If You Start with a Bow, Your Equipment Will Become Stronger.

Can you find a reason to merge the protagonist's name? ? ? Who is this? Who is this? Who is this trouble? The protagonist finds an event to identify himself with, and no one calls the protagonist by his last life name, and readers don't care what he was called in his previous life. What is the reason for insisting on two names?

If Shennong is here, why don't you try it here💩?

How should I put it, all kinds of sensational plots are starting to come out. We readers are here for the plot, not the sensationalism. The sensationalism you wrote may also be good in your opinion. But it looks awkward to us. I was so embarrassed that I almost picked my feet.

Overall, it is a rough novel. It seems that the author wants to tell the story in depth, but the fact is that there are a lot of self-monologues and dialogues between the protagonist and the novel. It is even very abrupt to write the conspiracy corner directly after the end of an event 😅. Although the first few chapters (only a few chapters away from revealing the conspiracy corner) are written with the protagonist's self-monologue, "it seems that There is a conspiracy", but the content of Chapter 133 is really too trivial Mainly I feel that the protagonist has a lot of self-monologues (it looks like the author is explaining why the protagonist does what he does 😥), and there is almost no description of the character's psychological details, such as some of the character's small movements, expressions, and tone In short, the feeling after reading this novel is that it is white.

I have just read the fifth chapter, and it is hard to imagine that a book written at the end of 2025 could have so many common sense errors, such as the fierce man who eats black bread to maintain his health, shoots a bow for an hour continuously, and the "hurry march" for hundreds of meters with his own bedding and is out of breath. There are countless problems.

There are too many poisonous points, and the plot is too vague. When something happens, he will chatter and talk back and forth, touch his nose at all times, talk to himself with a golden finger, shout out during a sneak attack, and even though he has been framed, he uses psychological activities for several pages and then chooses to forgive.

I would like to make a small suggestion and feel free to adopt it or not. Considering that a large number of swordsmanship and archery skills are unclear recently, it is better to change archery to archery. Firstly, there will be fewer typos, and secondly, it is also a naming convention. When we say that the bow and horse are skillful, we do not say that the archery and horse are skillful. In addition, according to the protagonist's recent rhythm of farming dragon blood/dragon vein kobolds, shouldn't he be able to make up a few groups of dragon tooth arrows? Can the teeth of the dragon vein dog be used as an upgraded version of the dragon tooth arrow? I feel like the author has forgotten this setting😅😅😅😅

Then after the protagonist upgrades his equipment to a magical outfit, and I steal all the equipment while he is taking a shower, won't he return to before liberation?

The following is based on my current feelings after reading Chapter 40 (I opened a small account because I have works under a large account to avoid people saying that I am attracting traffic): I saw a lot of criticism of this book in the book review area, so I couldn't help but want to talk about my views on this book. This book is undoubtedly a Chinese fantasy novel. World view setting: It is a mixed world view with fighting spirit and magic, mixed with some traditional Western fantasy such as Ranger Druid. The character design of the protagonist: It is not very different from the character design of mainstream fantasy novels on the market today, whether it is the cautious type of the Western Genre style or the sultry succubus type of the Nigen style. The protagonist of this book gave me the feeling of being childlike. The protagonist's thoughts are very simple and straightforward. The behavioral logic in many places is not that of a fully mature adult who has experienced social beatings, but like a reckless boy (of course, the author did not indicate the protagonist's age in the previous life in the article, only saying that the previous life was time traveled while eating hot pot and singing, so naturally he may be a teenager or a boy). Of course, many people will definitely feel a little stupid. This feeling is very similar to the martial arts novels I read before, or the time traveler in the ancient fantasy novels long ago. Like it or not, it depends on the individual. Writing style: Very simple and light. And there are a lot of colloquial expressions, and some places lack sentence breaks. This is a point I think the author can optimize. Even if you want to maintain your own writing style, you must properly break some sentences that should be broken. So combined with his writing style and the character of its protagonist, I define it as a Chinese fantasy novel. The above is where I think it is more controversial. Then I think the best thing about it so far since I saw Chapter 40 is the plot rhythm. The plot rhythm is very tight. On the basis of being able to accept Chinese fantasy, I didn't feel jerky or boring after watching it in one go. Overall, for my taste, I would rate it 75 points. Of course, as I said before, if you want to know the taste of peaches, just try it yourself. My suggestion is to give it a try, if you don't particularly mind the controversial points I mentioned above. Oh, another point is about the name of the protagonist. How should I put it, I felt a little awkward at first. But his writing style and his name, after looking at them for a long time, really don't feel particularly out of the ordinary. Because its overall descriptive feel is not that of Western fantasy or Japanese fantasy. In short, this point is similar to what I said in the first point. It depends on whether you can accept the feeling of Chinese fantasy.

