Era: One Dollar Instant Sale, Make a Fortune!

It is best to automatically match the source of instant kill skills 🙂 Don't underestimate the state machine, otherwise it is easy to be regarded as an enemy agent in that era 😁

Holy shit, it only took two days after I wrote more than 20 chapters. When I wrote it in the 1980s, there were no more than a few thousand chapters. I admire it, but I really can't watch it. 88

🤔Follow this rhythm. The author probably needs to write more than 50 chapters of the novel in 3 days. Can 1 week pass before being put on shelves? According to the author's chat style writing. Readers who were shocked by the writing method found that the content only lasted half an hour of chatting with the aunt downstairs.

Pretend to write two or three chapters to set the stage for the early eunuch.

The author made a common-sense mistake. All Jiefang trucks before 1975 were rocker-driven. It's not a key electronic ignition. There are also too many inner dramas for each supporting character, and too many inner words are written. The three golden chapters don't feel very attractive to readers.

Free entry only. It hurts to look at it

It was so good at copying that it was actually approved. I admire the author even more than the editor.

The two brothers drove the transport, with a lot of goods in the car. No one was left guarding the car, and no one was guarding the gun. The two of them ate directly in the restaurant. There was another time when 6 people slept in a gas station and no one was arranged to keep watch. How dare you do that in those days?

Did this book directly copy all the background settings from Lu Yao's novel? Family relationships are almost exactly the same as in the ordinary world. The uncle and aunt who are cadres are annoying and lazy, the love-minded sister is the second-rate brother-in-law, the elder brother is a character like Sun Shaoan, the younger brother is in high school like Sun Shaoping, and the older sisters are called Li Lanhua and Li Lanxiang. It is directly like the ordinary world in which Sun Lanhua and Sun Lanxiang changed their last names, and there is a paralyzed grandmother at home. Even the name of the village was changed from Shuangshui Village to Shuangshan Village. The location was changed from northern Shaanxi to Guizhou. It looks very uncomfortable. There is no need. Just tell your own story. You have written it very well. Do you need to copy the background settings from other people's books like this? I'm really convinced. It's inexplicable. I want to copy some useful ones.

I only buy three things every day, a nuclear bomb button, a nuclear bomb, and a world map with precise coordinates

Isn't this just piracy from the ordinary world?

When I saw the 188 big man, I persuaded him to retreat.

Is this copying the ordinary world? . . The plot is exactly the same

You should write about the 90s or the 2000s. This is not a period piece at all, it is just a driver's guise You don't understand the ethos of the 1970s at all.

The author's writing was very retarded and I immediately dismissed him.

The author uses his medical skills to write about it, which is a bit contrary to common sense. If your local people have a problem with some plant, how can you not know how to deal with it? Children don't know, how could adults not know? Don't you have any other plot to advance? In this water this? Are you just going to play with the soapy water?

The author was born in 1995, or even in 2000. He wrote completely randomly, and there was no lack of information. In the 1970s, cars were started by simply inserting the key. Don't write period articles if you are too young.

I find that the plots of many books of this type are too drawn out. Grinding and chirping. The main line has not been advanced.

It's so ink-filled that I can write three chapters just for cooking

It could have been written better if the author didn't put too much water into it.

There is something wrong with the logic. In any era, especially in rural areas, 10 yuan was a huge amount of money. Where did the poor family get 10 yuan? One dollar flash sale, the next day it costs 3 yuan, and all the money is spent? When your younger siblings go to school and have no money, why do you buy the luxuries of the time? Not in line with the social atmosphere of the time

It's too watery. One chapter can contain 90% of nonsense that has no nutritional value. Not even two days had passed since I read Chapter 24. I couldn't bear it anymore and left.

I've watched 60% of it, but I really can't stand it. There are big problems with the background settings, and Goldfinger is too buggy, with no excitement or climax at all, and a plain narrative.

En It was a little weird to see Zhang Ruonan coming out

The writing is good but there is too much foreshadowing

It's good to read. In fact, in my opinion, the biggest problem is that you ignored the poverty at that time. However, it is also a good read in your spare time. Please update it more.

What does the heroine teach as a teacher? The heroine's best friend and the protagonist's sister-in-law-to-be teach Chinese, but it seems that they didn't say what subject the heroine teaches, right? Or did I miss something? 🤔

Come on, I've written more than 20 chapters about being a driver and I haven't finished it yet. I had this level of writing back then, but was I afraid that I wouldn't be able to write 800 words?

After reading more than 30 chapters, the writing is pretty average, and the characters of the protagonist and supporting characters can only be said to be average The plot is bland and boring, full of trivial matters, and I often go off topic and write about other people. I haven't finished writing more than 30 chapters the next day, and it's all water. The seven aunts and the eight aunts are all covered in less pen and ink than the protagonists, and the sense of immersion is also very poor. These more than thirty chapters In fact, these can only be written in four or five chapters, which is a tenfold increase. I can't bear it, so I slipped away 🙂