Doomsday Invasion of Online Games

What can be written in one sentence has to be written in 10,000 words😿😿😿😿😿 It's so long-winded and tiring to read

Rebirth articles are about foresight that can bring you a sense of satisfaction. You have so many surprises before you even get out of the novice mission, so what's the use of your rebirth?

If you use AI, it is recommended to use it sparingly and look for the plot in the adjectives.

They are all reborn, and there are so many explanatory texts. There are 8 pictures of the place of resurrection.

After reading Chapter 14, I feel like I don't want to read anymore. There are too many useless modifiers in the text, and the plot advances very slowly in terms of content. The biggest problem is that what I encounter after rebirth are all accidents, and there is no prophet.

It's an all-time classic, online games, rebirth, the only special profession, but the problems are the same as those 20 years ago. It can't even be considered a Renaissance, because there is no progress at all. I always feel that as an author, at least when writing a certain type of work, and this type is very old-fashioned, you have to be a little innovative and progressive, even a little bit?

Being so verbose should be the limit of the author, not the limit of AI, right?

Fifty percent of the plot in one chapter, the rest is all expanded using AI

Many settings are really unreasonable. When a doctor changes his profession, he needs a spider mother's poison sac before the boss explodes. The boss is also reserved, and many materials can only be collected by collectors, which will be very expensive later.

Every chapter has the same problem, with almost 5-60% of it being adjectives. Whether it's the environment, objects, or actions, it's like writing a story and adding a bunch of adjectives to increase the number of words. It's really uncomfortable to read. Should the author consider changing it?

This is a pile of words. AI won't be so verbose. Let's polish the writing.

There are so many inner dramas, it's all nonsense

You can challenge the boss alone, but you still think that you are a master of the broken starry sky (beast master), a warrior, a magician, etc. The power is your own, no better than your broken beast.

The author has a criminal record, and several of her books were written by AI, 😡

I've read a few chapters and can't stand it anymore. There are too many adjectives, some of which are exaggerated and inappropriate.

How did the author manage to make the preface and postscript irrelevant? Repeating water is fine. The debuff of Abyssal Erosion disappears in two hours 24 hours a day. If you use it up to five times every two hours, it will be over. How do you count five times a day?

A common problem with online game writing is that I have read it too much. Apart from the different backgrounds, the pretentiousness of the plots are all the same, and there is no freshness at all. Readers who have not experienced the explosion of online game writing in the past ten years will still continue to read it.

Come on, there are very few new works on this subject 🙂

Don't be a beast master, that's rubbish

One BOSS chapter, but the plot doesn't move at all? If I remember correctly, Chapter 65 was about three days in real life? !

Come on💪

Just not enough to see.

I haven't had anything good to read about online games for a long time. The writing is not bad. Come on, the author, and get through the initial difficult period.

From Novice Village to K3 base, it is 15 kilometers at one time and 30 kilometers at another time. There are all kinds of regrets and spoilers. Just take a look. How about you?