I, Kaido, Stay Offline!

There are contradictions. In the third picture, he defeated a lieutenant general, and then in the sixth chapter, he asked Whitebeard to teach him how to become stronger. But the problem is, didn't he return to his childhood with memories of Kaido at his peak? Moreover, during the Warring States Period, he was just a lieutenant general. How did he become a general?

The introduction alone doesn't have much appeal. Author, you have to write about the protagonist's advantages. If you just read the introduction, you can't tell how the protagonist dominates the world. Is there any cheat? Isn't it because you want to rely on the power of the pirate system to fight against the fate of the pirate world?

After reading it, overall it's pretty good. The portrayal of Kaido is okay, but there are some problems with other members of the Rocks Pirates, especially Rocks himself With the update of the plot of the Valley of the Gods, the image of Rocks has basically been confirmed, which is consistent with the author's portrayal in the article. Some conflicts feel a bit disconnected for readers who continue to follow the plot The second is the issue of the timeline. The Rock Pirates moved into the hive when Kaido was young; the navy admiral at that time was Cyborg Sky One, and Sengoku Garp was only a lieutenant general, etc. Let's see if the author will revise it in the future.

It's poisonous. Later, he adopted two girls as daughters, completely found two fathers, and the protagonist became a nanny.

What does it mean that his precious daughter is endowed with extraordinary talent, tough heart and noble ghost bloodline? That is too noble. A good fantasy beast breed must be a general's strength for him, so if Lunaria doesn't cherish it, he can waste it and deal with the pterodactyl at will, right? How can Jhin, a subordinate, deserve good things and the things he deserves for his precious daughter, right?

Oh, I have prepared two phantom beasts for you two babies. You are a baby girl who is as energetic as a forest elf. Did you owe your daughter a debt by writing an article to make up for it?

Please note that the protagonist takes in two daughters, and the nanny feels the same way. He saves Jhin in advance. In no case is the setting that Jhin has already eaten the fruit. The stubborn Pteranodon can't get through it. I don't understand. If Jhin can't save 15 years in advance, you just say he ate the useless fruit. If you can accept the waste of Jhin's fruit, continue reading. These two daughters can't stand it at all.

I feel that the combat power is a bit low. Kaido fought hard against the three generals of the Navy in Dressrosa. According to the combat power, Im T0, Rocks T1, Harald Roger Cap T1.5, Yonko, Zefa T2 in his peak period, and Sengoku Akainu Kizaru Aoji. The three generals should be T2.5. A Kaido who awakened the Blue Dragon Fruit should also be T1.5. When Luffy fought Kaido, he had not awakened the Blue Dragon Fruit yet. Kaido was so domineering. I feel like something is wrong with my fighting strength.

When Admiral Sengoku spoke of his ideals of justice, I couldn't help but want to laugh. He has become an Admiral, but he still doesn't understand the dark side behind the world government. He also said that he wanted to return to the new world for the sake of the people, so he would not treat himself as a soldier who knows nothing. This is too ironic 😜😜😜

It would be great if Kaido could eat two fruits

You Kaido's strength is quite fascinating. He can carry three generals in front of him, but he is overwhelmed by the giant king's momentum behind him. Do you look down on the three generals or do you overestimate the Giant King?

The sauce is here, bubbling here

The AI ​​flavor is too strong, and the combat descriptions are "empty", "big" and "empty".

I can't stand it anymore, I've become a slave to my nanny and my daughter.

Can 300,000 words be put on the shelves? Curious

Repeat the chapter and get 20 points from me

Please remove the label "Invincible Flow", thank you

Not bad, it would be better to update and mention some more