Turn in the Portal, and the Country Will Be My Backstage!

Did you become so awesome after turning it over to the country? When he goes to another world, he analyzes and directs battles, treating the country's top talents as decorations. He was so awesome but he was so miserable in the past.

As an ordinary person, it is okay for the protagonist to be afraid of death, so the logic of reporting to the national portal makes sense. But then, the female psychologist, the attitude of the upper management, the performance of the special team after the first teleportation, and the description of the accompanying scientific researchers are all not good. First of all, the female psychologist (all personal opinions) is most likely the heroine, and her character setting, behavior, and description are highly overlapped with the heroine in another novel I read. Her appearance makes sense logically, but I don't really like it in terms of senses, because this type of character seems vulgar to me. Her appearance is only to protect the mental health of the protagonist. For this reason, she has to have in-depth psychological communication with the protagonist. In this case, there is no problem in positioning the heroine, but Thor In COS, it is difficult for me to accept situations such as obeying the protagonist's wishes, because what I see is not a normal person. Her appearance is only for the protagonist, and her behavioral logic is only for the protagonist. But this is where I feel uncomfortable, because it is all for the protagonist in the world of the novel. In fact, there is no problem😮‍💨 Afterwards, the attitude of the upper class is too profit-oriented. Looking at all similar novels, the description of the upper class has always been positive and kind. Author, you will be screwed sooner or later if you write like this. The performance of the special team transported to another world. First of all, the people chosen for the adventure in the different world must be loyal to the country, and then their personal strength. As a result, the team has almost run out of ammunition, and they have to wait for the protagonist to remind them before they know how to start. ╮(╯＿╰)╭ Author, do you think this is ridiculous? Didn't you read it yourself before posting? This paragraph feels like it is to forcibly set off the protagonist, and this team is a special dish 😒 The accompanying scientific researchers, they were saying depressing words from the beginning, they all traveled to another world, and they didn't hold it Determined to die, who dares to come? After all, in a different world, they can only rely on the protagonist's words to infer information. In this case, they don't know whether they can come back alive🤷‍♂️ The author wants to portray people more deeply, right? Or should I write more flexibly? But in this type of book, only the protagonist's personal will and national will are worth describing. The description of other non-important characters can only relieve reading fatigue, but has no other effect. On the contrary, it will make people feel that this person is not rigorous in writing the book.

The elite of the country, a vanguard chosen from thousands of people, and then as soon as they enter the wasteland, they don't want to die and want to go back before the danger comes, and then a group of veterans of the army can't see each other's weaknesses, but the protagonist can see it. Too smart

Uh... The elites sent by the country haven't seen the monster yet, but they were so frightened that they ran away when they heard that the humanoid monster was coming. This is too poisonous!

If you go camping on earth or climb a mountain, you must be prepared. There is a space gate to travel through the world without any preparation, and the protagonist runs into a dangerous world without any weapons. The protagonist is already very awesome.

Congratulations on getting a little red flower and a reward of 200 yuan.

It's different when I don't have a cow than when I really have one. Anyway, if I really have such a golden finger, even if I die, I will die on the road, and if I die, the people behind the scenes are willing to give me a chance, so they think highly of me.

I remember that in the past, as long as it had something to do with the country, a lot of people would scold it, and no one would read it. Now it's popular to hand it over directly to the country.

Is there a portal? Just hand it over, take it for granted. 🙂

It's too smart. Those who can be selected by the country are basically top talents in all aspects, and their psychological quality is the most basic. As a result, in a different world, the scientists wrote that they were greedy for life and feared death and would cry when something happened, and the special operations force was like a stupid green man who panicked and didn't choose what to eat when something happened.

The writing is so stupid. It treats the country as nothing. There is no response plan at all. Go next door and look at other people's. It is their first time to enter various scientific research processes and you are full of them. You don't even bring a camera.

A bit mentally retarded The forced teleportation countdown is seven days The protagonist can open the teleportation gate at any time within seven days It is not necessary to open the teleportation gate after the countdown is over As a result, everyone is waiting for the countdown to end, and they must be forced to teleport before exploring What is the use of having to train the protagonist for seven days? It is better to give him armor The author rubbed his intelligence on the ground

There are problems with the plot and characters, especially after entering the gate for the second time, the level drops sharply. The expedition team likes to take risks, and the protagonist has mission prompts, but has no right to speak at all. A group of people wander around turning a blind eye, and then start walking on a path of unknown meaning, crossing hundreds of thousands of kilometers through the desert and hundreds of kilometers into the sky. Are these supermen on an outing?

The national elites described by the author are like playing house!

I want to give zombies and mechanical zombies a name. Do readers have any good ideas? Or you can also use a code name. After all, it is a national operation, so the name will definitely be changed, and there will be follow-up mechas. If you have any good ideas, please send them to me!!

Passed, passed, updated as normal at 6pm.

I watched a short play, the content was quite similar

Chapter 60 has been blocked. Hey, I really don't know where the limit is in this review. Three chapters may not be released today.