged the enemy emperor to speak so that the foundation-building cannon fodder will not target him. Then he slowly practiced under the nose of the enemy emperor and waited until he became stronger to see if he could lift the seal and regain his memory.
This kind of background doesn't work at first glance. Destined to overwhelm the protagonist.
Ordinary people have about 10 points of vitality and blood, but the protagonist can only swing 200 pounds with one arm at 200 points. There is something wrong with the numerical value. It feels like
Summarize
The author's plot is probably no different from Yangshen. The most important core is this routine, which was from ten years ago. There are other reasons. Everyone has written them in the book review. You can go and read them. This book was still very popular ten years ago, but now it is difficult to even get a small hit. The author may not be able to hold on to 200 pages, but he may not be able to do so.
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It's a good book to read in this book wasteland. The progress is slow and the leveling is high. The characters are not sarcastic, nor can they write villains. All in all, it's very cliche. However, the author has good writing skills and his language is relatively fluent. I guess he is an old writer. The setting and cheats are not new either. The author should speed up the progress and speed up the development of the protagonist's strength to some extent, or stop making up mysteries every day and let the protagonist play high-end games. Not many people are willing to follow the old and slow to catch up, especially when the plot can be seen at a glance and the updates are slow.
Reincarnated old monster
It's so smooth that it can't be a novice
The Pig's Knuckle plug-in needs to be like the Emperor of Heaven, going through life after life of hardships before it can succeed.
Very nice😍😍
I don't understand, I feel like I'm asking for help. The plot is not good, it feels like I am watching something from a few years ago
Five colors of divine light, the universe in one's sleeves, seventy-two transformations, Yin and Yang mirror, Tai Chi chart, heaven-turning seal, Hunyuan umbrella, earth magic, eight or nine mysterious skills, can all of these be practiced?
The outline is not careful enough
The rhythm is inconsistent. It's not the kind of story that comes slowly, and the hook isn't deep enough. The setting is okay, but it just doesn't stand out and isn't attractive.
I feel good about the writing and everything else, but I feel unhappy and have no mood to read anymore. In today's society, we have to grasp human nature and not retain people. No matter how good it is, no one will read it. The vane of the rankings has clearly told you that only two or three of the 100,000 copies of Mortal Survey have been published.