Time Travel at the Same Time: I Can Return to My Origins

Marvel has collaborated with many comics such as Godzilla and Ultraman. Ghosts play tricks on people. Invincible Boy is just like the setting of the Marvel universe. The thoughts of all intelligent life can become a universe protagonist. Can you build a Marvel-specific Rick and Morty interdimensional teleportation gun to travel to those universes?

What is simultaneous time travel

I saw that there is a person in the profile. In the following article, be careful not to brag about one person's combat prowess or to be treated like a dog by Tong Tong. The Eight Magic Skills mechanism for one person is completely inferior to Harry Potter, so there is no need to brag about it too much.

It doesn't lower the intelligence and suppress the combat power, it doesn't start with Douluo Gui Mie, it's a good book.

I'm curious, is the talent stream suitable for special photography? After all, the current trend is to coexist: coexist with Humaggia, coexist with future people, coexist with sugar people...

It hit the ceiling at once. Sharing immortality is too simple and more convenient than the Eight Wonders. I don't know if the Eight Wonders are used in other places. If they can be used, they are not as good as a place where there are real gods.

It's too messy. The subject of same-traveling has been developed for so long. It stands to reason that there are already many outstanding cases with good results that can be used for reference. However, this book still touches on most of the pain points of same-traveling. For example, the story is too short, with four or five chapters in one world, resulting in the stories in each world being incomplete and sparse. Normally, the protagonists of one world are written continuously, and then the next world is changed until a story phase ends. For example, in Harry Potter, it usually ends with the end of the first school year or the killing of Voldemort on Quirrell. In this way, the stories of the protagonists in other worlds will be more rounded. Second, the protagonists came out too quickly. Even though they are from the same time, we cannot add two or three more protagonists every two or three chapters. Even within one chapter, there are five more protagonists from different worlds. It is too fast. , Although the author did not devote much writing to the protagonists in the e-sports world of Kings, but in contrast, the protagonists of popular dramas such as Harry Potter alone did not write much, so that it felt that everyone's sense of existence was quite similar, and the characters were difficult to say distinct. It is difficult to say that their respective plots were complete. The sense of existence was basically the same, and it was difficult to distinguish the priorities. Thirdly, it is already a big irritation that the protagonists wear the same costume. However, the idiosyncrasies such as Guiyuan have also been adjusted. However, the idiosyncrasies have been adjusted and are basically useless except for the plot in the first few chapters. It is purely redundant. I think, in the final analysis, the novel still depends on the development of the plot. Time travel means that the time traveler relies on plug-ins to rise in a different world, make up for regrets, change the plot, and collect a harem. Readers are not here to read a whole book that dryly displays how many protagonists and plug-ins are there, but does not implement the plug-ins into reality and reflect them in the plot, and does not give the protagonist how much plot to develop. They come to read the plot instead of the setting collection. The word count is still short at present, and there may be opportunities to make up for it. If we don't pay attention to these pain points in the future, the future of this book will be bleak.

The biggest impression of this book is just one word, tired. I am tired of reading. The author cannot briefly describe the settings in concise language. He uses a lot of proper nouns and memes without considering whether the readers have extensive knowledge. There are always some parts that are incomprehensible to everyone. The author is also tired of writing. He has written a lot of things and released all he wanted to write. Then what? The words are crowded together, and the writing style is missing. The exhausting energy is used in the opposite direction, and the more I write, the more I regress. There are also some very explicit dark and tragic stories. You wrote them directly without wrapping them in a humorous style. Do you find it interesting? A hell joke must first be a joke. The biggest failure of the soul ferry chapter is this. It starts with hell. I didn't even bother to read it for a second, so I just skipped the whole chapter. (Tongchuanliu can't watch this kind of thing. Misery must have a bottom line. It's boring if it's too miserable. It needs to be packaged with some sugar.) To summarize: I don't want to watch a pure setting, and I don't want to watch a tragedy (hell jokes don't matter). Make it a good job, don't make it a bad job, and add some funny factors to lubricate it. It's really the magic weapon of doujin. If it's too dry, it's boring.

The writing style is average. It can be seen that there are many ideas, but the writing power is not enough to write them down.

They are all jokes, incomprehensible, and we are very patriotic. We read novels to vent ourselves when we are tired from life. Why do novels have to brainwash us? They also criticize us, and there are a lot of memes. If you are positioned as a minor, they will still understand what you mean, but we are so confused. What the hell are you talking about? 😅😅

Your world is too messy. Is it necessary to write about an unnecessary garbage world...

The beginning is okay, but there are too many memes later on, many of which I have never seen before. After reading a few of them in a row, I don't know what they are talking about 😅

It's over

Sometimes the memes are too dense, and the circle of some memes is not large enough for readers to understand. I saw a lot of comments about this problem. The author planned it, and it affects the perception.

The writing is a bit messy, the coherence is average and it is a bit difficult to read. There is still a big gap with Feng Chaohuang 🙂 Come on

There are a lot of private goods and a lot of jokes. People who don't understand will find it more uncomfortable.

The world is too chaotic, with hammers in the east and in the west

The plot is so boring recently 🙂

The author's writing is very exciting, but it is obvious that he has no plot of his own design and is always playing tricks. It feels difficult to finish the book, and even in the middle period, it is difficult to write it.

Stop writing to make yourself happy. Just write a little bit and then talk to yourself and throw out a bunch of jokes. It's so exhausting to read. (Representing only personal views)

Fuck, it's been almost a month, Shangxiang

Did you run away? QQ groups have been disbanded

Obviously I'm still looking forward to the Armored Warrior copy. If you're still alive, let me know.

It's been 5 days, brother, you won't be the same as the last book, right?

I'm very interested in the introduction, but is it still updated after 9 days? I will watch more

There are a lot of messy memes, and I'm a little tired of reading them.

Simultaneous Travel: Inherit the Copy of Ten Thousand Realms

Still writing? I won't write the rest and won't pursue it either.