This can be ranked at the top, the Western Fantasy layout is really terrible

Can you imagine? Each paragraph has the name of the protagonist Wu Wei. When talking to the character, the opposite name is Maas. The protagonist himself calls himself Wuwei. His mental activities are still the same name as in his previous life. I really can't stand this kind of schizophrenia. The name is also the same as the name of the dish. The name is enough to persuade. Retired, doing nothing, no wonder there are so many bad reviews, Tomato, the two pictures in front of you have to go away. At your level, you can still survive until it is put on the shelves without being cut off. I don't know how so many people like to eat it. It is no exaggeration to say that if you can put more than 8.0 In tomato on this thing, you are considered awesome 😅

Let me complain, why do others call the protagonist Mas, but my own name is Wu Wei? Also, this book is completely written in the style of fantasy and martial arts, and has nothing to do with Western fantasy swords and magic.

Generally speaking, it is average. The author's plot arrangement has a big problem. What the protagonist wants comes out on its own within five chapters. Once or twice is fine, but more times will seem too stiff. I know that the author wants to write about fledgling adventurers, but readers don't want to read it. I suggest that the author be more thorough if he wants to write a refreshing article, and not forcefully add things that seem very deep. . That kind of writing is not at your current level.

The protagonist's brain feels like it's been gnawed by rats. He doesn't look like a time traveler or a normal person at all.

It should be said that it is quite a pity. It is obviously written about the golden finger of the equipment column, which is more enjoyable, but it is written about Western fantasy that cannot keep up with the times, and it is still the kind of ancient times. The equipment cannot be automatically invisible, hidden or similar to the space grid. It has to be worn on the body, and he has to give conditions and must meet the conditions before it can be worn. It can be worn without any conditions, but it is too vague and the effect is relatively low.

It will be free soon, but it doesn't look good and is poisoned.

I feel like this book is not the same as the previous book. It says it's an equipment system but it doesn't show that the equipment has much effect. It says it's a skill flow that depends on equipment. The Western Fantasy flow has an oriental charm.

1. The plot is okay, not too cliché, nor particularly novel 2. The author has very poor common sense and feels like a city boy who doesn't eat the fireworks of the world. Especially an arrow that pierces a wild boar? Is this a recurve bow? Or a mechanical bow? (I came to complain after seeing this) 3. The writing style is okay. As long as it does not involve professional knowledge, it is quite comfortable to read. 4. The original name of the protagonist and the name after time travel are reversed back and forth. Many book friends have said that they just don't change it and they are very speechless. I would give it a 3.5 Out of 5 points, counting food and grass. You can see, of course, the more realistic data party lightning protection! The poison spreads quickly!

One hundred chapters later, the protagonist's personality seems to have become distorted. . . People are like weeds, you can kill them if you want. . . It's a bit bt, so I won't watch it anymore

The narration in this form at the beginning is a story narration, not a novel. A novel is a novel and a story is a story. Novel should focus on creating characters rather than narrating storylines. This form at the beginning is a typical narration of the storyline, rather than shaping the image of the mission characters. Writing in the form of a novel should mainly use the first perspective to explain the world view, rather than the third perspective to explain the background of the story.

After reading some of everyone's comments, they all said that the poisonous points are obvious, but I don't think the problem is too big, including sensationalism, that is, sensationalism before leaving the novice village. Generally speaking, it can be seen

I have discovered a pattern. Generally speaking, novels that end with an exclamation mark usually don't get good grades, even if they understand everything.

After reading it, I can sum it up in two words: dry! The plot unfolds too fast, like a running account, and is not chewy.

When a student learns to swim, the coach asks the student to go into the water to feel it first. The student goes directly into the water and then gets cramps. The student relieves the cramps and comes ashore without drowning. The coach says not to blindly trust anyone in the future. What do you think of my analogy?

I didn't expect it to end so quickly.

After reading a few chapters, the protagonist feels like a baby who hasn't grown up yet. He's wearing everything, so what else is there to be pretentious about?

The grammatical errors in the title of the book make me not believe in the author's literary quality🥲

Mortal: Start from the game store

The biggest problem is that it is written like a game. It can be a cheat for the game, but it cannot treat everyone like an NPC game.

The background feels pretty good, but there is something wrong with the plot. The two names are even weirder. It's not bad for me as a reader, nor is it bad for this novel. Change 😜