Super Mover

The writing is so bad, at least 1/5 of the whole book was obtained by bargaining with others. "Two yuan", "Two yuan is too expensive, it's cheaper" "The price has reached the bottom, it can't be cheaper" Balabala kept talking. Isn't it uncomfortable for the author to write it?

The author makes the crossing between the two worlds too complicated. If you have money in modern times, you can just buy food, oil and meat. Why make it so complicated? You have to hunt for food and trade meat for work. In the 1960s, if you had food and meat, it was king, and work was a piece of cake. Why make it so difficult?

Was this introduction written by LV5? The beginning is ridiculous, the focus is not highlighted, and the center of gravity is off.

The writing is not good and the dialogue is too awkward to read.

Is this book written by the LV5 author? Did you buy it with money? Or are you making an international joke?

Just one question, can reporting to the national team change the world?

The more I read, the more confused I become. Two phone ringtones can contain so many words! He obviously has a phone in his hand! Do you have to wait for the ring to finish before answering? Abandoned

See for yourself.

I almost felt sick when I wrote this paragraph about the pig's trotter sister and her husband. The sister is very powerful to the protagonist. The pig's trotter always complains about the pig's trotter when he brings something back. The brother-in-law is also a mama's boy, stupid and filial. Even if you don't get a divorce, why not wait for a quarrel in the future? Separating the family is useless. If the family is separated, your brother-in-law will no longer have this character? His mother said hello, didn't she just obediently wag her tail? If you force him to separate the family, you can't change his character. He will definitely have conflicts because of this later stage. From the beginning to the end, it was not seen that the protagonist vented his anger on his sister. The sister was so angry that she ran back to her parents' house in the middle of the night. As for the younger brother, he just let his sister stay at home. He is really an honest person. He comes from the countryside. In love, Wang Laoqi saw Wang Xiaomeng was angry and knew how to slap Xie Guangkun with an iron stick. The protagonist in your book is nothing. If you don't bully your sister, who can you bully? A young man and his sister let her mother-in-law bully her like this. How can she pretend to be a turtle and call her brother-in-law? Is it someone with a handle? Why are the men of Sijiu City so mean to you?

Was this written by AI? So mentally retarded?

I felt relieved when I saw that they were all talking rubbish. The writing was seriously not up to the level of a lv5 author.

On which side are you and time stands still on the other side? In other words, the worlds of both time and space are living for you? This design is so disgusting!

Two tons of cement are packed in the trunk of the big G 🙂 You are really talented

The writing is pretty good. Now that I have the ability, I just need to help my relatives and friends first. How can you expect someone to serve the people if he doesn't even have relatives or friends to help him? Although it has some flaws, it is still satisfying as a fast food article. I have already given a small reward of 100 articles, and I have given some support.

Chapter 3: Those who have been persuaded to quit have too many opportunities and no outlet. Those who want to fall into the trap should not come.

Every sentence must be followed by a question "Is it true?". Does the author usually chat like this? He can't chat happily.

In 1959, was there such a term as village and village party secretary? It should be the people's commune.

Is xxxx true...... Does xxxx really exist? Is it really possible? Is it true that there are hundreds of chapters and thousands of sentences? Did you, the author, really not vomit when you read it yourself?

All subscribed to the latest version. "Is this true?" Appears countless times in the book. Does the author understand that high-end expressions are not repeated?

Seeing him taking the initiative to tell the secret, he gave up. This can be said.

Can you stop being so watery? I was so speechless watching it

What to write about something that has no common sense at all?

I have learned a lot. In 1959, Beijing had a bus card. Is it an IC card or an IQ card? The author's brain needs an IQ card, otherwise the IQ card will be in arrears.

It feels like the protagonist is the Great Holy Mother,

This can't be finished without Chapter 20

Although it's just a low-key number, the rhythm is well grasped and the conflicts are also very good.

.0 1380.

Why is today's new chapter 561 followed by 564, and what are the two chapters in the middle?

I had already redeemed chapter 564 with point coins the night before yesterday. Why do you want me to redeem it again this morning?

Why do you want to charge for a novel like this? These small details are not rigorous at all. Others pay to see it.