Smiling and Proud of All Heavens: Starting from Lin Pingzhi to Practice Liver-Burning

It's disgusting to see the hostess and her daughter accept it.

One day of training is equivalent to one year of training for others, so why bother? If you just practice for one year, you will be invincible.

The writing is not logical. One day of cultivation is one year, and so is eating and digesting. Then wouldn't he die if he practiced cultivation for more than half an hour without eating?

In the world of martial arts, practicing martial arts is not a system at all.

? ? ? Ning Zhong is the heroine, so I have to watch and learn.

The writing is not very good. It is a traditional problem of new writers. A hammer here and a stick here and there means invincibility in the world of martial arts. If you concentrate on practicing one internal skill and one external skill, you will be the top master in the world in one month, and you will be invincible in two months. The plot is also very confusing and has no main line.

This introduction, regardless of the internal strength of martial arts, one day is one year, it is basically too high-hanging, there is no need to play. A year later, the work and external work were completed in half the time. There is no need to talk about this or that, invincible article, but there are all kinds of soul penetration, just to practice from scratch? Ash's Pikachu, right?

It was very good before, but now in less than one second of one move, others can complete complex facial expression and psychological transformation and mutual dialogue, and the only way to completely fail is byebye.

I couldn't finish the 67-day update, so it slipped away.

No matter what I write, I have to read it with my mind uneasy. The news delivery is better than today's mobile phones. The qinggong in this world is really good. If I get the news on the same day, I can go to Huashan in the afternoon. Any qinggong created by pig's feet is not worthy of carrying shoes for these people.

You must be careful when writing novels: you must not consider the laws of real physics and must be idealistic. The author of this book actually thought of the conservation of energy. You cannot write martial arts fantasy like this. What are you going to do with those who cultivate immortality and explode stars with one punch?

The martial arts in the world of martial arts cultivate true energy, which is dozens of times stronger than traditional internal and external fists. Now the author forcefully says that the internal force effect of Neijiaquan practice is stronger than the true energy of martial arts practice. It is too inconsistent! It's like you said that the effect of modern military boxing is more powerful than that of ancient Qi practitioners. Archeology has confirmed that there were indeed Qi practitioners during the Han Dynasty. Archeology has also confirmed that many ancient people were much more powerful than modern people. Many intact ancient bows and arrows excavated from ancient tombs, as well as ancient strength-measuring stones, all show that the generals in the army during the Tang, Song, Ming and Qing dynasties needed a lot of strength to be able to hold weapons and pull three-stone bows. Historical records and archaeological records from various dynasties have mutually confirmed the inconceivability of many legends, making them unbelievable to modern people.

After lying flat for a year, you can step on your left foot with your right foot.

There are backdoors to Shaolin martial arts in Tianlong, and they dare to change Shaolin martial arts.

Basically every chapter has a bunch of typos. Someone clearly said the key, but they just don't change it. As I write, I start to write. The world is downgraded, the martial arts are degraded, and the broken void traveler is like a native. I won't talk about these. The settings are also changed before and after. Internal energy can also nourish the body, and the two complement each other, and the energy of heaven and earth must be cultivated to the highest level to open up the Rendu and Du meridians before it can be absorbed, otherwise it will be harmful to the body. As a result, later on, the so-called world downgrade theory began to go against the sky, and the void was broken and left the world to go to a higher world. At this time, the protagonist said that as the energy of heaven and earth decreases, the upper limit will also become lower, and there will be no more in the future. The energy of the world and the internal strength cannot be developed, and the internal strength is regarded as a lie. To put it bluntly, I don't have anything in my mind. I only copy other people's templates, and then engage in a plot with nondescript settings. The left and right brains interact with each other. And the protagonist just started to travel through the soul, but in the end, a bunch of other people all shattered into the void normally, and the protagonist ended up smiling proudly, but the protagonist was afraid of being deceived by other worlds. The world discovers that the soul travels directly, and the account is changed and restarted. The key time travel is forgotten and the soul travels again. After the travel, the name is changed directly. The self-perception and third person of the protagonist become that of the person who was transported. This is a crap time travel, and the self-perception has changed. To put it bluntly, changing a protagonist in a world will only add a setting of being transported by the soul to the new indigenous protagonist.

You still have to have a bottom line in writing. It's not like Tunguska is a mother and daughter, so don't write pornographic stories.