From Republic

Bro, I accidentally saw this article. Did you write so much on a single machine? Have perseverance. I also thought about writing a novel, but it took me three to four or five hours to write 2,000 words. I still had no ideas but didn't write them out. I have read the first four chapters of your novel. If you just want to express the story in your heart, then you can write whatever you want. If the author wants to sign a contract with Qidian and make some money by writing novels. I have some opinions as a reader who wants to write novels, and they may not be correct. Just listen to them. After all, I have never written a novel or signed a contract. I am just a reader. First of all, the story is too slow. I only read the first two chapters and I didn't know what kind of novel it was. The monster didn't appear until the third and fourth chapters. Secondly, there are too few paragraphs, and there are many paragraphs of more than 400 words. Although the web article is not divided into one sentence and one paragraph, your paragraph is too long, and one paragraph takes up the space of a mobile phone page. The detailed description is also too long-winded. For example, the items carried by the protagonist are written out one by one. The accessories of firearms are simply a long paragraph of several hundred words. There is basically no plot advancement, it's all about various details. But the sentences are fluent, which is pretty good. Although it's too late to say now, I think it's impossible to generate one with AI. Finally, I would like to ask the author whether the update is to save the manuscript or something else. Looking at your chapter list, there are times when there are more than ten updates a day, and I can write so much. I want to write a novel, but only one chapter takes several hours 😭. Did the author use AI? If I had written it myself, this update would be as fast as a web article. If you learn how to write online articles well, you will have a promising future. Finally, let me reiterate again, I am just a reader, and what I say may not be correct. Come on, persevering author.

Published in 2025, in November, in less than a year, I have written more than 1.5 Million words, which is really amazing