I Am a Teacher in Another World

Let's not talk about segmentation or not. At the beginning, I glanced at AI, and the plot and description were 100% written and described by AI. Second, the driving force of the protagonist is inexplicable. If it were you, traveling through the past, would you care about other people's lives? In a few seconds, the protagonist received the memory and became a saint. There is no sense of involvement at all, I just feel like I am enjoying myself. There is a fundamental problem at the beginning. You don't need to read the rest. The characters cannot be established, the plot is patchwork, and AI polishes it, and there is no possibility of it getting better. It is recommended to cut it. Be patient and learn to tell stories first. In the first chapter, in a few sentences, explain who the protagonist is, what his job is, and describe his character a little bit. For example, he is young and has a sense of justice, but he is a fool among outsiders. Traveling through time, telling information in a few sentences, encountering something, such as falling in an alley, about to starve to death, and being saved by a skinny girl with black bread. Then it rained and she fell into a coma. The next day after receiving the memories, when she was about to do something, the girl died. She died miserably and pitifully, with a crying little sister next to her... Isn't the protagonist's driving force for revenge coming? Then solve the first incident, start to lay the foundation for the world view, and get in touch with new people and things. Because the description at the beginning can describe the miserable life of the people at the bottom, shouldn't the character design of the protagonist at the beginning be used? Speak for the people at the bottom and challenge the corrupt world with passion. Isn't the main plot coming out now? So... Brother, think about it...

Laughing to death, things generated by AI are intercepted everywhere 🤭

I wish Dada's new book will be a big hit, and I'll continue to read it! By the way, I'll recommend the book by clicking on my avatar to see it! "Douluo: The Wuhun is useless at the beginning, I coach Ji Juechen"

If I count correctly, there are seven names in the first chapter, and they are all Western names that are difficult to remember. Even the Lord of Mystery would not dare to write like this 🙂