Raise Jeanne into an Empress, Then Throw Her Away

666. Blessed are those who can continue to read this latest chapter. Does the author not understand the status of the saint? Your saint was arrested by the police, but you still... . . I don't have the heart to say it anymore, just the single one, the more, the more, no matter what, I will not give up, I don't think that the character will become fuller after adding it.

6. Click on it and you will see the big "Joan of Arc Darhk" on the outside of the character.

Joan of Arc regarded herself as the little daughter of God and dedicated her life to Jesus. How could she fall in love with a man?

Damn, I have nothing more to say, please do it quickly. The protagonist was originally from the Eight Kingdoms Fighting Chicken FMVP. After it was put on the shelves, he was directly transformed into a new recruit. It is not scary to lose his power. His knowledge, wisdom, courage, and even personality have been wiped out, and he has become a puppet. It is normal that few readers will buy it.

It seems that you have written in a single direction in the past, and even consciously used a dual-line narrative to make up for the weak emotional drama of the single female lead. But if you write the plot of the second female lead in this way, it will collapse later. It will be ambiguous, others will be tempted, and then you won't accept it. Then isn't it pure abuse later? Is this character created without fault and becomes a symbol to set off the relationship between the male and female protagonists? It shriveled up in a sudden way. This is a big taboo when writing a single heroine. Didn't you discuss it with the editor before writing? Even if you don't write a single heroine later on, try to shape this character. Even if you can get the character back, you will definitely not be able to control the dual-line structure. You wrote the dual-line because the single line is weak. Now how do you deal with it later?

I seriously doubt that this is something that would happen in this world where you couldn't even name it. The princess and queen were expelled from the palace, molested by gangsters, and made dirty jokes. The queen has no background to become a queen? The princess has no knights? There are no patriots in the city? Watching the former queen of your country being molested by gangsters? Is this a plot that humans can write? The author is completely to highlight their pain and prepare for the emergence of the female protagonist and the male protagonist later. You can quit the trap now

This book is not purely historical, it contains some magic and the like. The author's writing style is good and the reading experience is very comfortable. But I do worry a little bit whether the author has dealt with the reasons why the protagonist left Joan of Arc. It is boring to have a simple happy-go-lucky mentality, which is not in line with the character of the protagonist. The reason why the protagonist is currently a supermodel is a mystery, and it may be related to leaving Joan of Arc. It is recommended that the author sort out the timeline again. It is a bit difficult to calculate the age of Joan of Arc as being older than Aaron.

It's too fragmented. After the new chapter starts, they are like two people. From their personalities to their behaviors and ways of thinking, they are completely different from the previous one. I used memories at the beginning, but now that it is released, I will also use memories to explain why it became like this after the war.

It's not about what the author wrote. Just write this when it's published? You used 100 pieces of text to pave the way for the protagonist's image. It was overturned after only two were put on the shelves. Do you want to read what you are writing? The male protagonist who has gone through so much is trembling and frightened when faced with a female spy. You could just write him to urinate. Outrageous

What was this written after the war?